Okay, this is my first book people, so be brutal! i have more chapters on hand to post if i really need to, but you be the judge.
disclaimor: if i owned star wars, would i be here right now? honestly.
Price of Hunting
How did I get myself into a mess like this! Locked in a sound-proof cell on a Trandoshan Slaver Ship with some other poor souls. My ship is probably being looted as I wait and, to top all that, those slimy lizards are going to collect MY BOUNTY! Well, if you haven't figured it out yet, I'm a bounty hunter. Not the sleazy, kill anyone kind. I am the bounty hunter who repays those debts of others. Otherswho suffered under your evil oppression.If you got onto my hunting list, don't expect to get off without having your head on a platter.
Just asI sat there, sulking in my cell, one of the slavers came in. After shackling me, he lead me to a interrogation room. The captain just entered ( you can tell because he is the ugliest Trandoshan I never wanted to see).
"Who are you, and what are you doing out here" he growls through yellow and rotted teeth.
"First of all, try being a little nicer to your captives."
He glared at me. I only smile.
"Second, if you guys don't know who I am from my ship, the Valiant, you lizards are dumber than I thought."
I got punched in the gut for that one. He's catching on . . .
"Third, to answer your questions my name is Keth Lyon. Obviously, I am a male humanoid about six and a half feet tall (none of your business what planet I'm from), awsomely difficult to maintain build (take pride in it by the way), dark redish/brownish hair (can you see it in this light? I could adjust a little).I was transportingMY bountyuntil some rude slime balls tractor beamed and docked with my ship, gassed me, held me against my will, and interrogated me very rudely." I held a hand against my chin in a thinking gesture and starred at the now fuming creature through sly green eyes. "Hmm, that slime ball I guess would be . . .YOU!"
My statement was met with a kick to the groin and a serious beating. The moreI laughed, the worse I got it, but hey, how can't you? I mean, giggly sleeze buckets with sticks . . .come on!
Soon after the maming I was returned to my cell with one unexpected difference. Well, not to unexpected,I did it after all.I stole the key tomy cell from the one who dragged me in here. I grabbed his side arm too. They don't know it yet, but I have a few big mistakes they made to exploit. Theworst one's being A- So easy to trick. B-Getting me angry. And of course the lovely C- Underestimating my pride. I am a bounty hunter after all. I never miss.
Once the room stops spinning and I can feel my legs, Trandoshan Slaver Season is open. Hehehehe...ow.
R&R PLEASE! I am so desperate! Flame me . . .And i kill you . . .I mean it! (whips out rabbit) oh . ..well, once i find that fricken flame thrower your gonna get it!