So this is my first ever story writen by me and I love Aj an punk together. This is my story (:

I cry and I cry, why do this happen to me? I start a new high school and he dumps me for someone else. he used to be so sweet, what happened to him. His gorgeous blue eyes and blonde hair. He dumps me because I don't go to that school no more, who does that? Well it's obvious that he never loved me as much as I loved him. I sob. I look around my room, its empty and new. I don't really look forward for tomorrow as it's time to go to my new high school, I wonder what it's going to be like? Will I make new friends? I already miss my other friends, mainly kaitlyn but its my own fault for being kicked out. I don't want to feel like I'm replacing them or anything. I will just have to find out tomorrows.

Aj dreaming
I'm dancing around a tree. "Aj." I look around theirs no one there. "Aj." I turn and I see. It's him but its not him... No he's disappearing. "Come back." I shout. He keeps on going further till I can't see him. I found it hard to talk till I can talk and my words are all mumbling together that I don't even understand what I'm saying at this point. I sob uncontrollable. Is he gone for good?

"Aj! Get up, your going to be late and we need to get there fast!" I groan, why can't I just lay in for to day? My head is dizzy like a spinning wheel going round in my head. I slowly get up. So today is the day to start over.

few minutes later

"I'm ready!" I shout from up the stairs going down them very slowly.

"Aj, hurry up! I haven't got all day." Aj's mum says.

Aj moans but does as her mother says. Getting in to the car, they were off in a speed.

"Your going to be late on your first day at a new high school. " Ajs mum whines.

"Oh well mum, it isn't like I want to go in early anyway." Putting her earphones in.

I watch out the car window to see someone jogging quickly with a black hood up and earphones shooting a cross the road not even bothering to look. He looks quite fit actually. I craned out the front window for a better view. He was jogging dead in the middle of the road.

"I don't believe this!" Mum muttered, really losing her cool. She hooted at him but he wasn't taking any notice. This guy must have some back bone.
All I could think of was how fit his back was. Guys alway look good in hoodies and shorts. What I could see of was a nice build which I'd noticed as we are getting closer. So far I can see a little of his face and it looked okay. He wasn't unshaven and he looked a little tanned. He has to be the best thing I have seen in a while.

A car flow out and approached us. Now any chance of passing him was out of the question.

My mum decided to hoot at him. All I kept hearing was her saying that we will get his self killed if he isn't careful.

My mum started waving wildly at the car to get them to slow down. So she can let them in but came to a sudden stop and mum nearly collided with the guy jogging. The guy jogging shot a glance over his shoulder and nearly did a double take, nearly landing on his frontside. It was sorta funny to watch. His face was hilarious.

" what do you think your doing!" Mum yelled at the guy.
The guy recovering him self and taking the ear phone out of his ears. I could hear the volume from the car, no wonder he didn't hear the hoots. I felt a little sorry for him. That's when he turn his attention towards me. He frown and half sided his head. My mum was stilling going on, I could tell he felt a totally prat of him self but I was killing myself - silently. He looked back at the road then at us and said sorry and went on his way but this time on the path.
I want a review on what I could do better and if you like it so far and if you have any suggestions what I should do next then pm me (: