Hi, so this is a story I have been writing for about two weeks now and I definitely can't keep it to myself forever so I've decided to post it and TRY to update once a week! Please review and tell me any places to improve on! I don't own divergent or any of its characters.

"Zeke, give me my cake back!" I look at Zeke who currently has his face stuffed with my glorious cake. He grins at me, "Why should I Trissy?" I smirk at him and act as if I'm going to punch his face, being Zeke he falls for it and I punch his stomach instead. Cake flies out of his mouth and I grin at my delicious revenge. Even though he is 16 and I'm 14 he is still one of my best friends.

Suddenly a large crash and scream wakes me up from my enjoyable moment. I look at Zeke who is looking at me with the same expression of shock and fear. I begin to get off my dull-stormy-grey bed however Zeke pulls my arm before I can go anywhere. "Bea, you don't know what happened. It's not safe, ok? I'll call the police." I look at him, now with anger and frustration. "Would you stay if it was your family? You would go downstairs too." His face looks grave and he sighs. He slides off the bed and let's go of my whiter-than white arm and we sneak downstairs.

I look into my dining room once full of antique velvet chairs and a dark oak table now empty and lonesome. I walk on into the living room and what I see shocks me. The grey walls that once gave a feeling of home and comfort are now splattered dark red. Suddenly something black catches the corner of my eye. It's a man with greasy jet-black hair and he has my brother in his arm. Before Zeke or I can stop myself I shout at the man, "Get you dirty hands off my brother!" Zeke begins shouting my name but something cuts him off. A small silver object breaks through the air with a small wizz. A bullet. And soon enough it found its target. In my shoulder.

It burns. The pain is incruciating and I force myself to close my eyes and run away from all the pain. Then black.

(I'm not mean enough to leave this as a cliffhanger for long)

I try opening my eyes. A bright light just replaces the darkness I have felt for the last 5 minutes of being conscious. I close my eyes swiftly. I hear a laugh from beside me, "pretty bright, Bea, isn't it?" Caleb. "Caleb? Where are we? What happened?" Suddenly a burst of pain explodes in my shoulder. I wince and try not to scream or cry. Caleb seems to notice. "Beatrice, don't try moving your shoulder or your leg because otherwise you might end up hurting more." I play his words over in my head and I still have no clue what he means. "Beatrice, let me tell you what happened and just don't move your leg or shoulder." I do what he says and get ready to listen, my eyes now open and see that I'm in a white room with two beds, turning my head to Caleb I listen.

"So while you and Zeke where laughing and talking about whatever weird joke you were laughing about, me, mum and Dad where sitting in the living room. Mum emailing someone, Dad filling out papers and I was just reading that book I like at the moment, you know the distopian one with factions and stuff?" (Lololololol) I roll my eyes at my Erudite brother. "Suddenly, this group of men in black clothes blew up the wall. Literally. I think they used a grenade or something. Mum screamed and was knocked out straight away. I watched them hit her the gun. Then Dad tried punching one of them but they tasered him. They gagged me and slung me over their shoulder. They were about to climb through the gap in the wall until you came in. Oh Beatrice, they shot you in the shoulder and leg. One tried to gag Zeke but he kneed him where the sun don't shine and got away. Bea, I watched Mum, Dad and you get hurt enough to be knocked out and I never could get that out my head. I tried screaming and they ended up having to taser me too."

I look at him. I think the shock and fear is evident on my face because he tried to smile. A few minutes later some men enter the room. One with dark brown hair and mossy green eyes the other is the man who shot me. Hatred fills every single inch of my body and they smile. They just smile. And I begin screaming. I shout and scream till my throat is raw but I keep going. Until they pull my mother into the room and hold a gun to her head. "Shut up!" I do as he says and silent tears run down my face. He smiles again, "Good, now don't do it again!" And he throws my mother into the wall.

Her beautiful emerald eyes open and smile at me. She stops moving from then onward and I do nothing. Nothing. Because I am a coward. I am selfish. And I killed my mother.

I am sorry for anyone who actually likes this story but please review and tell me if its good. Sorry for short chapters if this story is enjoyed I might do longer chapters in the future. Thank you for reading see you next chapter people! Xxx