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Prologue
The sky was a light grey haze above the snowy mountains a few miles from the small kingdom of Arendelle. The wind howled lowly across the large hills. The rocky terrain was blanketed in most places by heaps of untouched, sparkling, pure white snow. Here, on this desolate rugged ground, two people – a tall, young man and a younger, teenage girl – trekked to a cabin where they would spend the night before they continued on their walk to the kingdom.
The pair looked out of place in the winter atmosphere. The girl wore shades of green, brown, and orange. On her neck-poncho, holding up the hip sash on her dress, and hang from her earrings were green metal ornaments resembling a single curling leaf for each. Her shoulder-length, spiky-tipped hair covered her right eye mysteriously and was mostly chocolate brown, but had streaks of orange and lighter brown every so often. On her left wrist, barely visible under her sleeve, was a bracelet with possibly glowing green gems, the same color as her bright eyes.
The man was quite tall. And though the wind blew his hair into his face relentlessly, he still seemed to know where he was going, not needing his gloved hands for balance like his partner did. This man wore less but seemed comfortable anyway. He wore a royal-looking outfit like the girl, but his was of different shades of blue and blue-black. Though his tail-coats whipped in the wind, they did not move him as if he were a part of the wind himself.
"How much farther is the cabin, Mr. Axel?" The girl asked.
The girl looked up at the man, therefore stepping on the slippery rock, causing her to trip and fall back. It was only because of her companion's fast reflexes that she didn't land hard, back-first on the snow behind her.
"Ha, ha, you need to be careful, my dear Karia. Remember where you've been, know where you are, and watch where you are going to step. Always watch, especially on this particular land." He beamed, and she nodded, glowing with embarrassment, and mumbled apologetically.
He continued, "To answer your question, I believe we are about there. The cabin should be just around this rock wall. As for the kingdom of Arendelle; it is another five to seven miles depending on how fast you're traveling."
The face of the girl named Karia lit up with her smile. "Can I try a new power I've been practicing? Please, just until we are a mile away! That way I won't scare anyone."
The man known as Axel contemplated this, "Hmm, I know you've been very good with your studies. You've nearly mastered five different powers within your boundaries. I'm almost positive you'll be fine. But just in case, I'll be the power source." His blue-black hair blew completely away from his almost angelic face, revealing his eager smile. He held out his right hand to seal the deal.
Karia nodded and took it, shaking once. "You got it!"
Author's Notes: I'm uploading this prologue to see if any of the Frozen fans will enjoy this. This is JUST the beginning. I haven't given anything away yet. We'll get into the original movie characters. For now, you get to meet Axel Blix and Karia Dahlin. If you look up the names, you'll find they have certain meanings - I have to re-look because I'm a stinker and forgot what they mean. Anyways, this prologue is to test my description writing skills and to test you to see if you like it. Axel will have a big part in this story if I keep going as planned and don't change it too much (like I always seem to do).
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