Chapter One: Unveiling

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters from Atlantis: The Lost Empire.

Okay so this is my first fan fiction ever so let me know what you think! I just watched Atlantis and I thought hey why not make an Atlantis fic!

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Yue ran through the halls at the speed of light. Each person she passed reminded her of her folly. They muttered "you're late Princess Yue" or "your mother has been looking all over for you Princess Yue". As she skidded to a halt and burst into her room she met two faces. One was the face of her mother. Her mother had a very uncharacteristic scowl on her face but she still looked beautiful. She had tan skin, glistening white hair, and bright blue eyes. She was the picture perfect Queen of Atlantis. Her face changed to a comforting smile.

"Yue, you wouldn't want to be late for your own unveiling, would you? Now get into your dress and remember to come straight back here to put on your throne-wear!" Her mother smiled again and sighed. The other face was the face of her sister; Ciro. Her sister was her polar opposite. While her sister was fair skinned, blonde haired, and blue eyed she was tan skinned, white haired, and hazel eyed. It was because of their hair colors and their differences in personality that gave them their names; Yue meaning moon and Ciro meaning Sun. Right now her sister was looking impatient and pretty. Her sister got to wear garb traditional to Atlantis for coming of age ceremonies; a red sarong and tube top with a sash. Yue got to wear a long flowing red dress with a humongous train and shawl; the traditional wear of her father's people.

"Yue you better hurry up with getting ready because I've been wearing this traditional thing for hours and I'm itching to get out of it. Mother why can't I wear what she is wearing?" She gave her mother a pouty face.

"Ciro you should be proud to be coming of age in traditional wear! It is our culture and you will wear it and be proud!" Her mother ended that right there and once Yue was ready they headed out. The first to enter were her mother and father who walked down the steps into the grand hall and across the room to their smaller thrones for the night. Next was her sister who went down to the podium and made a short speech.

"My dear Atlantians it is so nice to finally be out in the open about who I am. Me and my sister have grown up hiding our royalty until now to have a normal childhood but now to come of age as the royal family of Atlantis! I would not have wished it any other way but this way to come of age in our great nation!" The crowd cheered; Ciro had a way or inspiring people that Yue never did. Just like the moon and sun Ciro lived in the light always the shining star of attention who could brighten up the day just by being her while Yue lived in the dark always cold barren and more distant than she would seem who hid her secrets and herself in craters never to be explored. She heard her name called and she immediately started to sweat and she could feel her heart thumping in her chest. She checked her hair once more just to make sure it was not messy and the headdress hadn't fallen out and then she walked through the curtain to the top of the stairs. The gasps were audible and she stood a moment to collect her wits and show people who she was; the loner. She walked down the podium and took a deep breath.

"All of Atlantis, I-I-I know it must come as quite shock to see someone you hardly know standing up here as the heir to the throne of Atlantis. If I were you I would probably not trust myself with such a great task and burden that affects all of your lives. T-Today I realized that although you may not know me yet I hope I can get to know each one of you in the future so I can help make our civilization prosper the way you want it to. I am your humble servant here to protect and unite all of our people under my one day steady hand. I hope this ceremony has unveiled that which you hoped to see." There was applause surprisingly and she walked as gracefully as she could off the stage.

3 hours earlier.

Mel Whitmore was staring out at an entire culture. It was like he had always dreamed it would be; mythical, sparkling, and huge. There seemed to be the main palace his grandfather was talking about though and that where he was headed to find Milo. His grandfather, the best friend of the grandfather of Milo, had sent him here because he was on his deathbed and if there was one thing he wanted to see it was Milo safe and happy one last time. So he traveled on foot to the palace and by the time he got there a party seemed to be in full swing. Then he heard loud chimes and all fell silent; he hid in a bush and watched from afar. The king and queen of Atlantis; Milo and Kida! He could rush in cause a scene and beg on his knees or wait until the right moment. Just when he thought he could sneak over behind the throne and whisper to him another person descended. This one was a very beautiful young girl of about 16 dressed in a red sarong bikini type thing. She went to the podium and gave a speech that showed her off as a leader or potential leader of the future; the Princess. The introductions were not done however because he heard gasps and a girl of 18 descended the steps and she was a sight to see. She was wearing a full length red gown that trailed along behind her and in her snowy white hair was a red and gold headdress. Her tan skin seemed to shine among all that red and her eyes were not a startling blue like all the rest of the people there but a soft, rich, and deep hazel. She got up to the podium and unexpectedly she was a wreck. She fumbled through an entire speech and at the end she got down and nearly ran out of sight down a hallway. He trailed her and slipped into a room right behind her and hid behind a potted plant to overhear conversation.

"Yue calm down! You were fine! Not everyone is good at public speaking and I'm sure you will get used to it in time!" The younger one put a comforting hand on her sisters arm which was quickly shaken off as the older sister headed for a changing screen in the corner.

"Ciro, I was terrible! I can never be Queen of Atlantis! What would you say if I told you I would give you the throne once mother and father died? You could lead them much better than me!" The older girl Yue talked through a hurried change and came out in a cross between a sarong and war ensemble. The younger girl Ciro seemed to be having a tough time responding to this one. She was already dressed like a rainbow priestess. It seemed to be both an unveiling and a coming of age ceremony and they were both daughters of Milo; both Princesses. The older one who was awkward was the one to take the throne while the younger one who possessed natural leadership abilities was left forgotten in the dust. Somehow though it seemed the other way around; the crowd had been approving and happy when Ciro turned out to be a Princess like it was expected. When Yue came down the stairs there were gasps of astonishment like no one could believe it was true. There was a moment of silence before Ciro spoke again.

"No matter how much I would like to say yes to that offer sister; I will never accept the throne from you. You were born first for a reason and I know you can lead the people of Atlantis if you believe in yourself. I have to get back out there before mother and father get restless. Sister Yue; I hail you and bless you to be a leader of great strength and wisdom." As she said her last words she knelt down, kissed the blue crystal around her neck and then touched both of her sister's bare feet with it. The light rippled up to her head as if she had been really blessed and her sister left. This was the perfect moment, if he could just jump out and surprise attack her then-

Yue's perspective:

Finally her sister was gone! She had been touched by the display of affection on her sisters part and she felt a new resolve within her, however first she would find out who's presence she had been sensing behind the potted plant. She was guessing it was her friend Suki and without a moment more hesitation she reached into the plant, grabbed hold, yanked, rolled, and pinned to the ground her spy. It was a man dressed in the garb of the world above! He had dark brown hair, startling green eyes, and a shocked expression at being pinned down so unexpectedly.

"Who are you and what are you doing in here?" She kept a firm grip on him with her legs and she kept his arms on the ground. However he did a quick movement and he was the one pinning her down.

"My name is Mel Whitmore, and I am here to see your father Milo Thatch. I see that the outfit isn't merely for show, how did you know I was in the plant?" He smirked and she glared at him; how dare he play games with one of the royal family even if she wasn't exactly popular. They switched again.

"I'll have you know that my father doesn't take kindly to spies, my betrothed is out there waiting for me, and it would do you well to save your impertinent tongue for someone not of royal blood. Allow me to introduce myself; I am Princess Yue the heir to the throne of Atlantis and I happen to be the best female fighter of my age." She smirked and he flipped again.

"I'll have you know that I am a friend of the family your Highness, and I saw you and your sisters little speeches out there. I happen to be very well trained in Self Defense, and although I'm sure your betrothed would marry you I'm not laying on top of you because I find you attractive." This was obviously not the right thing to say because what was playful banter was now a brawl and he found himself knocked across the room by a blow to the stomach. She looked furious and she beat him to the ground until they both heard a voice. She stopped and held him to the wall by the scruff of his neck. The voice was her mother; she smirked and gave him an evil smile.

"HELP! HELP! Spy! Assassin! Someone help me!" She yelled this at the top of her lungs and pulled his body down on top of her onto the floor. In a second guards rushed from every entrance and "restrained" him even though he was so tired from her attack he could barely stand.

"Yue if I'm not mistaken you have already dealt with him and there was no need to call any gaurds." Her mother looked suspicious.

"Mother! He still attacked me in my own room and he deserves to be judged by father; high treason is attacking the crown. However he did way something about being Mel Whitmore, here to see father, and a friend of the family." She smiled sweetly.

"Let him go! Yue I can't believe you didn't take him to your father first! He is obviously from above and you could have killed him if you injured major organs! What did he insult? Your hair? Your eyes? You have to ignore criticism!" Her mother scolded her for a while until she could take it no longer.

"Mother!!! It's not fair! He barges in on us, attacks me, insults my…virtue, and yet you still take his side! It's not like I don't know where major organs are and if he was injured that badly I could have used my crystal! Plus how do we know he is not here for the power source like the others?" They both eyed him and he felt it time to speak.

"I am Mel Whitmore, grandson of Mr. Whitmore the best friend of Grandfather Thatch. My grandfather Mr. Whitmore is on his deathbed and I must see Milo…his Highness right away to inform him and I had hoped that he would come back with me to the surface only for a month at the most to see my grandfather off to the afterlife." He finished and knelt in front of the ladies. He could fele the smile of one and the glare of the other.

"Fine! Take him to father for all I care! But have him brought back here afterwards for a lesson on how to treat a lady and since he will probably be staying for at least a week while father prepares for the trip I should like to teach him some customs, if you will. The first being the matter of coming in contact with Ciro which will not be a matter because there will be no contact with her. Am I making myself clear Mr. Whitmore? No means no and if I see you anywhere near my sister I will show you where your major organs are…" Just then Ciro came running in to the room.

"So there really is a man from above here! Hello my name is-." Yue put a fan in front of her mouth.

"Don't talk to him Ciro he is a lecher. You should have seen the way he attacked me. Besides royalty don't talk to the common folk or in this case we don't talk to the perverted." They both covered their faces with fans but she smirked and winked at her sister behind their fans making them both giggle. This stranger might be fun to have around.

End Chapter One

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