Please review my story it is my first one so I need support LOL

"Tara I don't think you are capable of doing the grade 7 exam on point so I am taking them away until you show me that you can get the technique right," said Madame Rein.

Tara was very upset and went and cried in her room and then Abigail came in and Tara told her all about it but she had a little voice in the back of her head saying don't talk to Abigail she isn't nice she is a ballet fanatic and there was another voice saying yeas keep talking to Abigail because Cat is just distracting.

Tara had no idea what to do but she thought seeing as it was just the start of her ballet journey she would be friends with everyone. This was working so far until she heard Abigail talking about her in the change rooms and saying things like she should leave because she is hopeless and stuff. Tara walked in and told her she wasn't leaving even if she had to and then wacked her in the face with her point shoes it was very funny because Abigail got a blood nose.

Cat and Sammy asked Tara to come to a picnic Tara said yes which was a positive to get Abigail out of Tara's mind.

Tara was enjoying ballet altogether really and she was above Abigail in hip-hop so that was very exciting.

Well thank you guys for reading my story I will be writing more when I can be bothered!