I re-did it in a better format and I realize my writing was a lot worse a year ago.
Amy Pond was mad, it wasn't that new, she was from Scotland. She was mad this man who was insisting that he was the Doctor from the childhood and making her confused. Amelia Pond did not like being confused, so she took this psychopath's tie and locked it in a car door. She was in shock of the fact this mad had the apple she had given him from 12 years ago, when her best-friend, Scarlett, came running up and yelled
"Hey Amy, did you see the sky- oooh." She ended when she saw The Doctor shut in a car door, she stood there thinking for a second then said as if choosing her words carefully
"Should I fear for this man's life or should I go break the news to Rory."
"Neither, Scarlett this is the Doctor." Amy said while unlocking the car door so the Doctor could get out, Scarlett's eyes widened comically and she said
"You're the Raggedy Doctor Amy used to go on about." Amy blushed and turned to the Doctor and asked
"What do we need to do?"
"Stop that nurse." The Doctor responded while running after Rory,
"What's going on?" Scarlett asked while she and Amy chased after The Doctor
"The earth's going to be incinerated in 17 minutes, unless we show the aliens where prisoner zero is who also happens to be a shape-shifter, problem?"
"Sounds good." Scarlett chuckled when the caught up to the Doctor and Rory.
"Amy! Scarlett!" Rory yelled out relief of not being alone with a crazy man asking about why he was taking a picture of a man and a dog.
"This is my brother Rory." Scarlett said with a nod towards said brother
"And he's my friend." Amy finished
"Boyfriend." Rory corrected
"Sort of." Amy re-corrected
"Amy!" Rory said slightly outraged
"Time and a place, you two." Scarlett said while rolling her eyes
"Man and a dog, why?" The Doctor asked trying to veer of the topic of Rory's relationship with Amy
"Oh, my gosh. It's him, Amy." Rory said starting to have a, for lack of a better term, surprise attack. Amy turned red while hissing at Rory
"Just answer his question, please."
"It's him though! The Doctor, The Raggedy Doctor!"
"Yeah he came back." Amy said impatiently, Scarlett rolled her eyes and muttered to the Doctor
"And they wonder why I went travelling without inviting them." The Doctor chuckled and then yelled at Rory
"Man and a dog! Why! Tell me! Now!" Rory got a flustered look on his face and replied stutteringly
"Sorry! Because, he can't be there, because, he's." And the Doctor finished the sentence with him
"In a hospital, in a coma."
Then The Doctor went into psycho, child mood. "Knew it! Multiform, you see, Disguise itself as anything, but it needs a life-feed, a psychic link, but dormant-" The Doctor proceeded to poke Rory's head "-mind."
Then Scarlett, the Doctor, Amy and Rory towards the sound of both the man and the dog barking, The Doctor walked forward smugly
"Prisoner Zero." Rory turned to Amy
"There's a Prisoner Zero too?"
Scarlett rolled her eyes, for the second time in 5 minutes and said sarcastically to Rory "No." and ignored Rory when he stuck his tongue out at her.
Suddenly A giant ship containing a huge eyeball looking around the entirety of Leadworth, The Doctor turned smugly to Prisoner Zero
"See, that ship up there is scanning for non-terrestrial technology," The Doctor slyly took his sonic screwdriver out of his pocket
"And nothing says non-terrestrial like a sonic screwdriver!" The Doctor proceeded to make things explode with his sonic, until it burnt out.
"NO, NO,NO, NO! Don't DO that." As the Atraxi started to leave, The Doctor yelled after them
"NO, DON'T GO, HE'S HERE PRIOSNER ZERO IS HERE!" As he did that prisoner Zero melted down the drain, Amy talked to the still yelling Doctor
"Doctor! The drain, it just… sort of, melted and went down the drain." The Doctor gave her a look and said
"Of course he did." Amy, slightly miffed by The Doctor's look of derision asked rather loudly
"Well, what do we do now?!" The Doctor was not impressed by Amy's exclamation
"It's hiding in human form we need to drive it into the open. No Tardis, no screwdriver, seventeen minutes, come on... THINK! THINK!"
"So that thing, that hid my house for 12 years?" Amy asked the Doctor, faintly disgusted.
"Multiforms can live for millennia. 12 years is just a pit stop."
"So how come you show up again on the same day that lot do? The same minute?" Amy asked suspiciously
"They're looking for him they saw me through the crack, got a fix, they're only late 'cause I am."
"What's he on about?" Rory asked suspiciously,
"Nurse boy, gimme your phone." The Doctor said impatiently to Rory,
"How can he be real? He was never real!" Rory insisted to Amy and Scarlett
"Phone! Now! Gimme!" The Doctor yelled at Rory, Scarlett rolled her eyes, took Rory's phone and handed it to The Doctor,
"Thank you." He said appreciatively,
"It was just a game, we were- we were kids, you made me dress up as him!" Rory said, freaking out a bit,
"These photos, they're all coma patients?" The Doctor asked Rory
"Yep." Rory responded, still slightly freaked out,
"No. They're all the multiform. Eight comas, eight disguises for prisoner Zero." The Doctor explained
"He had a dog, though," Amy said "there's a dog in a coma?"
"Well, the coma patient dreams he's walking a dog, Prisoner Zero gets a dog. Laptop!" The Doctor shouted suddenly looking at Amy "Your friend, what his name, not him, the good- looking him!"
"Thanks." Rory said sarcastically "Jeff." Amy said shooting a quick look at Scarlett, who made a look of disgust, "Ohh, thanks." Rory stated again then he muttered "Not only do you insult me; you insult me with that pervert."
"He had a laptop in his bag, a laptop. Big bag, biiig laptop! I need Jeff's laptop! You three, get to the hospital. Get everyone out of that ward, clear the floor; phone me when you're done!" The Doctor shouted while running off, Scarlett grabbed Rory and Amy and said to the earlier
"Your car, come on." "Uh... but how can he be here? How can the Doctor be here?!" Rory asked; still in shock.
"Hello!" The Doctor said bursting into Jeff's room
"Laptop! Gimme!" The Doctor tried to take the laptop from Jeff, when he finally succeeded and saw the screen his eye's widened
"Blimey! Get a girlfriend, Jeff!"
"I'm working on it." Jeff replied embarrassedly
"Gran!"
"What are you doing?" Jeff's grandmother asked
"Suns gone wibbly," The Doctor said "so right now, somewhere out there, there's gonna be a big old video conference call. All the experts in the world, panicking at once, and d'you know what they need? Me. Ah, and here they all are. All the big boys. NASA, Jodrell Bank, Tokyo Space Center, Patrick Moore."
"Oh I like Patrick Moore!" Jeff's grandmother stated
"I'll get you his number, but watch him, he's a devil.
"You can't just hack in a call like that!" Jeff stated incredulously
"Can't I?" The Doctor said smugly
"Who are you," said an unidentified genius "This is a secure call, what are you doing?"
"Hello. Yeah, I know, you should switch me off, but before you do, watch this." The Doctor said to all of them and then started typing like a crazy person, then everyone started talking at once saying things like
"It's him!" and "I know!"
"Fermat's Theorem, the proof, and I mean the real one, never been seen before, poor Fermat got killed in a duel before he could write it down. My fault. I slept in. Oh, and here's an oldie but a goodie, why electrons have mass, and a personal favorite of mine, faster than light travel with two diagrams and a joke. Look at your screens. Whoever I am, I'm a genius. Look at the sun. You need all the help you can get. Fellas - pay attention."
Scarlett, Amy and Rory hopped out of the car and ran into the hospital.
"Sir what are you doing?" asked another Unidentified genius
"I am writing a computer virus," The Doctor said "very clever, super-fast, and a tiny bit alive, but don't let on. And why am I writing it on a phone? Never mind. You'll find out. Okay, I'm sending this to all your computers. Get everyone who works for you sending this everywhere. Email, text, Facebook, Bebo, Twitter, radar dish. Whatever you've got, any questions?"
"Who was you lady friend?" Patrick Moore asked the Doctor smiling
"Patrick, behave." The Doctor said with a look
"What does this virus do?" the unidentified genius asked,
"Oh, it's a reset command, that's all, it resets counters, it gets in the Wi-Fi and resets every counter it can find. Clocks, calendars, anything with a chip will default at zero at exactly the same time. But yeah, I could be lying, why should you trust me? I'll let my best man explain." The Doctor stated, it went silent while the Doctor waited for Jeff to start
"Jeff. You're my best man."
"You're WHAT?" Jeff asked confusedly, Doctor closed the laptop and turned to Jeff,
"Listen to me. In ten minutes, you're gonna be a legend. In ten minutes, everyone on that screen is gonna be offering you any job you want. But first, you have to be magnificent. You have to make them trust you and get them working. This is it, Jeff, right here, right now. This is when you fly. Today's the day you save the world." Jeff looked dumbstruck
"… Why me?" Jeff asked,
"It's your bedroom. Now, go, go, go." The Doctor then ran out of Jeff's room
"Okay guys, let's do this." Jeff said to the geniuses
"Oh
and Jeff," The Doctor said when he ran back in his room "Delete your internet history."
"Uh, something's happened there, we can't get through." Rory told Amy and Scarlett
"Yes but what happened?" Scarlett asked impatiently
"Um, I don't know. No one knows. Phone him." Rory said the last part directed to Amy who dialed his number.
"Doctor," Amy said into the phone "We're at the hospital, but we can't get through… oh"
"What did he say?" Scarlett asked Amy
"Look in the mirror." Amy replied and looked over
"OH, HAHA! Uniform." Scarlett took the phone from Amy and held it to her ear while Amy tied her hair back
"Are you on your way?" You're gonna need a car."
"Don't worry, I commandeered a vehicle." The Doctor said to Amy as he turned the siren on in the Fire Truck he stole.
"Officer!" a woman with two daughters called to Amy,
"What happened?" Amy asked ignoring Scarlett's wary look at the woman
"There was a man. A man with a dog. I think Doctor Ramsden's dead, and the nurses." The woman replied, Scarlett grabbed her phone and called The Doctor
"Are you in?" The Doctor asked her
"Yes, But so is Prisoner Zero." Scarlett replied
"You need to get out of there."
"He was so angry, he kept shouting and that dog. The size of that dog. I swear it was rabid and he just went mad, attacking everyone. Where did he go? Did you see? Has he gone? We hid in the ladies." the little girl said… in the woman's voice. Scarlett grabbed Amy and Rory's hands and pulled them back.
"Oh, I'm getting it wrong again, aren't I? I'm always doing that, so many mouths." Then the "Woman" and her "Daughters" opened their mouths wide and showed his huge pointy teeth.
"Scarlett? Scarlett, what's happening?" Scarlett grabbed her brother's and her friend's hand and they ran down into the coma ward. Rory slammed the door and put a broom through the handles,
"Scarlett! Talk to me." Scarlett put the phone to her ear and said
"We're in the coma ward, but it's here, getting in."
"Which window?" The Doctor asked, Scarlett smiled and said
"First floor on the left, fourth from the end."
Then Prisoner Zero broke through the door still in woman and daughters form, they pulled their teeth back in
"Oh dear, little Amelia Pond. I've watched you grow up. Twelve years, and you never even knew I was there. Little Amelia Pond. Waiting for her magic Doctor to return. But not this time, Amelia, and you," she said turning to Scarlett "So many secrets, and always running always hiding." Rory and Amy turned to look at Scarlett confusedly and saw her glaring at Prisoner Zero, Scarlett looked down at the phone, smiled and pulled down Amy and Rory just as a ladder came crashing through the window, The Doctor climbed up the ladder and hooped in the room and he put his arms over Amy and Scarlett's shoulders, earning a look from Rory,
"Right! Hello! Am I late? Three minutes to go. There's still time." Doctor said with a smile "Time for what, Time Lord?" The Doctor walked forward a couple steps "Take the disguise off, they'll find you in a heartbeat, nobody dies."
"The Atraxi will kill me this time. If I am to die, let there be fire." Prisoner Zero replied
"Okay, You came to this world by opening a crack in space and time. Do it again. Just leave." The Doctor said
"I did not open the crack." Zero said
"Somebody did."
"The cracks in the skin of the universe - don't you know where they came from? You don't, do you?" Then she spoke in a child's voice
"The Doctor in the TARDIS doesn't know," The she said in a singsong voice "Doesn't know, doesn't know!" Then the mother's voice spoke again
"The universe is cracked. The Pandorica will open. Silence will fall." Then a strange flicking sound started and the Doctor said
"Aaaand, we're off. Look at that." The Doctor pointed at the clock in the corner, it said 0:00.
"Yeah, I know, just a clock, whatever, but d'you know what's happening right now? In one little bedroom, my team are working. Jeff and the world. And, d'you know what they're doing? They're spreading the word. All over the world. Quantum fast. The word is out. And do you know what the word is? The word is zero. Now, me, if I was up in the sky in a battleship, monitoring all Earth communications, I'd probably take that as a hint. And if I had a whole battle fleet surrounding the planet, I'd be able to track a simple old computer virus to its source in... what, under a minute? The source, by the way... is right here." The Doctor finished and pulled out Rory's phone "Ooooohhhhh and I think they just found us!" Amy, Rory and Scarlett ran to the window and looked outside to see the Atraxi ship over the hospital.
"The Atraxi are limited. While I'm in this form, they'll still be unable to detect me. They've tracked a phone. Not me." Prisoner Zero replied, The Doctor smiled and said
"Yeah! But this is the good bit, I mean, this is my favorite bit. Do you know what this phone is full of? Pictures of you. Every form you've learned to take, right here. Oh, and, being uploaded, about... now. And the final score is, no TARDIS, no screwdriver, two minutes to spare... Who da man?!" Prisoner Zero, Rory and Amy gave him a look while Scarlett snorted and kept looking out the window,
"...Oh. Well. I'm just, never saying that again. Fine." The Doctor said embarrassedly
"Then I shall take a new form." Prisoner Zero stated "Oh, stop it, you know you can't. Takes months to form that kind of psychic link."
"And I've had years."
Then Prisoner Zero glowed orange, and Amy collapsed.
"No! Amy! You've got to hold on! Amy! Don't sleep! You've gotta stay awake, please!" The Doctor yelled at her,
"Doctor!" Scarlett shouted and pointed at prisoner Zero, who now looked like the Doctor
"...Well that's rubbish. Who's that supposed to be?" The Doctor asked
"It's you." Scarlett said while rolling her eyes
"Me?" he asked shocked "Is that what I look like?"
"You don't know?" Rory asked, annoyed
"Busy day," He replied "Why me, though? You're linked with her! Why are you copying me?"
"I'm not." Prisoner Zero said in young Amy's voice and a young Amy stepped out behind the fake Doctor holding his hand "Poor Amy Pond. Still such a child inside. Dreaming of the magic Doctor she knows will return to save her. What a disappointment you've been." Prisoner Zero stated. The Doctor paused then said
"No, she's dreaming about me cause she can hear me." And he ran over to Amy "Amy. Don't just hear me, listen. Remember the room, the room in your house you couldn't see. Remember you went inside, I tried to stop you but you did. You went in the room. You went inside. Amy... dream about what you saw" And then Prisoner Zero turned into its true form.
"Well done, Prisoner Zero. A perfect impersonation of yourself." The Doctor said happily then a light came through the window and a loud voice called
"Prisoner Zero is located. Prisoner Zero is restrained." The Atraxi said, then prisoner Zero faced the Doctor and said ominously
"Silence, Doctor. Silence will fall." Then it was gone, The Doctor grabbed Rory's phone and started dialing rapidly
"The- the Sun, is back to normal, right? That's... That's good, yeah? That means it's over." Rory stuttered Amy then started to wake up "Amy? Are you okay? Are you with us?" Rory asked her
"What happened." Was her reply
"He did it. The Doctor did it." Scarlett said with a smile,
"No I didn't." The Doctor said
"What are you doing?" Rory asked him
"Tracking the signal back. Sorry, in advance." He replied
"About what?"
"The bill." Was The Doctors answer, Then the Doctor said into the phone
"Oi! I didn't say you could go! Article 57 of the Shadow Proclamation. This is a fully established level five planet. And you were gonna burn it? What? Did you think no one was watching? You lot. Back here, now." Then he threw the Phone to Rory "Okay. Now I've done it." And he walked off
"Uh, did he just bring them back?" Rory asked "Did he just save the world from aliens, and then bring all the aliens back again?!"
Amy and Scarlett walked after the Doctor and Rory ran to catch up,
"Where are you going?" Amy asked the Doctor
"The roof." He stated "No! Hang on!" then he ran into the locker room and started to throw around clothes
"What's in here?" Amy asked confusedly
"I'm saving the world, I need a decent shirt! To hell with the raggedy - time to put on a show." He said while twirling with a shirt then throwing it for Rory to catch it,
"You've just summoned aliens back to Earth! Actual aliens! Deadly aliens! Aliens... of death, and... now you're... taking your clothes off." Rory said confusedly "Amy, he's taking his clothes off."
"Turn your back if it embarrasses you." The Doctor said unconcernedly
"Are you stealing clothes now? Those clothes belong to people.. you know!" Rory said shakily to the Doctor and then turns around "Are you two gonna turn around?" He asked them
"Nope." Amy and Scarlett replied simultaneously.
The Doctor sauntered on the rooftop
"So, this was a good idea, was it? They were leaving!" Amy shouted at him
"Leaving is good. Never coming back is better, Come oooooooon then! The Doctor will see you now!" He shouted at the Atraxi, then the giant eyeball swooped down and scanned the Doctor
"You are not of this world."
"No, but I've put a lot of work into it." He then holds up a tie to the eyeball "Umm... uhh... I dunno. What do you think?"
"Is this world important?" The eyeball replied, not amused.
"Important?! What does that mean, important? Six billion people live here, is that important? Here's a better question: is this world a threat to the Atraxi?Come on, you're monitoring the whole planet. Is this world a threat?" He shouted at them, Then a blue light came from the pupil of the eye showing the history of the earth,
"...No." Said the eyeball
"Are the people of this world guilty of any crime by the laws of the Atraxi?" The
Doctor asked smugly, it showed more history,
"No."
"Okay! One more! Is this world protested?" The Doctor asked the eyeball with a smile, then Cybermen, Daleks, Empressof the Racnoss, And so many more,
"Cause you're not the first lot to have come here. Oh, there have been SO many. And what you've got to ask is... what happened to them?" Then it showed pictures of every regeneration of The Doctor until right after his ninth there was someone he didn't' know, a woman by the look of her curves with a black body suit on and a black motorcycle helmet shooting at the camera, then it went to his tenth and he stepped through the hologram and said
"Hello. I'm the Doctor… Basically… Run." The eyeball shook in terror and flew back to its ship that flew away quickly. Then the Doctor reached into his coat pocket and reached out the glowing Tardis key.
"Is that it? Is that them gone for good? Who were they?" Amy asked the Doctor, but he was already gone.
Amy and Scarlett lay in her bed,
"I'm glad you came back for the wedding." Amy said with a smile towards her best friend,
"How could I miss it?" Scarlett said with a smile. Then they both went quite when they heard the Tardis engine go off. They both ran outside, in there nighties.
"Sorry about running off earlier! Brand new TARDIS, bit exciting! Just had a quick hop to the Moon and back to run her in. She's ready for the big stuff now." The Doctor said with a smile at the two girls
"...It's you. You came back." Amy said shocked
"Course I came back. I always come back. Something wrong with that?" The Doctor said
"And you kept the clothes?" Scarlett said chuckling
"Well, I just saved the world. The whole planet, for about the millionth time, no charge, yeah. Shoot me. I kept the clothes." The Doctor said slightly annoyed,
"Including the bow-tie." Amy said with a look,
"Yeah. It's cool. Bow-ties are cool." The Doctor stated
"Are you from another planet?" Amy said jokingly
"Yeah." He said
"Okay…" Amy said unbelievably
"So what do you think?" The Doctor said to both Amy and Scarlett
"What?" Amy asked
"Other planets, wanna check some out?"
"What does that mean?" Amy asked curiously
"It means, well, it means... come with me. You too." He said, the last part to Scarlett.
"All that stuff that happened, the hospital, the spaceships, Prisoner Zero" Amy started
"Oh, don't worry, that's just the beginning, there's loads more." He said with a smile
"Yeah but those things, those... amazing things, all that stuff." Amy continued
"That was two YEARS ago!" Scarlett finished for her friend
"Ohhhhh, oops." The Doctor said looking distressed
"Yeah." Amy stated
"So that's.." The Doctor started
"14 years!" Amy said sounding very angry
"Fourteen years since fish custard. Amy Pond. The girl who waited, you've waited long enough." The Doctor said with a smile
"...When I was a kid, you said there was a swimming pool. And a library and the swimming pool was in the library." Amy said suspiciously
"Yeah. Not sure where it's got to now, it'll turn up! So! Coming?" The Doctor said happily
"No." Amy said
"You wanted to come fourteen years ago." The Doctor said; wounded.
"I grew up." Amy stated evenly
"Don't worry. I'll soon fix that." The Doctor said then he snapped his fingers and the doors of the Tardis opened and the three of them stepped in. Amy and Scarlett looked around in wonder at the huge room,
"Well? Anything you wanna say? Any passing remarks? I've heard them all." The Doctor said while jumping around the console
"We're in our nighties." Amy said.
"Oh, don't worry! Plenty of clothes in the wardrobe. And, possibly, a swimming pool. So! All of time, and space, everything that ever happened or that ever will. Where do you wanna start?" The Doctor said with a smile
"You are so sure that we're coming." Amy said challengingly
"Woahhh don't drag me into this I'm going whether you are our not." Scarlett said with a smile
"Yeah I am." The Doctor said answering Amy's question,
"Why?" Amy asked
"Cause you're the Scottish girl, in the English village, and I know how that feels."
"Oh, do you?" Amy asked
"Well, all these years living here, most of your life, and you've still got that accent. Yeah, you're coming."
"Can you get us back for tomorrow morning?" Scarlett asked The Doctor nonchalantly,
"It's a time machine. I can get you back for five minutes ago. Why? What's tomorrow?" The Doctor asked curiously
"Nothing. Nothing! Just, you know. Stuff." Amy said, a little too panicky
"All right, then. Back in time for 'stuff'." The Doctor said, then a new sonic screwdriver came out of the console, the Doctor took it and muttered
"Thanks, love."
"Why us?" Scarlett asked
"Why not?"
"No, seriously. You are asking us to run away with you in the middle of the night, I should be a bit wary." She insisted
"Dunno! Fun! Do I have to have a reason?" The Doctor said trying to make her let it go
"Yeah, kinda do. People tend to" Scarlett said The Doctor turned and looked down at her, she was a good 6 inches shorter
"Do I look like people?" he asked, think that his stare would put her off
"Yes." She said without breaking eye contact. He sighed and turned away
"Been knocking around on my own for a while, my choice, but I've started talking to myself, all the time, it's giving me earache."
"You're lonely. That's it. Just that." Amy said feeling sad that he didn't say because he loved her and wanted to run away with her or whatever.
"Just that. Promise."
"Okay." Amy stated
"So you're okay then? Cause this place. Sometimes it can make people feel a bit... you know."
"I'm fine. Fine. It's just... there's a whole world in here, just like you said. It's all true. I thought, well, I'd, I'd started to think that maybe you were just like a... madman with a box." Amy said laughing
"Amy Pond, there's something you better understand about me, you too Scarlett, cause it's important, and one day, your life may depend on it. I am definitely a madman with a box." All three of them laughed and the Doctor pulled down the leaver and shouted
"Ha haa, yes! Goodbye, Leadworth! Hello... everything!" and none of them noticed it.
The crack exactly like the one on Amy's wall