A idea I just thought of 'deprived' by the crimson lord creative criticism is appreciated

A newspaper by the name of the daily prophet was all over a strange alleyway called diagon alley, under the heading was a picture of a small boy with black hair and round glasses

...todays a sad day for the potters indeed...

Today should have been a day of celebration for today is the birthday of young Adam potter who is, as of now, 8 years old. but it isn't...for it is another's birthday. young Harry James potter, Adam's twin brother, has disappeared from the potter household 1 year ago and now the ministry has called off it's search, proclaiming that young mister potter is now officially pronounced dead

How could someone of the esteemed potter house would run away on his own free will? While many different theories have been given, the most prominent came from the grand wizard albums Dumbledore , who is reported to have spent much time with harry and the one led the search, gave the most valid explanation for the disappearance. continued to the next page...

"poor child."

"kid..."

"so sad."

Xenophilius lovegood overheard all the news and sighed...he knew better


elsewhere

"WHERE IS SHE!?" mentally raged a running figure, it appears to be a fairly tall, broad-shouldered man with a long, golden-blond hair in a loose, shoulder-length ponytail with two or three loose strands of hair falling over his brow and sports a full Donegal-style beard on his square jaw wearing a white dress shirt and tie under a black vest with matching slacks and a brown overcoat. behind his glasses were 2 eyes the color of gold that were recoiled in fear "she can't!"

He is Nicolas bombastic 'van hohenheim' flamel and he is running through the town of rush valley, amestris at the dead of night in search of one of his new students and her dark intentions: she is willing to ignore the warnings of the dark taboo 'human transmutation' to bring her family back and now she will soon begin the process

He and his other student are running through the now fully grown city in search for her. he prays that one of them can find her...wait what was

"STOP! YOU CAN'T!" wait...it's him! "it's wrong! nobody ever been able to do a successful human transmutation!"

"S-SHUT UP! I CAN"T TAKE IT ANYMORE!" it's her!, hohenheim then decided to try and kick the door then...

BBBBBBBBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!

no... "NO! IT'S OPENED!" NO! hohenheim continued to hear the horrors inside "wha-WHAT"S THAT!" the door is finally broken


how did this all happened...it all started with a boy...