hi my name is kierra and this is my first fanfiction do go east on me and tell me if you like the story please go easy i tires thnks!

Loren's POV

Where am I , and did I just really faint in front of all the people including Eddie?Oh No! Loren sat up suddenly, she had passed out! How could she do that. She got the chance of a life time and just blew it. She heard a knock at the door thinking it was her mother but was surprised when Eddie walked in. Loren smiled and felt really embarrassed .Eddie smiled at her and wave. Loren started to blush.

Eddie: "Hey I'm Eddie, I just came to see how u were you feeling."

Loren: "Fine thank you , and sorry for embarrassing you ,I still can't believe I did that."

Eddie: "Its fine". Eddie smiled at her

Loren: (blushing)O no he gave that million dollar smile that makes you want to melt, Loren thought.

Eddie: "You wouldn't believe how many times I wanted to pass out before a concert."

Loren: (laughed) " But never on stage ,not in front of a crowd"

Eddie: " It doesn't matter you won because you were great , and Loren you were great out there"

Loren: " Thanks Eddie that means a lot coming from you" (smiling)

Eddie: " Now come on I want you to meet my pops, Jake, and friends."

Eddie grabbed my hand and we both felt a electric shock. We stood there staring into each other eyes . I never felt nothing like this in my life. What was im doing I'm dating Cameron . I let go of his hand and tired not to make eye contact.

Eddies POV

When I grabbed Loren's hand I felt a shock like never before. I was staring into her big brown beautiful eyes. They were to die for I smiled and she blushed , which I thought was adorable. I don't know wy but I wanted to know more about her , everything about her I wanted to know I had to know. In that moment I forgot about everything ,about chole. I felt guilty but got over it after I looked into her adorable eyes, and red cheeks.

Eddie: " Well letsgo dwn so you can meet jake and my dad, shall we"( opening the door for loren)

Loren: " okay" ( she said very shyly)

While downstairs…

Nobody's POV

Nora: " I hope my baby is ok, I don't know what to do because she's still my little girl"

Max: " Everything will be ok ,she will be fine"

Mel: " She better be because that is my best friend and if anything happens to her I go to kill any and everybody"( she said with her finger pointing to everybody)

Max: Comedown Mel, there's no need or that because she will be ok and I promise you that.

While they were talking , Loren and Eddie came down the stairs and stop to listen to the conversation while laughing. They finally decided to speak p and say something

Loren: " He's right Mel come down I am alright GEEZ!" ( she said while laughing)

Eddie: " Have anybody seen Chole, I want her to meet the famous and talent Loren."

Loren blushed, but she didn't want to meet Chole, to be honest but she didn't even like Chole it was something about her that didn't seem right but she couldn't put her finger on it and plus she thought that Chole didn't like her.

Eddie's POV

It seems like Loren is thinking about something but I wonder what's going n tin that beautiful head of hers. Whoo did I just say that, I don't know why but I just can't help it she is just so beautiful. I still wonder where Chole is though because I love her and she is the love of my life and I need to stop thinking about Loren!

Eddie: " Excuse me , but I'll be right back I'm going to look for Chole" ( he told everyone)

Before waiting for a response Eddie disappeared around the corner and what he saw when he turned the corner was the start of hell…..