(Everyone always comments on Starkit's Prophecy because it's awful. Well, I found another awful story that's probably not as well known. I PERSONALLY THINK IT'S EVEN WORSE THAN STARKIT'S PROPHECY NO OFFENSE TO THE AUTHOR I'M SURE YOU'RE A GOOD PERSON)
(my comments will be in parentheses and italics)
(And the torture begins! :3)
hi thes is my furt story no flemz plex bexuc if u flem tha menie (I CAN BARELY EVEN READ THAT HELP)
shes butiful sed camrared (...is that supposed to say Camerared...? Wonderful name. *claps*) "i agre luk at hur iz she cut" sed glassfly (...Glassfly? *claps harder* YES YES YOU'RE ALREADY TORTURING US) "watz hur nem its moonkit and aidkit becuz aidkit is uly end moonkit is butiful she shud be leder (YOU CAN'T JUST HATE ONE OF YOUR KITS BECAUSE THE OTHER ONE IS PRETTIER UGHH I'M ALREADY SO FRUSTRATED WITH THIS) camarared nedded in agremen end sed "i wil get spotstar spotstar wil mek hur leedr if net we kil hur becuz moonkit is the cat in the profaci i kno becuz i am the MEDINCIEN CET!"
(DID YOU JUST SAY YOU ARE GOING TO MURDER THE CLAN LEADER IF A KIT DOESNT REPLACE HER)
(AND SUDDENLY THERE IS A PROPHECY THAT NO ONE MENTIONED)
(AND HOW DO YOU IMMEDIATELY KNOW THE ANSWER TO A PROPHECY)
(*throws computer*)
OMG cliffhenger! i hop u eniod plez reviw butt if u flem then dont reviw becux u r men. (that...does that even count as a cliffhanger...?)
(Anyways I hope you enjoyed my reaction, BECAUSE THIS IS ABOUT TO GET A LOT WORSE)
(seriously I hope you like it I'm torturing myself for you XD)