Ok I just got inspired…
People here is some advice I will give you for free…
Don't do the normal! Don't go just by the book! Get the characters right and make things complicated. I hate it when people write like fourth graders! Such as…
"oh Edward I love you so much." I was so happy.
Ok first of all we know she's happy, but what about the outcome? What about deeper feelings? You cant just feel happiness, you have other emotions also!!
Ok I hate the fanfic's where Bella is an international singer/ performer…and says on stage!
"This is for you Edward…"
Two things, I just want to turn off the computer and push it off the table in fury when I read those words! If I were to say, Bella were a singer she wouldn't say that because it would be an act of graveling! Sure she misses Edward, but its soooo personal to her that she would keep it to herself! Besides, there are thousands of Edwards out there, and all of them would claim their fame to being the "Edward" of Bella's" hmmm?? Am I wrong??
Bella. X angel. LIES!!!
Bella is not an angel! A human cannot be a angel! It says in the bible, you could be half angel, a Nehalem, but not a full-fledged angel!!
I will update later…on more things I think up…review me or die!!