My First Work, please do tell me of any mistakes~

And I also hope for some feedback's from the readers, to know if you're truly enjoying the work or not~

And I Also edited the typo's and the " " case, I hope you'll continue to help me to become a greater writer.

And i also well.. "Tidy" the conversation for the next chapters, Hope you enjoy this as much as i do when im writing it! (i really do!)

Like I promised, Character Sketch Illustration's here! I can't thank my friend enough for this! thanks Ichi!

They're on my profile since I can't paste the link here.. some of the words always gone missing on me~ (Sorry!)

(I wanted to do the HTML thing.. but the picture always disappear's EVERY SINGLE TIME ugh. )

-FLI-

I remembered it like it was yesterday.. during the final match of the mondo grosso two years ago I came to cheer on my dear sister who'll be fighting againts the first "Brunhilde" , I was very excited to see my sister on the grand stage, I'm even more excited to see her taking the crown from "Brunhilde".

I saw her entering the stage with a determined and proud look on her face as her name is being called

"The Representative from INA, "Blazing Saber" Yunia Gleaks!"

I heard many cheers on different languages, but im sure that my cheer was the loudest, since i saw her looking at me, with a happy grin on her face.

And the cheers goes silent as the name of her opponent is being called "The Representative from JPN, "Brunhilde" Orimura Chifuyu!"

the audience goes wild with cheers so loud i can barely hear myself think, the cheers were so loud, so many.. probably about three times more intense than my sister's.

I looked at my sister and I can tell that she can barely wait to meet the legendary "Brunhilde" if it weren't for the rules, she would've go and drag "brunhilde" out herself, my sister is that kind of person i thought to myself while having a slight smile on my face.

Its been ten minutes and the audience's cheers still haven't subsided yet, it's crazy but i can't help but to think about "Brunhilde" and why she haven't showed up yet, my thought's were answered by the sudden announcement

"The JPN Representative "Brunhilde" has forfeit the match, therefore the winner is INA's "Blazing Saber" Yunia Gleaks!".

The audience goes nuts, angry pissed off comments were everywhere.. without thinking i ran towards "Brunhilde's" side of the stage wanting an explanation for this, until i overheard her voice "I Must Save My Brother! Compared to this... he is far more important!" she said, i hid behind the space of the corridors when i saw "Brunhilde" rushing towards the exit.

Well.. I have mixed feelings after hearing that.. and I unconciously walked to the stage again, where my conciousness was back due to the pissed off disappointed comments of the audience, i walked towards the farthest of the viewing balcony, so I could catch a glimpse of my sister.. I noticed she had the looks of someone who'se been robbed of happiness.. It was so empty.. so hollow.. I've never seen that look on anyone for as long as I can remember.

After seeing that look on my sister.. my heart started to ache so badly, as if there's daggers carving my heart over and over.. I ignored my sympathy for "Brunhilde" and clenched my hand and i swore that someday.. "I'll make "Brunhilde" pay for this", I, Rozert Gleaks promised myself.

beginnings are supposed to be short no?

hope the next chapter makes up for this short beginning~