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Disclaimer: Yu-Gi-Oh! And all the other stuff in this fic is barrowed and belongs to someone else, others, not me, people get it so don't sue me because with this disclaimer my lawyers will kick your lawyers... butts;
Warnings: yaoi/shounen ai, abuse, some ooc-ness (but I think that if this stuff really happened in the shows and stuff the characters would respond the same.. it's just other people don't think that) I'll try to keep them in character as best I can. Also this is an R fic so there's some bad lingo and stuff. At the end you may also get some tears in your eyes I almost did just thinking of the ending.
Fuller summary: when Jou and Seto see behind each other's masks they start to fall for one another. Can true love really withstand all obstacles? Even death? (A/N- not really fuller but describes a bit more.... I guess)
Couples: Jou/Seto is the main one. Some others like Yami/Hakari you can tell me others in a review if you want but my muses (that's what I call the voices in my head that give me my ideas. They have some credits already)
[#]- stuff said about the topic at the end of each chapter
Blah - hakaris to yamis
BLAH yamis to hakaris
'Thoughts'
"Talking"
- Scene change
A/N- next chapter the beginning won't be so long ok? ; Well on with the fic
On one rainy, cold morning, caramel eyes [1] eyes tried blinking their way through the rain. "Well this is great," Jou signed as more rain assaulted his eyes. Jou was right in front of the school, and for once on time (even though he had to run half of the way to get there at that time) 'at least dad isn't to stupid when he's drunk and knows that if he bruises my face or any place open in my uniform people well suspect him,' thought Jou as he turned onto the path in front of the school. But as Jou finished his train of thought he felt someone push him into the grass on the side of the sidewalk, but because of the rain, it was all muddy.
"Move out of my way mutt," Jou knew that voice anywhere. Kaiba.
"What the hell was that for bastard!" Jou yelled very pissed off like.
"Well," Kaiba started. "You were in my way so I made it so you're in your place, and you're out of the way for others. I'm just caring like that."
"Like hell you are! I only have one uniform!!!"
"It's not my fault the dog doesn't have money for more then one uniform."
"That's it Kaiba!!!" Jou was about to lunge at the older boy, but Kaiba started to walk away.
'If Jou were more like that then happy and peppy when around his friends I'd like him a lot more. I mean he looks really hot in all the mud and with that angry face on just the personality. But it's weird that he's only like that around his friends.' Kaiba's thoughts wondered and he walked in to the school looking back and the puppy caked in mud and all wet.
'If Kaiba were a little nicer and not a sadistic, bastard I'd like him a lot more. I mean he's good looking, rich, and smart.' Jou thought as he tried getting the excess mud off while running to not be late for first period.
Jou skidded into class just as the bell rang. "Jou", [2] the teacher sighed. She was use to this because she was Jou's first period. "Why are you all muddy?"
"Well you see teach. I uhh...." Jou didn't feel like ratting Kaiba out even thought he hated the guy.
"It's ok you just can't sit at your sit with all that mud on your butt." The call exploded with laughter as Jou got redder. "Please sit on the floor in front of the T.V. it's a good thing I have a towel you can sit on." She got the towel and laid it on the floor in front of the T.V. "ok class since we already took the end of the year test in this class and there's nothing else to do for the next few days before summer I decided that we could watch a movie [3]. Now these movies are all about a different culture so we aren't really off topic [4]. You know just in case the principal comes in."
The class all cheered for their good luck except Jou (who was still embarrassed about the butt thing) and Kaiba (who doesn't really care what they do because he won't be paying any attention anyways. You know he has work stuff to do. A very busy man is he). She really was everyone's favorite teacher that year.
"Now, I have picked out the movies that we can chose from. We're probably going to be able to watch all of both but you can choose the order ok? You know because the one we watch 2nd we may not be able to watch" the teacher started to read their chooses. "We have one live action and anther is animated and it's strange because the names of movies almost sound the same but there very different. Ok the first one I chose is Moulin Rouge. This story is about the bohemian revolution in France. It also it a musical and is very sad but also funny. It's a very sweet story and I think that we are mature enough to watch it. Why you may ask. Well because it's about prostitutes and some bad moments. The next movie is called Mulan and it's about the Hung Dynasty [5] in China and a girl who serves in the army for her injured father and finds love. Now this is a Disney movie so it's made for younger kids but it's still one of my favorites. Now you get to choose the one that we'll watch first now. Ok put your head on the desk and Jou, just don't look behind you ok? Right."
Everyone in the class put their head down on their desk and Jou looked forward and closed his eyes. Kaiba waited until everyone had his or her eyes closed or head down before complying with the teacher's request.
"Ok class rise your fist if you want Moulin Rouge to be the first movie and rise all five fingers if you want to watch Mulan"
A/N: there you have it the first chapter of my first story ever I hope you liked it and well be kind enough to leave some kind of review for me especially those of you who I've reviewed. Please return the favor for this story. Now here are the number thingies... yeaaaaah.
[1]- 'one rainy, cold morning caramel eyes...' you know the saying eye candy. Well caramel eyes. Get it. Lol I love that one. I was reading a story (a few say Jou has caramel eyes) and I was like eye candy hehe yeah I thought it was funny.
[2]- 'Jou' – ok I'm not good with the 'san' 'kun' 'sama' so I'm going with just calling them by their names.
[3]- everyone is going to be staying with their first period teachers all day because no one is doing anything in school. They took all the end of the year tests so they get to relax until summer but the principal thinks everyone is going to still be working.
[4]- Jou's first period will be world studies for the sake of this fic.
[5]- 'Hung Dynasty' –if this isn't the right dynasty then tell me in a review please and thank you.
WHEN YOU REVIEW (PLEASE REVIEW ME I DON'T CARE IF IT'S A FLAME JUST REVIEW) YOU CAN TELL ME WHAT YOU VOTED FOR AS THE FIRST MOVIE TO WATCH AND WHATEVER MOVIE WINS I'LL PUT IN THE STORY AS THE FIRST BECAUSE I CAN WORK WITH EITHER ONE FIRST OR SECOND.
Voice in head- that wasn't tooooo bad but you could do better.
Me- don't tell me that, it's my muses fault go yell at them to make my story better or I can tell them telepathically.
VIH- suuuuuuure you do that and I'll tell them to review. REVIEW YOU FOOL AND MAKE IT A GOOD REVIEW. You know if it's a flame then make it a good flame not something like 'that sucked' because I'll laugh at your pathetic attempt to flame and if it's a good review don't be like 'that was good' and that's it we would like to know more then that if you don't' mind because if that's all you say then we'll think that you hated it. Ok I'm done now review... yeah bye.
Me- . it didn't work ouch my head hurts.