Okay I need to know what you guys think of this tell me please! Oh! and as much as I wish it to be true, I don't own Maximum Ride. by the way tell me how you guys liked the last book, I was really mad at it! James could have made like six other books but no! he just...*sigh* I wont give the end away. but for all of you who have read it tell me if you like the ending or hated it like I do!

Chapter 1

I was standing with my back to the wall, when I spotted her. She was the most beautiful thing I have ever seen, long flowing red hair. Beautiful blue eyes that could make any man week at the knees. she was wearing a white dress that came to her knees, and black flats. she turned to me her breath visible in the dark cold air. I pushed my self from the wall and walked to on the other side of the street.

"Wha-what do you want?!" she stammered, I smiled placing some loss strands of her hair behind her ear. She stiffened at my touch. I sighed pulling back my hand,

"You know what I want Rachel." She said nothing, she just crossed her arms over her chest and looked at the ground. I placed my hands under her chin titling her head up so she was looking at me. her brown eyes searching my face. I smiled again bringing her face closer,

"Fang," She whispered closing her eyes, I brought my face closer. hesitating only a second before I brought my lips to hers. She warped her arms around my neck, and I warped my arms around her waist pulling her closer. I pushed her up against the wall pressing my body closer to her. Witch I was rewarded with a little whimper. I started kissing down her neck and she lifted her head back, I smiled and trailed my lips along her collar bone. Then back up stooping just above her lips,

"I love you," she gasped a little then I crashed my lips back onto hers,

"Cut! that's a wrap people!" The director called, Rachel pushed me off and gave me a mean look,

"There better not be a mark there tomorrow!" The she turned and stormed out off the set, I felt a pair of hands slap me on the back,

"What's up lady killer!" I turned to face a smiling Iggy, I shrugged,

"The usual," Iggy looked over at Rachel who, once she noticed him looking, glared and looked back to her agent.

"I feel bad for her agent." I laughed,

"I feel bad for anyone who come with in three feet of her!" Iggy started to laugh and soon we where both laughing like a bunch of idiots.

"That's all for today guys! See you next weekend bright and early!" Then Larry, the director, left. Iggy and I started to leave when Rachel came running bye crying. We stopped and turned to face her agent, He walked over to us resting agents the coffee table.

"What's up with her." I asked, he shook his head,

"She got canned," Iggy and I looked at each other, then back at Bob, Rachel old agent. "Yup, and now the director is out looking for a new girl to fill her part." so that's why he said next week, School was out for spring break and today was the second day of break.

"Well, now that's out of the way you guys want to come to my place I'm throwing a party with all of my high school buddies and other people I don't even know." I loved going to Iggy's parties, someone always set them selves on fire. and their were always hot girls their,

"Heck yeah!" I high fived Iggy,

"Yeah sounds like fun, but I have work to do so I can't." Then Bob pushed off the table and walked the same way Rachel ran.

"So what time is the party?"

"Seven, till whenever we all pass out drunk." I smiled the turned to leave,

"See you at seven then, Later."

"Bye!" Iggy called turning to his back to me and started hitting on one of the directors assents, I think her name is Ella or something like that. I hoped into my 2013 Black Mustang. (A/N that car is beautiful!) and sped of to my pent house apartment. Being rich and famous has its perks,

There you guys go the 1st chapter did you like was it well written! I want to know theses things! Haters welcome!