Hey! So I planned on rewriting the whole story. Some OC's that are used will still be there and I will try to lessen the grammatical errors. (I promise that I will really try hard!)
I did some research about the Green Lanterns and Hal Jordan so that this could make the story cooler. John Stewart will be part of Dani's life because the Guardians asked him to. I know that the story is fast but you can ask questions if you like if you catch up. The story won't be fast and I cannot make promises but trying will definitely fit it.
To add more, Oa serves the Guardians of the Universe's home who also administer the Green Lantern Corps. John will act as Dani's uncle and Hal is Dani's adopted brother.
I do not own Young Justice or any of its characters. I only own my OC's.
Oa
April 28, 2005, 20:28 UTC
HAL
"I came here as soon as you called, John." I hovered over to John, where the Guardians are sitting on the tall stoned chairs. They're strict faces were staring at us, ready to give us information.
John and I bowed to give respect to the Guardians. They did not nod or anything but John asked first. "Guardians, why did you call me and Hal? Is there something you need to tell us?"
The Guardians were talking indistinctly to each other. John and I exchanged glances.
"There has been a crisis on Lightera. Ringerians are on their tail. We have already sent a batch of Green Lanterns to infiltrate the planet. But they were too late." A Guardian tapped something and a holographic screen appears.
The screen is showing a bright white planet, surrounded by big black ships. Then a couple of Green Lanterns arrives, shortly after the planet exploded.
The screen stopped playing. The Guardians continued, "After Lightera was destroyed, the Lanterns returned and they seemed to run into a young girl. She seemed to be human."
We exchanged glances. "Another human? Here? In Oa? How could that be?" I asked quickly.
"None of the Lanterns did not the reason why she is here and how did she came in. But we are asking both of you to take good care of her."
"Take care of her? Why?"
"You and John are the only trusted Lanterns who are human and she is very important to us and to the Corps."
"You're telling me that me and John are babysitting over a girl that we did not know. Also you're telling us that she is important to you even though she managed to break in without anyone noticing?"
The Guardians nod. "Give me a good reason why me and John should do it." I crossed my arms against my chest.
"Because she is the only living Lightian left."
A young girl is sitting on the bench, overlooking the planet Oa. She has light brown hair, lighter than mine which I think can make her identified as a Lightian. She is small. She is wearing a white dress and a silver crown is across her head.
"Is she the one that the Guardians are talking about? She doesn't look like a trouble maker or a survivor." I whispered to John.
"Maybe the Guardians wiped her memory about her planet for just her own good. Remember Hal we need her to be calm and convince her to stay with us." John said and we both nod.
We approached the girl who is busy humming. "Hi, is it okay if me and my friend sit beside you?" She nodded instantly, then went back to stare the beauty of Oa.
"Nice place, huh?" She nods again. "My name's Hal Jordan and this is my friend, John Stewart."
We held out our hands and she shakes them. "Nice to meet you Hal, John. My name's Danielle." Her voice is sweet and innocent, too bad that she does not know what happened to her planet. Poor girl.
"Danielle, we have something to tell you. Have you already met the Guardians?" John asked.
She nods. "The blue men? Yes I have. They said that I am a human and I was special. They told me that two men were going to take me home. Are you those men they were talking about?"
I smiled, to assure her that she can trust us. "Yes. We can take you home on earth. You could see a lot of beautiful places like sky, moon, stars and sun. They really brighten up your day."
Her eyes were shining with excitement and her smile is wider. What a cool kid. "Really? I really liked to go with you but what about the Guardians. Aren't they gonna be mad because you will take me to earth?"
John chuckled. "No, they're not. This is what they want. You can stay with Hal and me and together we can discover new things on earth. Don't you like that?"
She stood up and hugged us. "Thank you! So when do we leave?" John and I stand up and we went to the hallway, holding hands.
Right there I could tell that having this opportunity can really change her life and our lives.
Reviews are highly appreciated. I know that I haven't completely explained everything about Dani. Lightera is just my own made up planet and the Ringerians. They are OC's or OP. Whatever.
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