This is my first story so i really need reviews.

"Hello." Someone with a demonic voice said

"Hi." Someone replied

"Are you...Jake the rabbit?" The demonic voice asked

"Yes." Jake replied

"Well Jake,How would you like to do a job for me?" The demonic voice asked

"What kind of job?" Jake asked

"I want you to kill a bounty hunter" The demonic voice said

"How much will i get for it?" Jake asked

"$100,000,000 worth in diamonds." The demonic voice said

"Why do you want me to kill the bounty hunter and who is he?" Jake asked

"His name is Blade the Hedgehog, and he is out to kill me." The demonic voice said

"OK then. I will do it!" Jake yelled

Chapter 1: The job

"Now...Where is this Hedgehog named Blade?" Jake said as a sword flew past his face.

"I heard you are looking for me." A voice said from behind Jake.

Jake turned around.

"Who are you?" Jake asked

"Blade. Blade the Hedgehog."

Blade is a green hedgehog who is skilled with swords and he is also a bounty hunter.

"I have come to kill you!" Jake yelled.

"You wont be able to kill me!" Blade yelled.

They started fighting. Jake punched Blade. Blade jumped, tried to kick Jake in the face, but Jake grabbed Blade's foot and punched him in the face.

"What the fuck. I'm supposed to be the best!" Blade said.

All of a sudden a gunshot went off in the distance and Jake dodged it. It was Slade. Slade is Blade's best friend.

"Hey Blade." Slade said as he jumped off the building he was on and landed perfectly.

"This guy is trying to kill me." Blade said pointing to Jake.

Jake punched Slade in the face and took his gun.

"Any last words?" Jake asked.

"Not so fast!" Someone yelled.

It was Sonic the Hedgehog.

"Hand over that gun or I will have to take it from you!" Sonic said

"Just go ahead and try!" Jake yelled.

"Fine!" Sonic yelled.

Meanwhile in a lab

"What is the status of the experiment?" One scientist asked.

"Its ready." Another scientist said.

"Start it!" The first scientist yelled.

"OK." The second scientist said as he started the machine.

The machine started working and then all of a sudden 4 characters appeared out of nowhere.

Out of the 4 that appeared, there were 2 Hawks,one black,one white, a Sparrow, and an Albatross

To be continued...