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Cold laughter

Bittersweet smiles

Frosted wounds

Going through denial

Lonely nights

Jealous minds

Frozen tear drops

One of a kind

Children playing

A lone soul weeping

Snow rising

A child is screaming

Attention seeker

Cause's nothing but grief

Hurtful words

Wishes he was six feet beneath

Wind is harsh

Words cut like knifes

Shattered soul

Murderer of life

Innocent mind

Hands not so much

Emperor of winter

Denied human touch

Calm storms

Raging nights

Burned by fire

Healed by ice

Snow white hair

Pale blue skin

Eyes dulled

A living sin

Sweet smiles

Good actor

Healed scars

New chapter