So as you guys can see, I decided to redo my story. Nothing has changed except for some grammatical mistakes, or as many as I can catch at the moment, and some minor details.
Disclaimer: Nothing belongs to me as of yet, so all credit goes to James Patterson and Stephanie Meyer
Renesmee stroked the smooth diamond bright facets, then laid her arm next to Bella's. Her skin had just a faint luminosity, subtle and mysterious. Nothing that would keep her inside on a sunny day like Bella's own glowing sparkle. She touched Bella's face, thinking of the difference and feeling disgruntled.
"You're the prettiest" Bella assured her.
"I'm not so sure I can agree with that" Edward said and Bella turned to answer him, the sunlight on his face stunned her into silence.
Jacob had his hand in front of his face, pretending to shield his eyes from the glare "Freaky Bella" he commented.
"What an amazing creature she is" Edward muttered, almost in agreement as if Jacob's comment was meant as a compliment. He was both dazzling and dazzled.
Out of nowhere it began to drizzle, their magical moment forgotten. The sudden change had everyone frozen in surprise, till Renesmee started laughing. With no reason to frown when her baby girl was laughing, Bella joined in. Soon everyone was either laughing or smiling with them. Smiling, Renesmee ran around the clearing.
Bella stood up and faced her husband. "She beautiful"
"Just like you" Edward said wrapping his arms around her.
"You guys are sick" Jacob said taking his eyes off Renesmee for the first time in a long time.
Bella started to answer when Renesmee's laugh suddenly cut off.
Instantly everyone looked towards her. Bella froze. There standing at the edge of the clearing by the trees was a man less than 15'Ft from Renesmee, partly concealed by the shadows. He stood around 6'5Ft, with a lean body structure. He had mid back length midnight black hair in a ponytail, and a dark olive complexion. He wore black boots, dark torn jeans, black muscle shirt, black leather jacket, and sunglasses that hid his eyes. He looked about 20 or 21.
It seemed like an eternity, as they stared at each other, but all to soon, the stranger moved, taking a step closer to Renesmee.
Jacob and Edward growled as he took another step, now 13'Ft from her. Then the Cullens gasped as someone else emerged from the trees.
A girl around the age of 20 stepped in front of a tree, and leaned against it. She had a light tan, stood to be 5'11 and had brown hair with natural blonde highlights. She wore a black windbreaker, white tank top, ripped skinny jeans, and old torn converses. Her chocolate brown eyes look around the clearing, taking in the situation. Slowly she crossed her arms, drawing their attention to her hand. Across the top of her hand was a simple yellow/white Chinese dragon, zigzagging across the top, its head resting on her wrist.
The first stranger took another step and another person walked out of the trees. And it seemed that with each step, someone else steeped out of the trees.
The one after the girl was a male around the age of 22 but her had a childish look around him. He stood a few trees away from the girl, slightly behind her. He looked around 6'7Ft, he was pale, almost as white as Bella. He had strawberry blonde hair that just about toughed his shoulders. A small gold hop hung from his ear contrasting with the paleness of his skin and clothes. He wore a white wife beater, his muscle easily seeable with the tight shirt, white baggy jeans that didn't have a speck of dirt on them and white Jordan's that were also spotless. Wrapped around his left bicep was a dragon much like the girls but a glacier blue color, and its head rested on the man's shoulder. He's slightly thick black rectangular glasses were on the middle of his nose, obviously slipping from its original position. His stunning and unusually shade of clear blue eyes calmly stared at Rosalie, causing Emmett to growl softly. The man's eyes moved to him, a smirk gracing his face.
Next was a girl, who appeared behind the pale man and leaned against him. He wrapped his hand around her, like lovers. Showing Emmett there was no need to get defensive. The girl was of African-American descent and seemed to be 19. Her curly brown hair pulled back in a ponytail. She wore short shorts, and a black halter with red glittery swirls. She seemed perfectly balanced in her 4-inch heels on the uneven ground. Her height of a natural 5'10 was now closer to 6'2. As she leaned against the man, they caught sight of a dragon, like than the man and the women's, on her back coiled up, it's color green.
The next one jumped down from the trees. He landed in front of the blonde, so lightly on his hands, feet, and knees that barely any dust rose up. But he didn't stand; he just sat back on his heels and looked up. His teenage face full of never ending mischief. He was a blonde with jaded green eyes, which had hints of grey and blue in them. His hair was beach blonde. He wore black Air Force 1's, khaki shorts, and black T-shirt and a sleeveless camouflage jacket. His dragon was a red, wrapped around his right calf.
The last one they heard before they saw her. She gave a small giggle as she skipped out of the tree's ad sat down next to the kneeling boy. It was easy to tell they were related the only difference was that she was a girl, with beautiful curly short hair while he had a buzz cut. She had baby blue eyes making her look like an angel and she was younger than him. She wore jeans, a pink tank top with pink and white vans. On her shoulder was a blue dragon, a mini one compared to the others, in a shape of a heart. A small black Scottie came running up and sat in her nap, its eyes on the family. The dog was unusual, it's eyes...They were an unusual shade of brown, so unusual that when the light hit them a certain way they looked red.
By now the stranger was less than 4'Ft away from Renesmee.
Edward and Jacob growled realizing that since their eyes were on the people they hadn't notice how close he was getting. They both started to take a step but were stopped when Bella held the back. Her actions confused them, but not as much as the words she said next.
"You came"
