1:37 am- badguy planit.

Halo is troubel sleepping; having. BAD dreams is bad when a soldier in space. halo had bad dream and cnt make sleep much more tonite. so he keeps awake, halo is watch gard at 2am so he has to stay wake;

1:56 am

Travis is back frm watch, "halo time to watch!" he says and travis sleep and halo go to watch

2:25 am

Haloo is is in watch chair looking for badguys,, he noes ther are alians. but he cant see them. no one seen any alians since arive on badguy plant. but they no they are there, halo hears the bushs. ALIANS he think. "I MUST KILL ALIANS BEFORE ALIANS KLL" halo looks at his, halo gunn. number say ten so it is good for go. Halo walks at bushs,

2:28 am

halo get at bushs but, nothing. "WHERE IS THE ALIANS"

2:30 am

halo is have flahs back when he was orphan being adopt by marines.

"this won will be good marine" says genral marine " he wil, be good fighet"

Halo was sad boy because orphan and no friends and forced to marine. very mas about being ABANDON!1

Halo say; "Wen i am marine. i wil never abandon; like parants did."

2:36 am

Halo fall sllept

2:40 am

alians come and kill all marine; because halo wwas not look aout bcause asleep and not watchng there are big tradegy. Halo is wake up and hear this. in panik; haol goes back to camp and uses halo gun til mumbers say 0 then he usd halo fist to kil.

:50am

allAlians are dead by halo and hao noes he will get metal of honor for kiling; but he aslo know that he let down ALLthe men. just, like is dad that died and mother that left to be with REDMAN let Halo down. It was y halo cahng his name from Superwonder to Halo. He hated parents.

3:00am

Halo decides revenge on mother for RADEMPTIN leting; soldiars die