Chapter 1

Never have I ever thought to create this story, either way I hope you all like it or not or both.

Aloha beach is perfect for either summer vacation or enjoying a great big celebration, or in this case the loud's celebrating Lori's win in golf, though only one loud is not celebrating in the whole big happy shindig and that's the kid in the squirrel suit sitting by the benches watching them all happy and what not, from within the suit is none other than Lincoln Loud, It's been three months since the bad Luck fiasco and it seems the families belief in his bad luck has all but faded and is instead replaced by a new belief that he's only good luck when he wears the mascot suit, from a distance he may look fine but closer the suit looks like it's been through hell, bite marks, bruises, a few burn marks, small patches of fur missing and worst of all strange dark stains, how he got those is from joining his sisters in their activities from golf tournaments, fashion shows, rock concerts and gigs, comedy routines, Sports events, Cemetery Visits, Alligator wrestling, Pageants, and Science Experiments, even after summer he was still forced to wear the suit which means he had to endure all the teasing and bullying he got at school and his friends didn't know what to do even the teachers don't know what's going on though they have been getting intel of the multiple kids who were bullying him, though Clyde has been asking him why he's going through this, Lincoln remains silent to all his friends, home wasn't as great either since his parents and sisters still think his stuff has been marked by bad luck his room remains empty except for the mattress on the ground and some of his school supplies, even though he doesn't show it deep down he's tormented and heart broken.

And now we enter the present where all Lincoln can do is watch his family from a distance luckily for him the benches have umbrella's but what they don't know is how much heat the suit has taken in this case it's pretty much a living furnace, as Lincoln watches them enjoy they're fun he thinks to himself 'I don't understand? Don't they know I'm here! It's like they don't see me!'

As he goes through his thoughts until someone speaks "Lincoln?" he turns to see where the voice had come from, it was Girl Jordan, throughout the entire time he was in school wearing the suit he noticed that Girl Jordan was the only one not making fun of him and instead has been watching him from a distance looking as worried as his friends.

"Is it okay if I sit here?" she asks as she gets no response "Lincoln?" she asks again and this time he nods in response "Thanks" she replies after sitting, there remains an awkward silence between them.

"You're probably wondering why I'm here wearing just my usual clothes and a sunhat, well me and my parents are here just enjoying the scenery" Jordan explains then looks to Lincoln who just looks down saying nothing.

then an awkward silence come back again after what seemed like two minutes she decides to speak "Why are you wearing that suit? Do you even know what's happening to you at school? Every single kid is pushing you around, mocking you, teasing you and to me that's just wrong on so many levels!" Jordan says trying to get his attention.

She remains silent for a brief second then speaks up again "I don't know whats going on, but I do know that it must have something to do with your family!" she speaks and then notices the way his shoulders are moving indicating that he's crying "It does have something to do with them huh?" Jordan asks as she gets closer to him to try and get it off, he turns his head towards her making her jump back a little but she sucks it up.

"Let me take it off, it looks like you could lose air in there!" as Jordan is about to remove the head, the squirrel body starts to sway back and forth making her confused until it lays onto the sand on his side making her gasp, she immediately gets off the bench and calls for help getting the attention of some of the beach goers, her parents and the life guard who all rush to the scene as Jordan removes the squirrel head she is horrified at what she sees, as people crowd in they are also filled with shock and fear to see a large red heat rash on the boy's face.

The life guard immediately removes the rest of the suit (luckily he was wearing swimming trunks under there) and he tries to hear him breathing "He's barely breathing, someone call an ambulance hurry!" the life guard says as Jordan holds onto Lincolns right hand almost as if she doesn't want him meet his demise, meanwhile the louds who for some reason haven't even heard the calls for help or the frantic cries of the people, maybe it's because of all the noise their making from Lana and Lynn Jr. having a water fight, Lynn Sr., Rita and Lola sun bathing, Lori and Leni taking selfies, Lisa checking on various shell specimens, Luan making beach puns in the water and Lucy under an umbrella applying sunscreen to Lily, but among them the only one not making any loud noise was Luna, the rock star may have had a part to play in the bad luck fiasco, she's been feeling guilty putting her brother through all of this, and all because Lynn lost a baseball game, she's been trying to convince her parents to let him back in the house and yet her voice went unheard, she even tried to approach Lincoln, but knowing what her intentions were, Lynn stopped Luna and told the others, deep down she was feeling like the worst sister ever and her parents appointed her as his legal guardian.

As she looks at her ukulele on the ground Leni notices her sister's sad face "Luna? You okay?" she asks.

Luna finally snaps "NO!" getting everyone's attention "Do you guys not see what's happening?" she starts yelling "Lincoln is suffering because of us!" then Lynn just scoffs "Oh please, even if he was he would've told us by now" then Lola adds "Yeah overdramatic much!" making Luna's blood boil "I'm overdramatic?! All of you are ignoring him and me! This all has to stop! He needs to get out of that suit!" making everyone gasp.

Lynn walks out of the water "Are you crazy? He takes that thing off all his bad luck will spread to all of us!" "I am not getting my beautiful face ruined because of him" "the last thing I need is losing in a golf tournament" hearing all this Luna is close to an even dangerous breaking point until their parents speak "Luna I see where this is going, but you have to understand this is for his own good" Rita says "Lying to us that he's bad luck may have us convinced, but after what happened at junior's game, I'm definitely not planning to lose my job" from Lynn Sr. as Luna looks at them in disbelief "Beside it's not like something bad will happen to him" Lisa says until they all hear sirens.

They all turn their head to see a large crowd of people gathering by the benches "What's going on there?" says Luan until L:una remembers "Lincoln?" they all hear her then they see him being hauled away on a stretcher and then being placed in the ambulance and it drives off "Come on mom and dad!" Jordan motions her parents who agree and they all get into their purple station wagon and follow the ambulance (It was Jordan's mom who called the ambulance), all the louds realize what has happened and then they see Luna bolt towards vanzilla and they all immediately follow and try to catch up to both vehicles.

Meanwhile back on the beach the crowd starts to disperse except for three teenage girls who look at the squirrel suit, the blonde teen picks it up and realizes "It was Lincoln who was at Lori's golf game" as her other two friends hear her "What were they thinking?" says the Red head "What do we do carol?" asks the brunette as Carol gets up and has an idea "Becky, Dana Help me get this into my trunk" Carol says as they follow her and stuff the wretched suit into her car, then they proceed to the changing room and put on their normal clothes, board onto Carol's car and drive off following the other vehicles "Something bad is gonna happen and that kid needs evidence and witnesses" says Carol as Dana and Becky understand what she means.

Meanwhile the Ambulance has arrived to the hospital and Lincoln is immediately put into a room for examination, the Rosato's follow soon after and wait outside, unlucky for the louds they struck traffic "Come on move already!" Lynn Sr. says while honking, all the sisters get worried about what was happening but Luna being impatient decides "Oh to shit with this!" she says "Luna Loud you do not say that in here!" Rita says but is ignored when Luna gets out of the vehicle and proceeds to go on foot trying to figure out where the ambulance went off to she even asks some pedestrians where the hospital is.

At the hospital Jordan and her parents wait for the news from the doctor, the two parents see their daughter's worried expression "Sweetie it's gonna be okay" her mom says.

But just then the door opens and the doctor appears "Doctor is he gonna be okay?" asked Jordan "Are you the family?" he asks "No but we were the ones who called the ambulance" Jesse replies "And our daughter knows Lincoln from school" Richard adds "so the boy's name is Lincoln? Last name?" the doctor asks "Loud, Lincoln Loud" Jordan replies.

"Okay then" as he writes it down then looks at the family and sighs "I would only tell this to the patient's family, but since you folks were the ones who called it in, let me just say his injuries are like all other patient's I've encountered only all at once" the doctor states "He's got a broken right leg, as well as his left arm, a few strange animal bite marks on his side and left leg, luckily they weren't too deep, he's got a heat rash that reaches from his face all the way to his lower body, a few cuts and bruises as well, but either way he's gonna be alright" the doctor finishes.

The rosato's sigh in relief "Can I ask you what happened to him?" the doctor asks, just then the nurse opens the door "Doctor he's awake" she says as the doctor follows "Stay here, I need to check up on him" Jordan and her family nod, with the doctor inside Jordan looks to the wall and her hand forms a fist 'Louds!' she rages in her thoughts.

After thirty to thirty five minutes of waiting Luna finally reaches the hospital, she heads to the front desk and asks "I'm looking for Lincoln Loud!" she says desperately as the receptionist checks her computer "Loud, Loud, Loud, oh here we are second floor room ten" she says as Luna heads for the stairs and races through the hallway and sees a family waiting outside room ten, while at the same time vanzilla finally arrives, Luna approaches until Jordan sees her "You!" she points out looking like she's ready for a fight "Luna!" they all turn to see the rest of the louds.

"Where is he? Where's Lincoln?" Lynn Sr. asks frantically "Where's our son?" Rita also asks, the rosato's look at them with shock and disgust "Your son? You mean the boy who nearly died from heat stroke?!" Jesse retorts "Or from his bite marks?!" Rick adds "or his multiple cuts and bruises?!" Jordan snaps making them confused "Who are you people?" asked Lori "We're the ones who called this all in!" Rick replies back shocking the louds "You were the ones who called the ambulance?" asks Luna only getting a cold silent glare from the other family.

The doors open again revealing the doctor who goes through his notes and rubs his temples "Gees" he then sees the other family and his face changes to complete disappointment "Louds?" he asks "Yes that's us!" "Is Linky okay?" "He's not hurt that bad is he?!" "Please don't let the grim reaper take him!" coming from the family he turns to the rosato's "I think I forgot to mention my name earlier, Doctor Fredrick Shulz" he says to the families "Lincoln would like to see you now" Dr. Shulz says "Really?" asks Rita "Not you!" the doctor yells back at her making them surprised "He wants to see the family that saved him" he turns to the rosato's and opens the door for them in which they enter then the doctor follows and locks the door behind him leaving the louds to question "What just happened?".

Inside the Rosato's see Lincoln sitting up with a cast on his right leg and left arm his face mostly bandaged up to let the rash heal they also see a few bandages on his body "Lincoln?" Jordan asks sitting next to him on his bed he turns to her and smiles, then starts to have tears then hugs her, surprised at this she returns the hug "Thank you!" Lincoln cries making Jordan's mom have tears of her own while her father looks a little guilty at the boy's condition.

Jordan then speaks "Lincoln, what happened to you?" they break the hug as Lincoln looks down "It's okay, if you don't feel like it I won't ask again" Jordan tells him "No it's okay, I already told the doctor, I think you should know as well" Lincoln then tells them the beginning of the no such luck incident then adds the rest.

"After the incident I was told to wear the suit because it gives good luck, I had to go with my sisters to all of their things Lori's golfing tournament, if she missed her shot she would flare out and mistakenly hit me with her club, Leni's fashion show where I was pushed around by all the busy people I would get knock into sewing equipment, Luna's gigs where I was tossed around like ball in the crowd and all she did was rock out, I expected more from my sister/guardian, Luan's birthday gigs where the kids thought I was a piñata and started hitting me with sticks, Lynn's game's where the other team gets mad at losing and Lynn showboating them they would attack me when I was alone just to get revenge, Lucy's grave yard visits where I would accidently fall into one of the open graves, Lana's Alligator wrestling tournaments and I was attacked by an escaped gator, Lola's pageants the other girls would attack me like Lynn's sports rivals and Lisa's experiment tests where I would end up getting a few burns from her chemicals" Lincoln then finishes making the rosato's horrified to realize that this boy had to go through all of that "They sold all my stuff, because they thought it was cursed with my bad luck" making the doctor sigh angrily.

Jordan then hugs Lincoln "I'm so sorry you had to go through that, I should've done something when you came back to school!" she said while crying "What do you mean?" Lincoln asks as Jordan breaks the hug "You may have noticed that I wasn't picking on you right?" Lincoln nods "Well when principal Huggins saw you wearing that suit, he told me to keep an eye on you and report what's been happening" Jordan says "So you were the one who sent those kids to detention?" Lincoln asks as Jordan nods making him smile "Thank you Girl Jordan" Lincoln says "No! I should've done more, I should've talked to you about all of this, but instead I just hid in the shadow and let you go through all of that suffering!" Jordan looks down with some tears in her eyes, seeing this Lincoln understands that she's filled with guilt but know that she didn't cause this, he uses his other arm to make her look at him and wipe away a stray tear "even though you didn't do anything else to stop this, at least I know there was someone else out there who cared about me" Lincoln confesses as both kids hug each other, while Jordan's parents as well as the doctor smile at this touching moment.

Then Rick has an idea and brings out his phone "Rick what are you doing?" Jesse asks getting the Kids and the doctor's attention "I'm gonna call someone about this, I can't let this whole ordeal slide Lincoln" he says while holding his phone to his ear waiting for a call, Lincoln soon realizes what he means and knows that it was about time someone laid down the law.

Meanwhile outside the Louds wait for their son to be okay but soon get a bad feeling in their gut, while Luna looks at the curtain covered window with multiple mixed feelings.

"I hope Linky will be okay" "I don't want anything bad to happen to him" "I hope he gets well soon" they all say "So you can put him in the suit again?" Luna speaks in a dark tone not looking at her family, causing them to flinch at her words,

"Luna please just calm-""Don't tell me to calm down you insidious bitch!" Luna yells back to Lori "Excuse me?" Lori asks with an angered tone "You heard me!" Luna replies "Enough! Luna you are not allowed to call your sister like that!" Rita talk back "Or what you're gonna lock me outside of the house!" Luna yells back at her mother shocking her and soon they all go silent.

Then the doors open with Dr. Shulz, Jordan and her parents "Doctor?" Lynn Sr. asks "Is he okay?" Leni adds as the doctor stays silent he closes the door and just stands next to it while the rosato's stand in front blocking the path "We need to see our brother!" Lana cries out "Please tell us he's okay!" Lola begs "This was all my fault!" Lynn pleads but the people in front of the door don't move then Luna approaches slowly "Please" Jordan looks at her "You're a disappointment" Jordan replies giving her a cold glare as Luna backs away with tears down her face.

Outside Carol's car pulls up after traffic and just as they exit the vehicle and head inside they see a black Mercedes accompanied by three black Chevy suburban's (like transformers 3) some people in suits come out of them, from the Mercedes a man in his early thirties, standing at six foot two, has neatly combed black hair, brown eyes (thy can't see them through his shades), wearing a black suit with tie along with black pants and shoes with a badge attached to his waist and he enters the building.

"You two with me the rest of you guard the perimeter" as his associates follow "Excuse me" the man turns to see the three teenagers "Are you here to see Lincoln Loud?" Dana asks making the man put his shades down "What do you know about him?" he asks then Carol and the girls carry out the large bag "We have evidence that could help you" Becky says "And we ourselves are witnesses to some of the things that may have happened to him" Carol adds making the man smile "With me, bring the bag" He says as the three girls follow him.

As the louds try to talk to the family and the doctor "Well what do we have here?" they turn to see the man in the suit with his associates and Carol, Becky and Dane? Making Lori and Leni confused, the man approaches the families "My name is Neil Spellman, I am the head of child services" the man says sending a cold chill down the loud parents spine especially Lisa.

"Ch-Child Services?" Rita and Lynn Sr. stutter then Rick approaches him and they shake hands "It's good to see you old friend" Rick greets "It's been too long Richard" Neil replies "How long has it been like two years?" Rick asks "One year and three months, but we're getting off topic here, where's the boy?" Neil asks "In here" Dr. Shulz points out "Thanks doc" as he enters to speak to Lincoln his two guards wait by the side of the door then Neil peeks his head through "Jordan? Can you come in here please?" Neil asks as Jordan follows inside "You guys as well" he points out to the rosato's and the doctor who also enter "And you girls" shocking the three teens who follow while carrying the bag leaving the louds outside being watched over by two large government guys.

Inside Neil starts to ask Lincoln questions of what happened and is not pleased by the confession, he asked Jordan to be there so she can say her side of everything as well as the three teens who tell him of how many they've seen him wear that especially at Lori's golfing games, Neil approaches Lincoln "You do know what your parents did was illegal right?" Lincoln only looks down in disappointment, Neil lowers his shades and sits by Lincoln's bedside "You may have lied about this, but they were the ones who pushed it too far, I can't let this slide, I need to know if your onboard with this" Neil asks as Lincoln thinks and then remembers all the other times he's had to put up with his family he looks at Neil with a look of anger "I'm in" Neil smiles to this then stands up.

"We're gonna have to undergo a thorough investigation, which means I'll need more confessions as well as evidence" Neil explains "My sister Lisa has camera's all around the house and there's a lot more evidence there as well" Lincoln explains "Good that's a start!" Neil thanks the boy "Actually, we may have something that might help" Carol gets their attention and shows Neil the bag "This was left at the beach" Becky says "Lincoln I don't think you should see this" Dana tells Lincoln as Jordan hugs him so he won't see what it was, Neil slowly unzips the bag and witnesses the atrocious suit then closes it "Thank you girls for you cooperation" Neil says to the three teens then turns to Lincoln who is released form Jordan's embrace "I'll be seeing you soon kid" Neil says then turns to the doctor "I'll be leaving my two men here to guard the room so that the 'Family' doesn't get in!" as the Dr. Shulz nods in agreement then he exits the room.

Outside he sees the louds looking all depressed then he speaks to his guards "Make sure they don't come in there, and I mean only them! Got it?" "You got it chief!" they both say as he leaves with the bag and starts talking on his phone "McKenzie! I need you to run a background check on the Loud Family and head to their home and start searching for evidence" "I'm on it boss!" says the man on the other side.

Soon the doctor looks at the clock "Sorry guys visiting hours are over" making everyone sigh as they all start to leave but then Jordan's hand is pulled back and she looks at Lincoln all sad "Please don't leave me" he begs her, she smiles to make him comfortable then hugs him "I'll come back to visit, I promise!" Jordan says making Lincoln hug her "Okay" then they break their hug "I'll get your friends to come and visit as well" Jordan says "That sounds great" Lincoln replies "OH and you don't need to keep calling me Girl Jordan, just Jordan will do" she tells him "Yeah okay, see you soon" Lincoln says as he watches them walk out leaving him with one thing on his mind 'Jordan'.

The Louds then see the Rosato's and the three teenagers exit and then giving death glares to the family "Sorry Louds but you gotta leave visiting hours are over" Dr. Shulz says making the Loud sisters argue "But what about Lincoln?!" "I wanna see my brother!" "I don't wanna leave him alone!" "Please!" "Don't make us leave!" they all start ranting "Enough!" they all stop and look at Jordan "Get out now!" she starts growling making them walk away in fear and guilt, but then they notice Luna just standing there looking at the eleven year old girl.

"Are you deaf? Leave!" Jordan yells at Luna then Luna slowly approaches her "Is Lincoln okay?" Luna asks "Why should you care?!" Jordan replies "I just want him to know, that I'm sorry for-SLAP! Everyone stays silent and Luna looks at Jordan who just slapped her "I'm not gonna ask again! Leave him alone!" making Luna shed tears she runs off until she reaches vanzilla and the rest of the louds follow suite, while Dr. Shulz, Rick, Jesse, Carol, Dana, Becky and the two guards look at Jordan in shock "Nice one honey" Jesse says "Thanks mom, let's go" as they all leave the hospital.

The Loud's head back home all feeling depressed at what has transpired but the one who is most heartbroken is the one in the very back seat crying to herself feeling so much guilt at what she did to her brother, soon they arrive at their house but then are shocked seeing officers and government people going around their home, they all exit vanzilla and then see Neil Spellman talking to an officer.

"Mr. Spellman?" Neil turns to see them "Well what do you know, the suspects return to the scene of the crime" Neil says with a smile "What are you doing here? And who are these people?" Rita asks "Oh don't mind them just getting evidence to fully convict you guys to serving your future sentence" Neil says shocking the parents then Lisa sees someone with a large box, the man opens the box and a large computer transforms out and attaches wired to the side of the house and he starts hacking.

The man hacking looks all too familiar to Lisa "M-Martin McKenzie?!" Lisa stutters in fear "Oh so you know him?!" Neil asks back making the Louds confused "He's the leading man of FutureTech and is a representative to the Nobel and science committee!" Lisa explains in fear "Hack complete! I've got the evidence chief!" Martin says as he closes his computer "The security codes on this dump site was nothing but child's play to me" martin adds "Good! Get it to the FOB immediately!" Neil says "You got it chief!" Martin heads into the van and it drives off, soon the rest of the guys have finished their search and have claimed a lot of evidence and are also heading out then Neil turns to the Louds "Enjoy you freedom while it lasts!" he says as he gets into his car and leaves.

The Louds then look at each other, knowing that this is now over for them.

To be continued…

This is it my Loudsters, my first NSL Fanfiction along with my new OC's in the mix, I've been keeping this story bottled up in my head since I first posted A Sparking Relationship! Also there will be Jordacoln in future chapters, hope you guys enjoyed it next chapter is coming, please review!