This is my First 39 Clues so tell me what you think

I don't own the 39 Clues I do own this plot

Takes place two years after "Into the Gullet"

Comatose Visions

Chapter 1: From Perfection to disaster

Amy's POV

It was going so well if only it would have gone just as well for the last ten minutes while we made our escape, sadly fate likes to be cruel to Cahills and did not let it be so.

All of the clues hunters had decided to do a stealth mission to get info on the mysterious called the Vespers but like I said fate likes to be cruel to Cahills.

If only I hadn't gotten my foot stuck, of only I hadn't tripped, if only Ian didn't have to save me if only…if only…if only I hadn't been there, Ian would have lived.

In Amy's head

I had been running right behind the others –Dan, Natalie, Hamilton holding Sinead who had broken her ankle, Johan, Reagan, Madison, and Nellie- while running to the helicopter with the rest I had tripped Ian had stopped to help me, but by freeing my foot he also started a cave-in.

Nellie, Dan, and Natalie had stopped to help us but the closer they can the more the ground crumbled.

"Amy" Ian had said "Just remember I will always be with you and that I love you tell Natalie that I will miss her"

"Ian don't be crazy will be out of here soon" I had said back but he said "No Amy if I stay here then we will both fall the ground is to unstable for the two of us,-" then he did something very unexpected he kiss me full on the lips but when he stopped he said "Good bye Love" and let go.

I started screaming no that this could not be happening, soon Natalie's screams started blending with mine and the moment Nellie helped me out she held on tight she must have seen that I would have jumped after Ian. I saw that Dan had to half drag half carry Natalie.

This was the worst day of my life.

A/N: Ok before you all start to try to kill me

Spoiler alert Ian is not dead ok

R&R