Giving Up

by MaKenzie2540

Ch1 The Fight Bella POV I turn my head towards my alarm clock. It's 9:30 am and I slept through my alarm. "Shoot," I mumble. I pull myself out of bed and shuffle downstairs to the kitchen. My mood transfers to annoyed to angry when I find Katniss sitting at the kitchen table smirking at me. "I thought you would make yourself look more appealing," she giggles.Thats when I grab her.

This is my first book so please give me constructive critism

Ch1 Lost

"Mom?" Elizabeth, my three year old daughter calls. "Where are we?" Her blonde hair waves to the side as she scans the woods we walk in.

"We're going to the closest town to get away from daddy," I respond. Ever since Elizabeth was born Robert, her father and I never got along. We would fight everyday until finally Elizabeth and I left.

She sighs and pulls out her stuffed bunny and hugs it closely to her. "I miss daddy."

I nod slightly missing him also but knowing that we had gone a long way just to go back to that evil man.

I start to hear a train, people laughing and shouting, and a car zoom by on a nearby street.

"We're almost there," I mutter. I follow the sounds with Elizabeth closely by my side. Hopefulily wherevet this place leads to it has someone Elizabeth and I can stay.

"Mommy there's no town near here," she tells me. She points to the map where we stand and unrolls the map further to show no town.

"Oh," I sigh. Knowing that we still are lost in the woods but hoping there is a town nearby, I continue to follow the sounds.