DISCLAMER : IM NOT KISHIMOTO , SO I DON'T OWN NARUTO
My Very first fanfic , thanks to Ma'am Soprano-in-Waiting for helping me formulate this Fanfic
CHAPTER 1 : The Malformed Jutsu
Story :
It was one of the ominous night in the history of konohagakure , It was one of the night when the nine-tailed beast was freed from its last jinchūriki, " Was Kushina's Barrier not enough?" as the Sandaime Hokage sat up from his seat to see that the kyubii is already in the village's premises as the ANBU agents beamed at the hokage's door "Lord Hokage, the Kyubii is already –", "I already know it," replied the Sandaime, cutting the Anbu agent's report, "evacuate the citizen's immediately and inform all the shinobi in the vicinity to suppress the beast as long as we can to until the Yondaime is back", as the Sandaime jolted off his seat to prepare for the incoming suppression.
The citizens are screaming in all kinds of direction as the chunnin ninjas composed by Kakashi, Guy, Kurenai and Asuma went out of their way to calm the citizens, to save those with cassualties and to inform them about the refugee camp just behind the hokage's faces, "Please stay calm and follow the other citizens to the monument!" as Kakashi shouted for the whole citizens inside the block's vicinity to hear while helping an injured citizen from the fallen debris, "ARRGGHH !" as the man shouted from the pain, " You need attention sir" as Kakashi carried the man to his arms when all of the sudden a bright yellow flash came out of nowhere to where the Kyubii is. "Minato-sensei.." Kakashi thought in a worried tone while looking at the bright flash of yellow when the man he carried shouted in pain again "Sorry about that" Kakashi replied as he jumped from roof to roof to the place where the medic corps lies.
The people on the front lines were getting weary as the fox just keeps on spoiling their traps and haven't budge at the slightest upon intaking some of the ninjas most powerful ninjutsu, until their vicinity has been enveloped by a gash of bright yellow light, "Th – The Yondaime is here !" Shouted some shinobi as the bright light seized thus seeing a blond man in his mid twenties looking very stern at the beast , " Minato !" The Sandaime shouted as he closed the gap between him and his successor. "Hiruzen-san" Minato replied in a weary voice, looking at Hiruzen, " I'm going to do something crazy tonight" as the Yondaime's voice trailed off and his sad expression covered his face while focusing back to the matter at hand, "What are you trying to do Minato?" Hiruzen replied while trying to decipher his successor's expression, "There's no more time" Minato replied while gathering his confidence and stood in attacking stance, biting his thumb and performed a sequence seals till he slammed his hand to the ground "Kuchiyose no Jutsu !" Minato shouted as smoke enveloped the area revealing a giant toad "Gamabunta-san" he shouted as he jumped on top of the toad boss's head " Kid, what is this kind of situation that you have put me unto again?" the Toad Boss exclaimed while deflecting and countering all the lashes made by the tailed-beast "Gamabunta-san, I'm counting on you" Minato said regardless of the Toad Boss's rant about the current situation
"Not got a choice doesn't it?" the Toad Boss replied in complete surrender he sigh "Well, that leaves only one thing" Minato thought as he discussed to himself the plan that he made.
The Fox attacked the giant toad with one of its tails which Gamabunta deflected and countered with the help of his sword, after the toad found an opening he the swing his sword to the fox's neck making the nine-tailed beast to roar in agony, Minato then jumped off the toad's back while evading the fox's tails while falling, after making contact with the fox, the whole area was again endulged by a bright yellow light created by Minato's famous jutsu, after the light seized, the beast was gone
"No, it can't be ..." the Hokage stammered as he watched how the beast was gone along with his successor and noticed what the real plans of his successor that he is trying to accomplish
"Rabbit, Monkey!" shouted the Sandaime as two ANBU agents came to his request immediately as he shouted "we're going to follow Minato" as he ran towards the area where Minato and the beast teleported
Minato landed the fox in the opening just feets away from his family, He was almost done with his plan when all of a sudden chakra chains were trying to envelop the fox.
"Kushina !" Minato shouted as he quickly ran towards his wife ,"what are you doing?" he said in a worried voice ,
"I'm going to reseal the fox within myself" she gapped as sweat ran to her bare skin towards the ground "so that at least , i can halt the kyubii's rampage for at least 3 years" she finished her statement as her nose flared and mouth opened to take up more air, "You don't have to i have a plan" Minato replied as he watched Kushina gapping for air while he performed a sequence of seals,
Kushina furrowed her brows while looking the sequence of seals as she stammered at what he was trying to do
"Don't tell me you're going to.." Kushina's voice staggered as she can't believe what her husband is trying to perform, "...But you'll die!"kushina shouted, still can't believe on what his husband is trying to do
Minato said in a wavering tone " i know the consequences clearly Kushina, but this is the only way to conserve the peace, I'm going to seal the Yin Chakra within myself and the rest to Naruto so that he can use it for the future" as he said with a smile that can't even be fathomed by even death itself
"Ah-, I guess there's no stopping you right?" Kushina asked as she know that it was hopeless to convince her husband to do the seal
"You don't have to worry, Kushina, you'll be meeting him sometime in the future." Minato said, to put on assurance to his wife,
"Well here goes Fuinjutsu: Shiki Fujin !" Minato shouted
As the Death God soared towards one of the beasts' legs and took the chakra to Yin Chakra to the caster,"tsskk.. The Yin Chakra is too much for my body to handle" Minato thought to himself as he loses his balance.
"Minato.!" Kushina shouted in worry, "I'm okay" Minato replied while he tries to gather his chakra and strength for the last step in his plan.
"Well then, kushina are you ready? " Minato asked in a reassuring voice
"As we'll ever be." Kushina smiled at him
"Then..." Minato said as he summoned the sealing altar and performed a set of seals with difficulty, "Shit ! my strength is weakening, I gotta finish the seals.." Minato thought as his feet finally gave in by the pressure,
"Minato !" Kushina shouted as she finally broke in sobs
"Shit now my visions getting blurred" he thought to himself, "I'm okay" Minato said in such difficulty while giving a forced smile to his wife which his wife only sobbed harder
.. As he was finally getting to the last seal, his hands had finally given out only closing in for an other seal to be formed, unaware that the seal he made , made an another jutsu
"Shit!, Shit!, Screw this, why does it have to be now !" Minato thought in such regret as his visions getting their strength back as he sought for the seal he made "OH MY GOD !" he thought to himself as he realized his mistake, then suddenly a mysterious force sucked him in, and in a matter of seconds he vanished from the vicinity only leaving his wife on the prairie
It was another exciting day for a particular 5-year old blond or so he seems, after he escaped his bodyguard's constant watch, he then wandered to a dark alley as he walked towards the main street ignoring the evil stares of the people within the vicinity.
"Why are all of these people staring at me like I'm covered with mud?" Naruto thought as he walked past all the people in the alley it was until he bumped into a scary gangster, "Oh, what do we have here, why isn't it the little monster!" the gangster said with a scary grin on his face, he felt all of the stares of the people around him making him weary of his surroundings.
"I'm no monster, you clown rat!" shouted Naruto to the gangster
" tskk, let's just see about that.." the gangster whispered so only that Naruto can hear, he then looked at the other citizens in the area
" Do you know who he is?" the gangster asked the people "he is the Demon that attacked our beloved village 5 years ago!" he shouted so that the people in the vicinity can hear him, while making Naruto feel like he was taunting him
The people ganged up towards Naruto until one of the people pushed him making him lose his balance and fall towards the naked ground,
"OUCHH!"
Naruto exclaimed while looking at the citizens with such hatred that even made the person that pushed him back away from fear, fear that the beast might be unleashed again, "Let me at him!" shouted the gangster as he punched Naruto at the stomach,
"Ackkk!"
Naruto jolted out in pain but resisted to cry, then the ringleader shouted
"See, there's nothing to fear!, actually we're doing the village a favor by tormenting this brat or even much better.. killing him" the gangster shouted in a sinister way which the citizens took it as an assuring statement by the ringleader while looking at Naruto like it was his final day, the citizens then started pummeling him with punches and kicks that made Naruto curl up in a ball while his tears flowed uncontrollably
"What did i do to everyone to make them hate me so much?" he thought as he's clenching to the bracelet that the Sandaime gave to him as a gift on his 5th birthday
-FLASH BACK -
"Happy Birthday Naruto-kun " The Sandaime said in a cheerful tone as Naruto's eyes widened by the gift that the Sandaime handed.
"Hwaaa.." Naruto said in awe, "what's inside of this box, Hokage-jiji?" he said with stars glistening in his eyes
"Why don't you open it, to find out?" Hiruzen said with a happy grin in his face
"Hwaaa", Naruto said in awe for the second time while unwrapping the gift,
"What a cool bracelet!, thank you so much jiji" Naruto said in a admiring tone while his eyes hasn't losed the shimmers around it
"Glad you liked it, Naruto...!" The Sandaime said in relief while closing the gap between him and the boy he considered grandson, "It's a Hirashiin bracelet" he said then explained what it does
-END FLASHBACK-
Now he was hanging for dear life unto the bracelet the Sandaime gave him
" Screw this !, I'm not even an official Academy Student let alone being a ninja of this village, I can't afford to die here !" he thought as he clenched the bracelet with desperation with his other hand, he was slowly losing consciousness when an unknown voice spoke to him
"Kill them, make them suffer, make them regret what they have done to you !, I'll lend you my power kid " the speaker said in a sinister yet persuasive and assuring tone
The speaker sent chills towards Naruto which made his eyes budge and only to find that the bracelet he was clenching is emitting a bright yellow light that made all the citizens all seized to what they were doing and gasped then backed several steps away
As the light slowly subsided the people saw a figure that's obviously belong to man but what made the people gasp is that the man had a blond hair furthermore, he's kneeling at Naruto as the light has finally gone the people shown expressions of absurbness and surreal.
"Pl-ple-please…. He-help mm-mmee.. " as Naruto has finally gathered the strength to talk
The man to whom Naruto asked for help is still confused by the commotion but obliged to do what Naruto has asked and in a second he was gone.
" Heh.. What's that about? Well no matter, you'll be a death's door when I'm done with you" the gangster said in a malicious tone while holding a metal pipe that is going to hit Naruto in the head but when all of a sudden the citizens behind the gangster has been knocked out in a yellow blur, the Gangster has slowly depicted a sign of uneasy as he held the metal pipe upward in arm's length ready to hit Naruto when the yellow blur has subsided in front of him.
" Wh-What are you?" the gangster stammered as he can't believe that he knocked out the citizens in just a mere second.
"You don't have to know!" the man said in a icy cold tone knocking down the gangster with just a finger
The man looked his surroundings to secure the area "Where am I? The last time I recalled I was in the clearing.." he sighed as finally went to where Naruto lies.
As he went to scoop the Naruto, which finally gave in to the beatings, he somewhat recognize the markings on Naruto's stomach.
"No…. It can't be" he thought while checking the pulse with his fingers
" He needs, medical assistance right away..!" he thought with a sign of weariness as he dissolved in a yellow light
NARUTO'S POV
"Wh-what's going on here" Naruto thought as the light dissolved revealing a familiar figure
" Yon-Yo-Yondaime" Naruto said in suh a weak voice as Minato finally awake
"Where am I?" Minato asked Naruto with such an irritating voice
Naruto ignored his question as he finally said his request, ""Pl-ple-please…. He-help mm-mmee.. " as he finally gave into the darkness
Naruto was awakened by the sound of the ceiling fan.
"Arrggh" as he murmured to himself while looking his surroundings but to his dismay he only sought white ivory halls, "It seems that I'm in the hospital" he said to himself.. "WAIT… THE HOSPITAL?" his thoughts shouted in agony even rivaling the beating he recently received as he jolted out of the bed, gasping for air.
"Good Morning Naruto" the Sandaime said whose sitting just beside his bed "You're out for 3 days.. Where were you, for you to receive that kind of wounds?" he asked somewhat curious yet aggravated to the people whom did some beatings to Naruto
"Hokage-jiji.. " Naruto said in a worried voice, "I'm sorry.." as his voice finally trailed off
"It's okay, you don't have to push yourself, I will wait until you're ready to talk about it" the Sandaime said in assurance as his face was covered by a warmth.
"Thank you.." Naruto said as his eyes wandered off to the corners of the room, evading the guilt
"But what I'm really curious is where did you find the person to help you?" The Sandaime said
Naruto felt a pang of guilt strike his body "Well.." Naruto finally talked and describe his adventure detail by detail
"As I thought, I was really doubtful where the Yondaime came from, so it was the Hirashiin Bracelet" Sandaime said like a load has just been lifted from his shoulders, " Now let's get to the matter at hand.." he said in a serious matter which made Naruto felt uneasy
"Do you know why I gave you the Hirashiin Bracelet?" he asked
" I Don't know" as Naruto finally found the confidence to face the situation
"I gave you the Hirashiin Bracelet because it was a keepsake left by your late father…. Or so we thought he'd be dead" The Sandaime said as he focused his eyes unto Naruto
Naruto felt where this conversation's going "The Hirashiin, based on what you told me, the only Hirashiin user in this village was the late Yondaime.." he said as the fact finally hit him, and it hit him hard
"So that means that my Father is…" Naruto's voice trailed off
"Yes, your father is the Yondaime" The Sandaime said in a matter of fact tone
Naruto was left speechless; he can't believe that the person who'd he treated as a hero was his father.
Naruto felt all of the feelings leaked out, Angry,Happy,Sad,Relieved, he can't decide which feelings are on top, then after a while the Sandaime finally broke the silence
"I'm going to send him in," The Sandaime said while standing up going to the door
Naruto only nodded, the Sandaime smiled at him in assurance "Don't worry, you'll be fine" as he finally opened the door revealing a blond man waiting outside, Naruto felt many kinds of feelings in that small amount of time but this time confuse and panic enveloped his mind
AUTHOR'S NOTE : MY FIRST FANFIC EVER MADE, IT TOOK ME 3 DAYS TO CREATE THE PILOT CHAPTER.. HAHAHA.. I KNOW IT'S ELABORATED IN A WHOLE NEW LEVEL,, WELL ANYWAYS PLEASE REVIEW MY WORK AND TELL ME YOUR OPINIONS ABOUT THE FIC.. IT'LL GIVE ME LOTS OF IDEAS ONTO WHAT I'M PUTTING ON MY 2ND CHAPTER THAT WILL BE RELEASED BEFORE THE END OF FRIDAY NEXT WEEK [[I GUESS]].. HAHAHA
THANKS AGAIN TO : MA'AM SOPRANO-IN-WAITING FOR HELPING ME CREATE MY STORY