The Lady
That is my lady hanging from the wall, looking
As if she were still alive, it is truly a marvel – the
Artist laboured seven days and seven nights without
Sleep before she was finished. Do you care to look
Upon her? You are honoured, her days pass now
Cloaked by a curtain only I have permission to
Draw away. It would simply not do to allow the
Entire world to behold her. Her smile? Indeed.
It is truly a lovely sight, is it not? It was for her
Regret that it was not I who drew out such joy
From her lips. I still recall when it was newly
Finished – I considered the view the artist
Had known her in life, fancy of course but
When I cared to listen I heard his voice pandering
Sweetly to her vanity, praising the flush in her cheeks
And the shine in her eyes. She was too easily
Gladdened by such trivialities - too taken by
Whatever flights of fantasy skimmed past.
She admired all she was shown, was merciful
To all, even the most undeserving parasites she
Could have ever hoped to attract. It is madness
(Yet alongside the absurdity truth) to consider
How such a girl, such a pathetic, anonymous
Nothing could shun my generosity so effortlessly.
The capering of fools appealed more to her than
Elevation above the stars – inane jabbering was more
Valued by her than the coaxing lilt of my own voice.
There were times I could have shaken her, shook her
Till her teeth rattled and she sobbed frantically for my
Mercy, there were other times I could have blinded all
Others in the world so no one else was able to see her.
But I chose never to loose myself to the rage, never
Bowed to her ludicrous, malformed image of me in her
Children's stories and her ghastly misshapen dreams.
It is true she was cordial towards me, well-mannered and in
No sense unpleasant to my person yet she was the same
To many. Her respect was as common as the dirt and she
Saw not the slightest need to extend her courtesy further
In my presence. A time came when she displayed me no
Courtesy at all. A time came when she ceased to see me
As anything other than a cackling, goading, pretender
– When she saw me as nothing more than words on a page.
I gave the command, and the smiles took little time to stop.
But still, such matters are past us now – and here she stands,
The champion is stood loftily above us both, is silent and still
For me. I ask that you leave us now; there remain matters
To be settled between I and my lady, there needs now to be
A time when I allow her to only smile upon me.
A/N. If anyone here is familiar with Robert Browning they may have clicked that this is an attempt to emulate a poem by him called 'My Last Duchess'. It's an excellent poem and probably the only one I can genuinely say I like from the few I've read (or in most cases, been made to.)
If anyone here is confused over the meaning it equates to that in the original poem – it's all about being in control and possession, although compared to the original narrator the one here (aka. Jareth) is hugely sentimental.
There is a fair bit of poetry on here, often of the 'Jareth/Sarah pining for each other' variety, not that it's bad, much of it is good, I just wanted to do something different so I went for as far out as I could get and drummed down a dramatic monologue.
Thanks for Nienna Telrunya for reading this through for me, and especially for telling me it was interesting, I really wasn't going to post this but I thought I'd take the plunge.
Reviews/general feedback are very much appreciated.
