Authors note: hey guys. This is my first chapter of my first fan fiction
it's like my own episode of C.S.I but with different characters....
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**Chapter 1**
Eryka, Pamela and Morigan pulled up to the first crime scene they had seen all week. They stepped out of their black SUV to see a dead body lying in the middle of the road.
Pamela was 27, long brown hair, medium height and no husband or boyfriend. Eryka was almost the same, her brown hair was shorter, but she was on the dating scene. Then there was the rookie cop, Morigan, she was a good worker, she was really tall with long brown hair, no one knew much about her, because this was her first case, but she graduated with honors, a lot was expected of her. Pamela and Eryka had been partners for a few years so they were used to seeing mutilated bodies from crime scenes. They met four years ago, on their first scene, since then, they couldn't be separated from crime scenes. Together, Pamela and Eryka had solved the most number of crimes in one year in the history of CSI. However, Morigan was a rookie who at the sight of the body began choking and gasping from the upcoming vomit that was about to cover the road. Eryka and Morigan had just got Morigan on their team, and they felt like their territory was being invaded, but Pamela and Eryka were more concerned about Morigan puking everywhere.
"Don't contaminate the crime scene please", said Pamela as she was used to new rookies, she took Morigan's sickness without sensitivity, she has seen too many newbies who rubbed her the wrong way, she felt like no one can handle scenes anymore like she and Eryka could.
"Looks like a hit and run", said Eryka, as she snapped a few pictures of the scene and body, "judging by the way the body is positioned I'd say, he was hit from behind". Eryka liked to predict scenes; it gave her a sense of security with a crime scene. Almost like she had something she was looking for, but Pamela was always determined that Eryka created a false sense of security for herself all the time, but she never said anything, because they were close partners, and Pamela was sensitive to their friendship. However, Pamela made herself feel better by pointing out faults in Eryka's predictions.
"Hold on a second Eryka, do you see what I see", asked Pamela as she turned the body over and pointed to the slice marks in the body's back. They were long abrasions which punched deep into the flesh and were cut like slits, only slightly rough around the edges.
"Multiple stab wounds possibly?" questioned Eryka. Pamela seemed skeptical of the obvious stab wound, something seemed fishy about the whole thing, and they didn't look like the typical stab wounds. So she questioned Eryka.
"Maybe, but how would you do it from a car?" asked Pamela. Eryka could see Pamela was unsure of Eryka's predictions, so she tried to find some sort of justification.
"Someone gets angry, drives by, stops near our John Doe and stabs them", explained Eryka. She was satisfied with her explanation, it was logical and reasonable, but Pamela noticed something.
"Yes, but judging by these tread marks, I think not", explained Pamela, as she grinned knowing she just crushed Eryka's prediction. Then, Eryka and Pamela were both surprised as Morigan walked back to the crime scene wiping her mouth and just as she was gaining some of Eryka and Pamela's respect towards her, she glanced at the body again and ran back to the bushes she had just came from. She felt so embarrassed, what a way to start a first day, Morigan thought to herself.
"Come on Eryka, let's move before it starts to rain" Pamela instructed as she looked at the sky to see dark clouds through the gloomy moon. If Pam and Eryka knew anything, it was that you can't be too safe with a crime scene, once, a long time ago, Eryka and Pam let a scene go too long under some gray clouds, and just like that, it started to pour, and the whole case was ruined. So they knew now not to let it happen again. The onsite officers began to load the body onto the truck and Pamela, Eryka and a very sick looking Morigan hopped into their SUV and started back to the lab, "we'll know more once we get this baby to the lab", said Pamela, and with that they drove away, leaving some rookies to collect evidence, since their was very little to be collected. Some blood and pictures but not much more. They would find out more once they got back to the lab.
Eryka and Pam sat at the front of the SUV and Morigan sat alone in the back. Morigan tried to strike up a conversation,
"So, a pretty cool first crime scene eh?" Eryka and Pamela looked at Morigan with a frown.
"Crime scenes are never cool, people die for no reason sometimes", replies Eryka which immediately silenced Morigan, and then it was silent again. Right until the end of the ride.
They stood silent in Eryka's office, collecting their things all together. Then Pamela broke the silence,
"Hey, let's go have some fun, who's up for some clubbing!" Eryka, pondered for a moment and joined in,
"I'm game, what about you Morigan?" Pamela and Eryka stood silent, hopping she'd come, after all they realized they had been kind of rude towards Morigan, and they wanted to apologize, but in their own way.
"Nah, I'm good, I got lots of..... uhhh....... things to do, involving.... you know uuuhhh... stuff", Morigan wasn't ready to have fun with her fellow agents, she didn't think they liked her that much, so she backed off for now. So, Eryka and Pamela just shrugged it off, and headed to the club.
In the club, Eryka and Pamela danced and drank, the usual. However, as Pamela was on the dance floor, she noticed a guy checking out Eryka. Pam got a bad vibe from him, but she just looked at him for a second, and based on her previous relationship experience, she couldn't really make quick judgements. Eryka caught his eye too, he was pretty cute. Blond spiked hair, a medium build with a great smile, but something seemed screwy about it all to Pamela, but before she could say anything, she was dancing with him, then a while later, making out with him. They seemed to be boyfriend and girlfriend in a blink of an eye. However, it was an early morning for the agents so Pamela grabbed Eryka and they took off.
As they were riding in the car, Pamela spoke up,
"What was with you and that guy, you two seemed pretty into it," Eryka glanced at Pamela and mustered a response,
"I don't know, we just clicked, and besides, he was hot". Pamela decided to tell Eryka what she thought,
"He gives me a bad feeling Eryka, I don't like him". Eryka looked at Pamela in astonishment.
"You do this all the time, just because you can't get a boyfriend doesn't mean......" Eryka stopped, realizing what she said. Pamela was hurt but, she still said a last sentence before dropping Eryka off,
"Just be careful, that's all". She stopped at Eryka's house and screeched off into the moonlight. Tomorrow was a new day.
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**Chapter 1**
Eryka, Pamela and Morigan pulled up to the first crime scene they had seen all week. They stepped out of their black SUV to see a dead body lying in the middle of the road.
Pamela was 27, long brown hair, medium height and no husband or boyfriend. Eryka was almost the same, her brown hair was shorter, but she was on the dating scene. Then there was the rookie cop, Morigan, she was a good worker, she was really tall with long brown hair, no one knew much about her, because this was her first case, but she graduated with honors, a lot was expected of her. Pamela and Eryka had been partners for a few years so they were used to seeing mutilated bodies from crime scenes. They met four years ago, on their first scene, since then, they couldn't be separated from crime scenes. Together, Pamela and Eryka had solved the most number of crimes in one year in the history of CSI. However, Morigan was a rookie who at the sight of the body began choking and gasping from the upcoming vomit that was about to cover the road. Eryka and Morigan had just got Morigan on their team, and they felt like their territory was being invaded, but Pamela and Eryka were more concerned about Morigan puking everywhere.
"Don't contaminate the crime scene please", said Pamela as she was used to new rookies, she took Morigan's sickness without sensitivity, she has seen too many newbies who rubbed her the wrong way, she felt like no one can handle scenes anymore like she and Eryka could.
"Looks like a hit and run", said Eryka, as she snapped a few pictures of the scene and body, "judging by the way the body is positioned I'd say, he was hit from behind". Eryka liked to predict scenes; it gave her a sense of security with a crime scene. Almost like she had something she was looking for, but Pamela was always determined that Eryka created a false sense of security for herself all the time, but she never said anything, because they were close partners, and Pamela was sensitive to their friendship. However, Pamela made herself feel better by pointing out faults in Eryka's predictions.
"Hold on a second Eryka, do you see what I see", asked Pamela as she turned the body over and pointed to the slice marks in the body's back. They were long abrasions which punched deep into the flesh and were cut like slits, only slightly rough around the edges.
"Multiple stab wounds possibly?" questioned Eryka. Pamela seemed skeptical of the obvious stab wound, something seemed fishy about the whole thing, and they didn't look like the typical stab wounds. So she questioned Eryka.
"Maybe, but how would you do it from a car?" asked Pamela. Eryka could see Pamela was unsure of Eryka's predictions, so she tried to find some sort of justification.
"Someone gets angry, drives by, stops near our John Doe and stabs them", explained Eryka. She was satisfied with her explanation, it was logical and reasonable, but Pamela noticed something.
"Yes, but judging by these tread marks, I think not", explained Pamela, as she grinned knowing she just crushed Eryka's prediction. Then, Eryka and Pamela were both surprised as Morigan walked back to the crime scene wiping her mouth and just as she was gaining some of Eryka and Pamela's respect towards her, she glanced at the body again and ran back to the bushes she had just came from. She felt so embarrassed, what a way to start a first day, Morigan thought to herself.
"Come on Eryka, let's move before it starts to rain" Pamela instructed as she looked at the sky to see dark clouds through the gloomy moon. If Pam and Eryka knew anything, it was that you can't be too safe with a crime scene, once, a long time ago, Eryka and Pam let a scene go too long under some gray clouds, and just like that, it started to pour, and the whole case was ruined. So they knew now not to let it happen again. The onsite officers began to load the body onto the truck and Pamela, Eryka and a very sick looking Morigan hopped into their SUV and started back to the lab, "we'll know more once we get this baby to the lab", said Pamela, and with that they drove away, leaving some rookies to collect evidence, since their was very little to be collected. Some blood and pictures but not much more. They would find out more once they got back to the lab.
Eryka and Pam sat at the front of the SUV and Morigan sat alone in the back. Morigan tried to strike up a conversation,
"So, a pretty cool first crime scene eh?" Eryka and Pamela looked at Morigan with a frown.
"Crime scenes are never cool, people die for no reason sometimes", replies Eryka which immediately silenced Morigan, and then it was silent again. Right until the end of the ride.
They stood silent in Eryka's office, collecting their things all together. Then Pamela broke the silence,
"Hey, let's go have some fun, who's up for some clubbing!" Eryka, pondered for a moment and joined in,
"I'm game, what about you Morigan?" Pamela and Eryka stood silent, hopping she'd come, after all they realized they had been kind of rude towards Morigan, and they wanted to apologize, but in their own way.
"Nah, I'm good, I got lots of..... uhhh....... things to do, involving.... you know uuuhhh... stuff", Morigan wasn't ready to have fun with her fellow agents, she didn't think they liked her that much, so she backed off for now. So, Eryka and Pamela just shrugged it off, and headed to the club.
In the club, Eryka and Pamela danced and drank, the usual. However, as Pamela was on the dance floor, she noticed a guy checking out Eryka. Pam got a bad vibe from him, but she just looked at him for a second, and based on her previous relationship experience, she couldn't really make quick judgements. Eryka caught his eye too, he was pretty cute. Blond spiked hair, a medium build with a great smile, but something seemed screwy about it all to Pamela, but before she could say anything, she was dancing with him, then a while later, making out with him. They seemed to be boyfriend and girlfriend in a blink of an eye. However, it was an early morning for the agents so Pamela grabbed Eryka and they took off.
As they were riding in the car, Pamela spoke up,
"What was with you and that guy, you two seemed pretty into it," Eryka glanced at Pamela and mustered a response,
"I don't know, we just clicked, and besides, he was hot". Pamela decided to tell Eryka what she thought,
"He gives me a bad feeling Eryka, I don't like him". Eryka looked at Pamela in astonishment.
"You do this all the time, just because you can't get a boyfriend doesn't mean......" Eryka stopped, realizing what she said. Pamela was hurt but, she still said a last sentence before dropping Eryka off,
"Just be careful, that's all". She stopped at Eryka's house and screeched off into the moonlight. Tomorrow was a new day.
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