I couldn't hold this story any longer, a dunno why but i was desperate to share it with you guys, Iv gone through it and corrected it so there shouldn't be any errors.
Basicly, Brittany gets murderd and Alvin sets out to find her murder, Eleanor and Jeanette try to cope with their sisters death...
Also like my musicel, am not finishing this until I have got 'love never lies' finished :) Another thing, this story is based on the song, 'I saw an angel' by Dj Zitkus, well the a couple and the last chapter is, the whole story is based on the song 'your my angel' by Darren styles.
Hope you like it and warning, you may cry at the end :'(
Prologue
It was a misty night, the moon was full and the stars was hidden in the foggy clouds
It was a late tuesday night, Brittany miller had just left her cheer leading practice, she was in her cheer alfit with her pom poms in her pink shenall bag, she was meetiing her boyfriend Alvin seville halfway because with it being hollywood, who knows whats lurking about.
She was walking along the side walk, listening to her ipod.
As she walked she noticed how it was a ghost town, there was not one person about, it was cold and windy. The winds whistle could be heard and the pitter patter of rats feet could be noticed. Brittany got abit scared as she held her bag close to her side, she looked behind her to make sure she wasn't being followed.
Brittany took her earphones out as she pick up speed, she could hear noises in dark alleyways. She began to freak out as she pulled her phone out and dialed Alvin's number, it rang before he picked up...
"Hello"he answered
"Alvin" she said
"Britts, whatsup...were are you?" he asked
"am coming up broden street, were are you?" she replied
"at the end i'll start walking to you" he suggested
"ok but hurry...am getting abit scared" she moaned
"ok, i will, bye" he said
"bye" she finished as she put the phone down
She then placed the phone in her pocket as she turned round the corner. When she did she could see Alvin at the end walking towards her, she smiled in relief as she waved to him. He waved back but he notieced as she was coming up to a dark alleyway.
Brittany also noticed which kind of scared her abit, as she came to it she could hear noises, not scattering, leaking nosies. Noises that sounded like someone walking on rocks or glass. She gulped as she walked quickley pasted it not even achnollaging it. She sighed in relief as she pasted it but unaware their was a man in there with a sharp object.
He eyed the young girl as she walked pasted, she was his target and he was gonna aim for it. He then stepped out of the shadows and quickley caught her up, Alvins eyes widend as he noticed a stranger behind her but what horrified him the most was the sharp, shiny object in his hads that shone in the moon light.
A Knife.
Alvin realised what this stranger was gonna do so he began to sprint towards Brittany as fast as he could, shouting her name...
"BRITTANY...LOOK OUT!" he shouted, alerting her.
Brittany realised what he said as she turned around but as soon as she did, the stranger plunged the knife in her stomach. Brittanys face froze and her eyes widend as her body went cold and her life flashed before her eyes. She collapsed to the ground as he ripped the knife out of her. Alvin saw as his eyes widend in horror...
"NNNOOO" he shouted, the stranger saw and begn to run, he ran around the corner and dissapeared into the shadows.
Alvin reached Brittany and fell to her side, he saw as she was cletching her blooded wound. Her breathing was becoming horas and her skin got pale. He rolled her onto her back and took of his jacket, setting her head on it. He then pulled out his phone and dialed 911...
"Britts stay with me...c'mon your gonne b-be ok" he said, shaking.
Brittany began to loose consouse as her legs numbed, her body went stone cold as she stared up into his hazle eyes, she noticed as tears began to fall, her eyes began to water as she knew her time was ending...
"Alvin" she whispered as she reached up for his hand.
Alvin looked at her with his watery hazle eyes, he didn't want to loose her because she was his life, he needed her. With out her, he was nothing.
"Brittany please, helps coming" he cried "Just p-please don't leave me"
"A-Alvin...P-promis one thing" she said as her voice began to crack
"anything Britts" he mumbled, holding her cold hand.
"P-promise me that you'll never forget me...I want y-you to m-move on"
His eyes widend in fear as he knew what she ment, he knew what was happening
"Brittany what do you mean, how can i forget you when your with me, your gonna make it throught this, I know you will"
"Promise me Alvin" she asked
"I promise but your gonna make it Britt"
By now Alvin was crying his eyes out, there was no way he was gonna give up on her. He loved her...
"Alvin" he heard her say "i'll allways be with you...in your heart" she whispered
"Brittany...please...no no no, don't leave me" he cried "I love you"
"I l-love you too..."
And then Brittanys eyes closed, her hand slowely slipped out of his and fell to her side. She was dead, she was gone forever. Alvin stared at her lifeless body, his heart had been shatterd and his soal he been crushed, he was pouring his eyes out as he looked at her fragile face, looking at the girl he loved who once lived, he was truely heart broken.
He felt a splodge of water on his face as he felt the rain fall down, thunder crumbled as it stirred the mood, Alvin couldn't take it no more...
"NNNNOOOOOOOO!...PLEASE, WHY HER...WHY?" he shouted as he helt her body to his chest, he just wanted her back so he could hold her in his arms but it was to late, she was gone...
Alvin looked from her fragile face to the direction he ran, his eye darkend as they narrowed dangerously...
"you will pay you basterd...you will pay"
God i was nearly crying writing this :'(
Poor Alvin, Brittanys dead and he's all alone with no one to love. Poor guys lets hope he does catch this monster.
Would you guys prefer this human version or Chimunk version in a animal world (think like chicken little, like his world)
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