Yo! So to you humans out there, I am completely new to writing stories. So please review on what i should fix! The layout
I'm probably using now is really simple... Anyhoo! Enough wit dem boring talk! Enjoy my probably terrible writing!
Pandora Hearts: Extra 1
Oz's cooking
Gil: Aarrggh! Should I tell him?! What if he declines?! Ah screw it! I'm doing it anyway!
Oz: Almost done!
Gil: Young master! I secretly lo- WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?!
Oz: Ah Gil! Have you come to express your feelings towards my masterpiece?
Gil:...
Oz: What? Did I do something to disturb you?
Gil: What is that?!
Oz: Why its steak! *holds up an entirely burned plate*
Alice: DID SOMEONE SAY MEAAAAAT?!
Oz: Yea! I made delicious steak!
Alice: ... Wut the hell is that supposed to be?
Break: *under table* Apparently it is meat~
Alice: THEN GIVE ME THAT PIECE OF CRAP ALREADY. I NEED TO EAT MY MEAT. *grabs plate and stomps away*
Gil: Finally... that stupid rabbit left... Um Oz?
Oz: Hm?
Gil: What on earth are you wearing?
Oz: Oh! Why, it's my baby chick apron! Cute isn't it! *twirls*
Gil: Yeah it looks cute on you... i kinda wish I could see you like this more often...
Break: Aaaww how cute! Gil can't help but think he looks cute like that~
Gil: *blushes* SHUT UP YOU PERVY BASTARD.
Break: ehehe~
So there was my first fanfic. For this one, I felt it was necessary to keep it simple and clean (lol kingdom hearts).
Please review (but please don't judge!)
Tell me any requests, i'll try to do them if I like the idea!
Ciao!