Hey guys. It's me again. Here's the deal, I had to write a short story for
English class, so I based it almost entirely on Yu-Gi-Oh(not that my
teacher knows that, or anything). This is the first chapter and I swear it
gets better. I'll probably post again on Thursday and every other day from
then. My friend helped me edit this one, so it's a lot better than what I
could have done on my own. For a basic idea of how long this thing is; It
was 3.5 typed pages in size 8 Times New Roman(that really small font they
must use for fine print). Please review this so I'll know whether or not to
keep posting chapters.
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What Goes Unsaid
Jennifer walked down the path to school, thinking of excuses as to why her homework was not finished. A small noise made her jump, breaking her train of thought. 'What's that?' she wondered. She walked over to the bushes, where she thought the sound had come from. When she pushed back the branches, she found a strange lump, as if something were wrapped in the dark cloth. Jennifer looked around, to see if anyone was near, and picked up the strange lump. She was surprised to find a silver charm hidden within the cloth. It was shaped like a falcon with its wings spread and felt strangely warm to have been left in the shade. Jennifer felt a powerful urge to put the pendant around her neck. Glancing furtively around her, once again, Jennifer put her find in her pocket and ran to school.
Jennifer made it to homeroom on time for once, but she couldn't stop thinking about the silver charm. During her classes, Jennifer found that she knew the answer to every question her teachers asked the class, even though she had slept through all of her lessons the day before. 'Maybe that pendant is a lucky charm,' Jennifer thought, after answering a particularly difficult math problem.
After school, Jennifer went to the jewelry store on the corner of her street and bought a beaded silver chain to hang the charm from. As she was walking out of the store, she fastened the new chain, with the pendant hanging off of it, around her neck. Just as she fixed the clasp, Jennifer heard a voice behind her say, "Hello." Surprised, Jennifer turned to see who had spoken. As far as she knew, Jennifer had no friends and no idea of who could be calling her. She was even more surprised to find just how much alike she and the speaker looked. His was the same brown hair (if Jennifer had shorter, spikier hair), same darkly tanned skin. He was even wearing the same clothes as Jennifer. The only real difference was their eyes. His eyes were such a dark blue that they were almost black, no where near the crystal of Jennifer's eyes.
-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*- Down here I'll have the translations for later chapters(such as dedashi[deh- dah-she] means start; beginning) I think we all know I don't own Yu-Gi-Oh.
***************************************Dedashi****************************** *****
What Goes Unsaid
Jennifer walked down the path to school, thinking of excuses as to why her homework was not finished. A small noise made her jump, breaking her train of thought. 'What's that?' she wondered. She walked over to the bushes, where she thought the sound had come from. When she pushed back the branches, she found a strange lump, as if something were wrapped in the dark cloth. Jennifer looked around, to see if anyone was near, and picked up the strange lump. She was surprised to find a silver charm hidden within the cloth. It was shaped like a falcon with its wings spread and felt strangely warm to have been left in the shade. Jennifer felt a powerful urge to put the pendant around her neck. Glancing furtively around her, once again, Jennifer put her find in her pocket and ran to school.
Jennifer made it to homeroom on time for once, but she couldn't stop thinking about the silver charm. During her classes, Jennifer found that she knew the answer to every question her teachers asked the class, even though she had slept through all of her lessons the day before. 'Maybe that pendant is a lucky charm,' Jennifer thought, after answering a particularly difficult math problem.
After school, Jennifer went to the jewelry store on the corner of her street and bought a beaded silver chain to hang the charm from. As she was walking out of the store, she fastened the new chain, with the pendant hanging off of it, around her neck. Just as she fixed the clasp, Jennifer heard a voice behind her say, "Hello." Surprised, Jennifer turned to see who had spoken. As far as she knew, Jennifer had no friends and no idea of who could be calling her. She was even more surprised to find just how much alike she and the speaker looked. His was the same brown hair (if Jennifer had shorter, spikier hair), same darkly tanned skin. He was even wearing the same clothes as Jennifer. The only real difference was their eyes. His eyes were such a dark blue that they were almost black, no where near the crystal of Jennifer's eyes.
-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*- *-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*- Down here I'll have the translations for later chapters(such as dedashi[deh- dah-she] means start; beginning) I think we all know I don't own Yu-Gi-Oh.