Soleanna's Story rewritten
I decided to rewrite my story because it wasn't very good before. Thanks to my friend TheFirstLostGirl1987 for helping me with this story. this is our joint story!
Fangs P.O.V
I was flying over the plains of Phoenix Arizona, flying away from the flock, flying away from Max. Max, she would have been so heartbroken when she found my letter. I can't go back though, can I? All I do is cause harm; I'm always getting in the way... Max will be better off in the end. Maybe I won't show up in twenty years... by then she'll have forgotten me. I need to move on now forget. Flying as fast as I can, as far away as possible. She'll be happier with Dylan...stupid Dylan... always right about everything. I wish I could be Max's perfect match but let's be honest were polar opposites, we always fight and when I kiss her I mostly end up pushing her away and I'm not willing to be the middle man.
It was starting to get dark and I can't see in the dark. I'm part bird not BAT! Doing a quick 360 of the area and checking no flyboys or M-geeks are about. I found a nice looking tree and settled down on a thick branch, yet I couldn't sleep. My mind was racing so I pulled the laptop out of my pack and checked my blog, Max probably wouldn't kill me for taking the laptop, but Nudge, Iggy and Gazzy probably would though. My blog had well over several million hits; I never really thought it would be this popular. I just started it to get at Max... like the whole Lissa thing, not one of my best moves, at trying to win Max. We kept on playing the whole, who can make who the most jealous. I sighed just remember she is better off without you. Is she? A little voice, the part of me that was madly in love with Max replied. Yes, I replied to the voice. Now I'm talking to myself... What is wrong with me? Note to self try not to talk to myself. After about ten minutes of reading my fan mail, my eyelids grew heavy and I began to drift off. I shoved the laptop into my backpack and fell asleep.
The sun was just rising as I woke up, I felt around for my pack, which I had left unguarded on the branch next to me, but it was gone. Damn! What was I gonna do without food of money? Not to mention my laptop! I looked at the floor beneath my branch to check whether it had fallen, it with no luck. I heard a slight rustling above me and a feather floated down and landed in my lap. Max! Was my first thought until I examined it more closely, after falling out of the tree mind you! It was the wrong colour but only very slightly. One it was black from the base to the middle and the top was a dark reddish brown, the feather was too big to be a birds but I didn't know anyone with black wings apart from myself.
Suddenly there was a thump beside me and I saw as black haired girl landing on the ground. She started to run away holding a backpack, MY backpack. The mystery of the missing backpack solved... Now I just had to get it back. I sprang up from the floor and raced after her. Man she was fast but I managed to catch up with her... FINALLY! From the back she looked about 13, DAMN she was fast. The girl stopped, looked behind her to see me following her, when she saw me, she changed courses and ran into the nearest clump of trees. Raising an eyebrow, I followed her and watched as she took a running leap at a rock, before she hit it, she unfurled a big pair of brown red mix and black wings and started to fly away, I quickly followed her. Smirking to myself to be feeling alive since I left Max, yet angry I could be so stupid enough to let a midget steal my bag!
The girl obviously heard me because she turned around quickly, almost thwacking me on the head with her wings and stared at me. She looked as surprised as I felt. She was a female ME!
"Who are you?" She snapped. The first to break the silence, I tried to keep the look on my face impassive so she wouldn't know I was as surprised as I was.
"I'm, uh, Fa-Nick!" I corrected myself before letting the truth slip. I didn't think it was best for her to know my true identity... that makes me sound like a superhero... wait focus. She might work for the School.
"Fa-Nick?" She repeated slowly, raising an eyebrow. Her expression as impassive as mine.
"Just Nick." I shrugged but I knew she wasn't convinced by my excellent lying skills
"Whatever. I prefer Fa-Nick." She teased smirking. "I'm Soleanna"
"You have my bag, Soleanna." I said making a grab for it; she pulled it out of my reach with a smirk
"NO shit Sherlock. Gonna have to tell me your REAL name. Fa-Nick." I scowled in anger. "You're Fang, I know you're him, so don't deny it." She said smugly, tossing my bag at me and I had to dive to catch it.
"How did you know?" I asked shocked and slightly angry, as she was treating me like a naughty school boy.
"That is for me to know and for me to wonder." She replied smirking... NB she does that a lot.
"The School told you?" I snapped back in anger and her face filled in anger.
"Don't for one second think I am associated with that hell hole. I read your blog nipshit and your name is on your bag." I instantly felt guilty for accusing her. I went on to ask the next question plaguing my mind.
"Why do you look like me?" I asked as we hovered in mid air, starring/glaring at each other.
"I really don't know." She answered but I knew she was hiding something but I didn't push it because she countered my question with a worse one of her own.
"Where is the rest of your flock? You talk about them a lot in your sleep, especially Max!" I think I must have blushed at that because her smirk widened. Great, just great how am I going to explain that one?