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People say it always happens to the good ones. I believe this statement to be true.
EPOW.
It was three days since Charlie had died of an animal attack, Bella was distraught, and she thought it was a vampire. But which? Nothing I could say or do could bring her beloved father back. What should I do, just sit and rub small circles into the low of her back. Or tell her everything was going to be ok, even though it evidently wasn't.
We sat in the porch of her house. She sat next to me on the doorstep; her head leant against my shoulder. I'd never seen her like this. Is this how she was when I left her? I'm a monster. How could I do this to my darling Bella? I couldn't: fact.
I slowly moved and I heard a low rumbling groan release for Bella's throat.
"Just stay a little longer" she almost pleaded.
"Bella, honey, I will be back in a couple of hours. I have to hunt. I can't bare to leave you like this. I will get Alice, ok?"
"NO!" she protested. "I will be ok; just don't be long. I love you."
"Yes, I promise. I love you too." I spoke. Then I kissed her lightly on the lips, holding just a little too long, so she knew I didn't want to go. Then I rose from the front step and walked to my car. I turned back to see a face I didn't like to see. My Bella: troubled.
BPOW.
I hated it when he left. It felt as if the whole in my chest was back. A feeling I hadn't felt since he left me. I flinched at the thought. I loved Edward, and when he was gone the world stopped. But now it is ten times worse. Dad was gone.
To help soothe the pain I decided I would get myself showered and dressed, something I was ashamed to admit I hadn't done in a while.
I got up from the porch step, and trundled inside. The house was eerily quiet, dad's gun hung in its usual place and without question his shoes were placed directly underneath. What was I going to do with them, before I had time to wonder, I carried on to the stairs and up them.
When I walked past my room, I noticed something, something strange. I walked in and noticed it was tidy, unusually tidy. I walked over to my desk and there was a note.
'To my Darling Bella.
When you read this I will probably be hunting. Just so you know when you feel asleep this morning before we sat outside, I tidied your room. I have left you some little presents around the room. Find them, you will need them.
All my love Edward x'
He was such a thoughtful person. So was Charlie, wait, Edward must have written this to stop me crying. He only wanted the best for me.
So I began my search. All the time I was thinking a mixture of my Dad, and why did I need presents? The first present I found was wrapped in a small purple box with a white bow holding the wrapping in place. My two favourite colours. I carefully un-did the ribbon, to open the box and find... a key? Why would I need a key? I thought maybe the other presents would explain the key, but, they didn't. The second (wrapped in this time red and white) was a little bracelet with a charm of a little diamond love heart. He was so caring. And the third, a tooth-brush? Hmm, this was a little weird, these lovely beautiful presents and a toothbrush? Charlie would have laughed.
"Stop it!" I thought to myself, find the other presents. Then I found it, I found the present I knew he'd been dying to give to me.
Oooh, read on to find out what happens next (: