Before this part begins
Okay, I started the first part of foreign bonds planning on doing three or four, but I've discovered that I can't stand the x-men universe, and I much prefer the naruto one, so I'm starting with what was supposed to be the second part. There is very little that you need to know from the former first part except for the fact that, at one point, Raila helped Jason and Ukobi blow up a radiation plant and she got hit with most of the radiation. If there is anything else that you find confusing, let me know. I will upload the first three chapters of Foreign Bonds Part II later on today.
I really think the story telling in general is better in this one, and I would also like the readers help on one task. I created these characters to be realistic, and I don't want them to seem Mary Sue-ish, so if you think they are like that, please let me know. I will do whatever I can to help alleviate that (although I don't think I really have that problem right now) or explain why that trait has to be there. Suffice it to say, Kai/Raila is not undefeatable, Jason is not a fighter, and Ukobi is just an idiot, which I hope is the first step to making them more normal. Also, though, Kai/Raila cannot change too much because then her background wouldn't make much sense, but I will try to keep her from being undefeatable.