The Challenge this time is a Crossover between Naruto and Fate/stay night
In this Challenge Menma, Naruto's counterpart will be different from Naruto in canon, in canon Naruto is exuberant, brash, inattentive, and heedless. He is also somewhat perverted which sadly many people in Fanfiction like to Ridiculously flanderized Naruto's personality. Like Example the somewhat perverted Naruto in canon, is the somewhat super mega god perverted Naruto in Fanfiction. When in canon Naruto is not a pervert on the same scale as Jiraiya and Kakashi. Anyway in this Challenge, in all my Challenge Menma's personality will be different from Naruto, will be the contradiction to the personality that people in Fanfiction always put to Naruto or Menma respectively so now you know.
Now the Challenge!
Short Story idea if you want to to use it
Menma and Saber are twin(not adopted), they start their training at an early age, at the age of 5 the twins are separated by force by their father ( Father can not be an OC )taking Saber with him and abandoned Menma heir to the throne only for a prophecy that Merlin tell, without judging it if Menma will save the world or destroy it. The mother ( Mother can not be an OC ) stars train Menma to be the first Ninja-Knight. At the age of 14 Menma create the first two mother of all legendary sword , the Master Sword and the Dark Master Sword (the power of both swords are the same one in Big Story idea, and yes both swords are from legend of Zelda). Age of 16 Saber draws the sword Caliburn from the stone and becomes the King, ruling the land with Menma beside her side, for the great feats in battle Menma is known as Sage of the Six Paths (Sage of the Six Paths does not exist Menma is the first) and Saber as King of Knights. When Caliburn break, Menma is the one that gives Excalibur and Avalon to Saber not Lady of the Lake.
Before the Downfall, the Masked Man appears and makes Menma lose control of his power making him go insane. Saber using the Master Sword defeats Menma, Saber seals him in a temple stopping his time thus making him the first pseudo-Master/Servant. Before the events of Fate/zero or Fate/stay night in any way that you preferred, Aoko Aozaki find the temple and frees Menma making her Menma's Master, At some point of the story in one of the two events Menma becomes the Master of female Gilgamesh, female Gilgamesh will not replace male Gilgamesh.
Big Story idea if you want to to use it, Big Story idea and Short Story idea are not the same while the Short Story idea is the real Challenge the plot. The Big Story idea, is me practicing my writing and writing my idea that no one has thought in fanfiction, so you will not have to take this Big Story idea seriously hope you like it.
the story star when Menma and Altria/Saber are adopted or not (Optional) by a couple the father being a knight and the mother being a Ninja, father and mother can not be OC. At the age of 5 both Menma and her younger brother Altria/Saber ( Menma will refer Altria/Saber as younger brother and Altria/Saber will refer Menma as big sister again I will explain you later) began training with their foster parents, everything seemed fine Menma and Altria/Saber have a family what more could they ask but like everything in life has an end. When Merlin arrives and speaks to the small family of a prophecy of two children more specific twin, one child will be a great leader a King of knight that would lead Britain to victory, while the other child will be a cataclysm with eyes of power he will bring this world to its destruction.
Merlin lies in the last part of the prophecy with the part of destruction and eyes of power being half-truth. Because as any human being they feel wrath, hatred, jealousy etc. Merlin was no different as any magus Merlin's ambition is to reach the Root he felt anger and jealousy that in front of him this child, Menma that possess the eyes, the body and the will of Akasha how this child get to the Root? Merlin will ensure that Menma does not reach ist full potential, Merlin leaves without saying the complete prophecy only telling part of the truth. From that day everything goes down to hell the father knew the he should not had adopt Menma, the only reason why he adopt the boy was because his wife did not want to separate the twin. months have passed the father ignored Menma in favor to Altria/Saber, Altria/Saber could not do anything he was threatened by the father will leave Menma on the street if Saber does not cooperate.
The father takes Altria/Saber to train and prepare him for the day that the kingdom will choose the new king the father leaving Menma closed in a dark room without Altria/Saber, the mother knowing, the mother gets angry and disgusted of what her husband did to Menma just for a goddamn prophecy that Merlin tell, she knew there was something wrong with the prophecy it felt incomplete now knowing that dark times are approaching and if Altria/Saber is destined to become a king she will need all the support someone she trusts, someone that can be her pillar and that someone is Menma Altris's twin big sister, the mother know that no matter how many time Altria/Saber try to act as a man in the end Altria just a girl. The mother will train Menma to be the strongest knight, the strongest ninja Menma will be the first Ninja-Knight in the history of mankind the perfect shadow, Altria/Saber's shadow, even if Menma and Altria/Saber have different eyes and hair color the people will never know the difference the mother is going to ensure that Menma become a good liar.
In the years of training Menma and the mother encounters a mysterious Masked Man, he wore a white fox mask, which later told them the last part of the prophecy and some part which Merlin never told then, he starts to tell them the last part of the prophecy. Two child will be born as twins, one child is sent by the earth to be his king, while the other child with eyes of power is sent down from the heavens to become either a " God of Creation" who will calm the world and guide the king to a path of peace and prosperity, or a "Destroyer" who will reduce everything to nothingness and guide the king to a path of bloodshed and tyranny. Before the Masked Man left he says to them that he going to make sure that Menma and Altria/Saber follow one of the paths ( to Menma ) be the Saviour of the World or the Destroyer ( to Altria/Saber) be the King of peace and prosperity or a Dark-tainted Tyrant, Menma later learns that the Masked Man is part of him, just like he is part of him.
Year passed, Menma's relationship with Altria has not changed rather it has strengthened, their bond have become stronger than before and they are now at the age of 14. Over time Menma started calling Altria little brother by the way she always acts like a man and to annoy her, Altria too started calling Menma big sister for just the purpose of annoy him but failing miserably, saying that it does not bother him and also for the reason that he must maintain her identity a secret that Altria is actually a girl not a boy, so it is best to switch roles once in a while when it's necessary, eventually they got used to refer to one and the other differently, later Menma then says to Altria that he is going to train for two years and says his goodbye . Three months as pass, Menma stopped training for a while if he going to be the Saviour of the World or the Destroyer.
He will need two weapons or more specific swords, that represent his nature and power, a sword representing God and his divine power that can purified and destroys the darkness and any curses, a sword that will be indestructible never going to get rusted or losing its sharpness, will be able to cut through anything, will representing perfection and beauty worthy of being wield by a God or King , a sword that when people see it they see hopes and salvation, and when enemies see it they will feel fear and terror. He will create conditions for one to wield the sword in case that he fails to save the world, and the conditions will be that the sword can not be touched by evil only a person of pure heart who has gone through great trials that test his/her courage, wisdom and power and that is not blinded by the power of light and can judge between good and evil is worthy of wielding it. But if a person of pure heart who has gone through great trials but is to blinded by the power of light to judge between good and evil will be consumed and destroyed by the sword, only a incarnation or descendant of him and Altria is worthy of wielding it, and continuing his legacy being the Saviour of the World, the name of the Sword of God of Creation will be the Master Sword of the creator or just Master Sword.
Unlike the Master sword, this sword is a contradiction in all forms while the Master sword represents creation and hopes, this sword represents death and destruction it will bring fear and terror on both sides of good and evil, the sword's power are Similar to its counterpart but in a evil version. The conditions for one to wield the sword in case that he fails to bring peace to the world by Destroying it, and the conditions are that the sword can not be touched by evil or good only a person only a person that had and not been consumed by his hatred who has gone through great trials and that is not let the power of darkness control him/her and can judge between good and evil is worthy of wielding it. But if a person that as suffered and its to consumed by his hatred and allowed the power of darkness to control him/her and can not judge between good and evil will be consumed and destroyed by the sword, only a incarnation or descendant of him and Altria is worthy of wielding it, and continuing his legacy being the Destroyer of the World, the name of the Sword of the Destroyer will be the Master Sword of the Demise or juts Dark Master Sword.
Their will be one last condition, this condition is for one to wield both sword in case that he fails to bring peace and order to the world, the conditions are only a person that it is not good or evil that does not follow the path of light or path of darkness, just follow his/her heart their own path the path of balance is worthy of wielding it, only a incarnation or descendant of him and Altria is worthy of wielding it. With the conditions established he begins to forge the two sword.
Two years have passed Menma and Altria are now age of 16 both have completed their training in those past two year. Menma returns to Camelot to meet his little brother who he has not seen in ages and to see the other part of the prophecy be fulfilled, the day the king of Endland is born and that day is today, knights and lords around the country gathered to be selected as king. Each selection expected to be through the jousting to select the most superior one to become a king, but the only thing prepared at the place of selection was a naked sword stuck in a stone with a golden inscription on the hilt reading "Whosoe'er pulleth out this sword of this stone is born king of England rightwise. While many knights grabbed the sword trying to follow the command, none were able to pull it out because they all suck , let's be honest no one cares about cannon fodder especially in Naruto anyways off track. Altria was the last to see if she was worthy to be king by pulling out the sword from the stone has she reached out for the sword without hesitation.
Before grabbing it, Merlin was going to approach her but was beaten by a mysterious figure wore a dark hooded cloak appeared before her. Altria looks at the mysterious figure and smile knowing who is this mysterious person, he starts talking to Altria to think things over before taking it. He told her she would no longer be human upon taking hold of the sword, he starts to tell her what happened to him in those two year that he was trapped in the Sacred Realm where he complete his two swords. Altria was confused when he said Sacred Realm but said nothing she left him to continue, he began to tell her what he did the two swords that he created the Master Sword and the Dark Master Sword and conditions for one to wielding one of the two sword or both, a month pass since he created the two swords but he felt that the swords felt incomplete. He was in a forest training when suddenly he is visited by an unexpected visitor. Amaterasu the Sun Goddess, some events occur which leads Amaterasu bringing Menma to the Sacred Realm and the only place that one can reach the Root and where he finishes his two sword.
Inside of the Sacred Realm, Amaterasu tells Menma to insert the Master Sword on the pedestal to complete it. He sets the sword into the pedestal, the effect was quick the other sword the Dark Master Sword was absorbed by the Master Sword, all of a sudden a light appears upon the sword as if it were blessing the sword. Which Transformed the blade into the True Master Sword, Menma was going to pull the sword from its pedestal but was stopped by Amaterasu, warning him that the sword now is connected to Akasha.
Drawing his sword from its pedestal is the same as if one were to touched it directly, he would no longer be human he will become the first true God unlike her kind but he may not never returned to the world or worse his existence may ceased to exist on the spot. Menma smiles and tells her that he is prepared, if it is to help her younger sister then he is willing to become a " God of Creation" who will calm the world and guide the king to a path of peace and prosperity or a "Destroyer" who will reduce everything to nothingness and guide the king to a path of bloodshed and tyranny. No matter which path his sister choose he'll be there for her and to guide her, Amaterasu was happy but at the same time sad seeing that Menma does not care what happens to the world as long as Altria is happy he is happy, the only thing that Amaterasu with her siblings Susanoo and Tsukiyomi can do is be by his side. Menma pull the sword from its pedestal, a blue light engulfs Menma causing Amaterasu to no longer see him and now to pray that everything goes well and he return save.
Long hours have passed the blue light is fading Menma appears smiling, Amaterasu sighs in relief and then smile and starts saying with her siblings that will arrive later will star train him for hin to control his power for Two years. After two years of training inside the Sacred Realm, Menma prepared to be beside her sister side, before Menma leave is given few gifts from Amaterasu, Susanoo and Tsukiyomi and these gifts are Yasakani no Magatama, Kusanagi no Tsurugi and Yata no Kiagami these three legendary objects were created in the two years that Menma has been training. Menma finishes his explanation, but she only responded with a nod because she has been prepared for the fact that "becoming a king means no longer being human" ever since she was born. She knew that a king is someone who kills everyone to protect everyone same as a god to create and calm the world he first have to destroy and reduce everything to nothingness.
Altria says referring to Menma in the last part, Menma looks at her with his usual emotionless face and smile a little and then tells her "as your god i will guide you in any path that you choose but above all as your older brother I'll always be by your side no matter what path you choose little sister" Altria star holdin tears, tears of joy thanking God for giving her a loving brother. Knowing that once she remove the sword from the stone, she will be a king and being a king means she stopped being his little sister, before a sister she a king the same can be said of her big brother but she smiles, knowing that even though if she goes to the wrong path or kills her emotions to become a perfect king Menma will always be by her side. Now more determined than ever Altria says Menma "as your king 'll bring victory in your name and following your wisdom and guidance even if you take me to a path of bloodshed and tyranny, i still will follow it but above all as your little sister I'll always be by your side no matter what path you choose of peace or destruction" Altria says with a smile, the sword was pulled out as if it were only natural to do so, and the area was filled with light. She like her brother became something not human in that instant. This started the time of the king and a god who would become a legend.
And that's it, i would have written more but I became lazy with the last part, like Menma being known as the Sage of the Six Paths,Mordred being Menma's daughter instead of Saber the Mother can not be an OC or a female character from Naruto. Menma being Saber's shadow, acting as a king in place of Saber when she is absent, being sick, being depressed by the paperwork, she shutting herself in her room by said paperwork or when she is in some important place and finally Menma killing Merlin.
Menma personalities and traits:
Menma is Saber's twin, they look identical with the only difference being that Menma have red or black hair any of the two that you prefer (no blond hair, this is Menma not Naruto even so if I use Naruto in some of my Challenge he will never have blond hair ) and his eyes being heterochromia , his right eye being of crimson color and a ring with three tomoe surrounding the pupil, whith black sclera and his left eye being of ripple-like pattern, which spreads over the eyeball, with light purple irides and sclera.( Yes Menma have the Rinnegan and Sharingan) Menma's battle clothes are the same as Saber Lily only difference being instead of wearing gauntlets he's wearing Fingerless opera-length Black gloves wrapped in studded red-brown leather straps. They have a good relationship has brother and sister,( the story will be very different fron canon at least the background of Saber, how differently she gets Excalibur and Menma being in her life.) becauseof Menma being Saber's shadow. His personality is somewhat similar to Saber's and Madara's personality.
Menma will not be a pervert a flirt not going to nosebleeds like an idiot if a naked woman crosses or a perverted thought and not what you think He likes women except that he appreciated and respecteden(For god's sake! do not forget that Menma's a fuckin Ninja-Knight he was trained to be prepared in all situations like control his emotions, and not be tempted etc. Like a real fuckin Ninja-Knight) so see a naked woman is normal for Menma and control himself but alas you have an excuse to put in perverted situations.
He won't take shit from no one and with no gender bias
no smoking Menma
He will be calm serious smart clever cunning crafty sharp he will know how to analyzes at dangerous situations and his opponent in battle will be rather difficult to be angry (pretty much like itachi,Nagato and Madara)and difficult to surprise over every little shit attack that the enemy makes (Why? Because he is a fuckin Ninja-Knight to be prepared in all situations)
No flanderized or nerfs Menma's power
No nerfs Rinnegan's power or Sharingan's power, no putting levels to the Rinnegan like one ring two ring three ring or four or another color or all that shit it will stay the same original Rinnegan from the manga. Menma has all the power of the Sharingan and in contradiction to his counterpart Menma skills are the same one fron Road to Ninja.
Menma will be paired with Aoko Aosaki
No harem
Not OC allowed
No Yaoi and/or Yuri Pairings. I am not homophobic, just don't put them here
PM if you take the Challenge