So I've literally watched this movie twice this weekend. I had to write something to honor its greatness. This is what I came up with. Oh, and I own none of the characters and all that jazz.
Jed POV
Run. Run faster. Keep running. Don't stop. Check back. Look forward. Dodge tree. Jump creek. Run. Run faster. Keep running. Don't stop. Check back. Look forward. STOP. Check back. Man down.
Matt POV
Jed was leading. I was trailing. We were all running. The Koreans had found us. I don't know how they did, but they managed to find our mine shaft. They invaded. They lowered the numbers of our group. That didn't stop us though. We were still running. Until Robert fell.
3rd P POV
"Robert! Get up"
"I… I can't…"
"Yes you can."
"We'll help you"
"Ya, come on"
"Ok… "Robert takes a deep breath, "Let's go."
Jed POV
We ran until I stopped. I stopped when I felt safer than I had earlier. We settled down. The girls gathered fire wood. I sent Mattie and Daryl to scan the perimeter. I made Robert stay with me. We went down to the stream to collect water. Something about him seemed off. His skin was deathly pale and his eyes were glazed over. He walked on unsteady feet. I helped him sit down on a rock. He almost slid off.
"Robert, what's wrong?"
"I'm ok… I'm fine" He responded quickly, too quickly. There was a waver in his deepening voice. I didn't believe a word he said.
"I'm not as blind as my brother. You need to tell me what's bothering you. I want to help you but I can't if you don't tell me what's wrong"
"It hurts…" His voice was barely a whisper in the wind now. Crud.
"Where"
"Here" He grabbed at his ribs. Pudo. I made eye contact with him before lifting up the hem of his shirt. I found a mess. Even in the dim lighting I was able to see the bruising. It was bad.
"On a scale of one to ten how bad is the pain?" No reply. "Robert!" Wake up! Come on! I smacked him across the face. He didn't move. He had entered the world of the unconscious.
Well... that's chapter one. Hope you enjoyed this as much as I did. The more you review the faster I update! Or ya know just review to make my day... Thanks!
~ Tree