I do NOT own Naruto.
In the Narutoverse, there were many
things that could have happened differently.
What if Naruto met the Kyuubi earlier than before? What if Kurama decided to give his jailer a chance to prove himself worthy of his partnership? What if Naruto succeeded? Follow Naruto on his adventures!
a/n- um….. Hello thank you for taking your time to read my story.
I am trying to keep this story as r close to reality as possible but that doesn't mean that I will write everything exactly like in canon. In this story, Naruto will not be OP. I feel that OP Naruto stories get kinda boring after some time. So, sorry folks, no Naruto giving Madara a run for his money. And, no, Sasuke will not be a jackass like many fanfics have portrayed him. I guess the only person in Konoha who will be an ass would be Danzo.
I am very surprised by how many fanfics portray Danzo, Fugaku, Hiashi and Saki as stupid asses. Or maybe I had been reading the wrong fics.
I hope that you like my first fanfiction:)
Konoha's Orange Maelstrom
Chapter 1
Ten year old Uzumaki Naruto of Konohagakure no Sato was not the type of person who likes to lose.
However that was all that he seemed to do. Lose. Today he was matched up with one Uchiha Sasuke, the so called 'last Uchiha', for sparring at the academy. And Naruto lost. Again.
Naruto just couldn't figure out what was wrong with him. He would always train his arse off but still he never was able to defeat the last Uchiha.
Naruto did however beat him once, using his patented Oiroke no Jutsu. Even though it didn't really count as a victory, it was worth dying to see the Uchiha' face as he flew back because of the flow of blood from his nose and was left on the floor gaping like a fish. However Sasuke's fanclub didn't let this go unanswered as they proceeded to chase Naruto, who, luckily found protection in the form of Iruka-sensei. Naruto still has bouts of laughter when he remembers that incident.
Anyhow, today he was beaten by his rival as he most often did, and Naruto was really frustrated. After class was over for the day, he rushed to a clearing he often trained in.
The clearing was very relaxing place by the banks of a small river. The place was surrounded by woods on all the other sides. And there in the middle of the clearing was our blond hero, wearing a black T-shirt that had a red spiral in the front a bit above his stomach and blue trousers going a bit below his knee, and wearing the green goggles that were his trademark. (Apart from the whiskers on his cheeks.)
'Why do I always have to lose? I train so hard almost everyday that I doubt even Iruka-sensei trains as much as I do. Why can't I win? Urhg! This is so frustrating!'
And so, Naruto proceeded to practice ,first with shuriken and kunai (which were blunted of course) on the trees surrounding his clearing and then practised his academy ninjutsu. He was practically a master of the Henge no Jutsu and he was starting to get the hang of the Kawarimi. But the technique that always eluded him was the Bunshin no Jutsu. No matter how hard he tried he never got the hang of it. All he would get were some floppy, dead clones that seemed to have come from the undead. He tried and tried for hours until the sun started to get low in the horizon. He had about an hour of sunlight left. By now Naruto was getting a bit tired and had blown off most of his frustration.
In an alternate timeline, Naruto would have given up and decide that he would cheer himself up with some ramen at Ichiraku's and thus lead to events happening just as in canon.
But not in this timeline. Here Naruto was convinced that the only way he was going to sleep that night was if he could assure himself that he had trained as hard as he could. And so, he proceeded to continue training with his kunai throwing. However about 20 minutes into this extended session, he heard some rustling in the bushes.
On instinct he threw the blunted kunai at whoever was there.
"Ouch!" someone screamed. Although the voice did sound familiar…. All he could tell was that it was a girl at about his age.
"Who is that?" Naruto asked.
Then he heard the sound of the mystery girl running away into the woods.
"Hey! Wait! Why were you spying on me? Stop! I promise I won't hurt you!"
Saying this he gave chase to the intruder. The intruder was very fast, to make Naruto, who even people who called themselves 'ninja' had trouble catching, run at his top speed. This intruder was obviously training to be a ninja. He ran and ran and ran at all the speed he could muster. For someone not yet a ninja to run this fast after being hit by a kunai (although a blunted one) was nothing short of astonishing.
After several minutes of chasing, he finally caught a glimpse of the person he was chasing.
'Wait a minute, isn't that-'
His thoughts were interrupted by a very strong tree hitting his head hard. Very hard. In fact, he could have sworn he heard something crack.
"Ouwwch!" He let out a feeble cry, hoping against hope that the girl he was chasing would hear him, as he faded into unconsciousness.
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A few minutes later Naruto woke up from his self induced unconsciousness.
"Man, that hurt!" He groaned, getting up while rubbing his head. Then it hit him (no pun intended). Something was amiss here. Well, everything was amiss actually. He apparently woke up in a sewer. He wondered if he was dragged in here by his 'intruder' to get revenge on him, but that didn't quite add up. Why it didn't add up? He didn't know.
'Well, if I got in here, there must also be some way out.' And Naruto set off trying to find an exit.
A few minutes later he found out two things-
1, there was no human there other than him.
2, the only thing that happened to be there was big. Very big.
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Henge no Jutsu – Transformation Jutsu
Kawarimi no Jutsu- Substitution Jutsu
Bunshin no Jutsu- Clone Jutsu
Oiroke no Jutsu- Sexy Jutsu
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Hope you liked the first chapter!
So, Naruto is going to meet Mr. You-Know-Who. And I bet it is glaringly obvious who the 'intruder' was.
Please drop in a review and tell me what you think!
I will try to post the next chapter as soon as I can! That is a promise of a lifetime! (Wait, where did I here this before…?)