Ok this is my 1st story, well it's not actually the 1st but it's the 1st story of mine that i've submitted. please be nice and review after you've read the chapter )

here's some info on my oc:

Name :Becky Kitz

Age : 15

Hair : red with black streaks

Eyes : blue but turns red when she's angry and grey when she's possessed

Skin : plae

Tattoos : phoenix on right shoulder and cat on left

''Hey Kai, did ya see that new chick on the skateboard on the way to school today?'' asked Tyson, ''no, should I need to care?'' replied Kai. ''yeah, she's hot, but in a scary way'' said Tyson, ''and?'' asked Kai. ''And just telling ya'' said Tyson, ''whatever'' stated Kai.

''Settle down class'' announced Mr. Jay as he entered the classroom, ''that's better, now we have a new student joining us today. please welcome miss. Rebecca Kitz'' said Mr. Jay and the classroom door opened as a teenage girl stepped in. ''Kai that's the girl I was telling you about'' whispered Tyson, ''whatever'' replied Kai looking at Rebecca from head to toe.

She had red hair, with black streaks and tips, blue eyes, black eye shadow, black lips (obviously lipstick), a black choker with a silver skull dangling off it. A grey vest top revealing two tattoos on both shoulders, black torn jeans with chains on them, a spiked belt, spiked wristbands and black shoes with a flame design on them.

A girl at the back of the room murmured ''what a freak'', ''wanna say that again?'' asked Rebecca coldly and the girl fell silent. 'Now I know what Tyson meant by she's hot but in a scary way' thought Kai, ''Rebecca, please take a seat between Kai Hiwatari and Tyson Granger'' said Mr. Jay pointing to the seat between the two boys.

''Score'' murmured Tyson as Rebecca sat down, as Kai was on her right he noticed the tattoo on her right shoulder. 'It's a phoenix' said Kai to himself, then he looked at Tyson who was trying to move closer to Rebecca and even though she didn't turn her head, Kai could of sworn her eye's turned blood red for a brief second

.Just then the bell for break went ''want me to show you around?'' asked Tyson, ''I think I can show myself'' replied Rebecca walking out the door. As she was walking down the hallway, she noticed a door with a sign that said 'KEEP OUT' in big black letters, ''as if that's gonna stop me'' smirked Rebecca as she opened the door and walked up some stairs.

Meanwhile a certain teenager was sitting on the rooftop of the school until the door handle turned, ''shit'' said Kai and hid behind a wall as the door opened. ''It's Rebecca'' whispered Kai as he watched the girl take a small stereo out of her bag and place it on the floor, she then started doing some combined karate/dance moves.

Kai came out of his hiding place and put a hand on Rebecca's shoulder, she stopped and in a flash, she had grabbed Kai by the arm, flipped him over and had him pinned against the ground aiming a punch at his face. Kai saw it again, her eyes turned red for a second then back to ocean blue. ''Kai, what the fuck are you doing here?'' asked Rebecca getting off him, ''I could ask you the same question'' replied Kai picking himself up. ''I just wanted some privacy from all those airheads down there'' said Rebecca, ''I'll leave you alone then'' replied Kai starting to walk away. ''wait ... don't go, I wouldn't mind the company'' said Rebecca awkwardly, ''I thought you'd never ask'' replied Kai turning back to look at Rebecca.

''look Rebecca - '' started Kai, ''call me Becky'' replied Becky. ''ok Becky, is it just me or do act differently around certain people?'' asked Kai, ''it's true, but I could say the same about you'' replied Becky. ''yeah you could, just don't say it to anyone else, ok?'' asked Kai, ''yeah, as long as you don't tell anyone we actually had a decent conversation'' replied Becky. Ten she started to frown ''when I walk back through those doors to class, I'll be that cold hard bitch again'' said Becky, ''look, I'd like to get to know you more, my place 3:30pm?'' asked Kai. ''Love to'' replied Becky as they walked down the stairs together, they made sure the coast was clear, then they went to their next lesson.

They looked at the seating plan on the wall and it showed that Becky was in between Kai and Tyson again. As Tyson came through the door Becky got an idea, while he was getting his books, Becky put her hand on Tyson's seat. Tyson came over and sat down ''OWIE!'' screamed Tyson as he shot right back up and ran around the room like an idiot. ''Tyson, sit down this instant!'' yelled Mr. Hayes, ''but sir, that seat burnt my butt'' wailed Tyson but after Mr. Hayes gave him a glare, Tyson went back to his chair and hoped it wouldn't burn him again.

Soon enough it was 3:15pm and Becky was on her way to Kai's house, she didn't walk with him because that would make it suspicious. She knocked on the door and Kai answered ''what do you ... oh Becky, come in'' he said, Becky didn't have time to move, Kai had pulled her through the door in a second. ''Kai you nearly pulled my arm out of it's socket'' claimed Becky rubbing her arm, ''sorry, but I saw Tyson just down the road'' explained Kai leading her up to his bedroom.

''Speaking of Tyson, did you see him in class running around like a spaz'' laughed Becky, ''yeah that was funny, he said something like his chair burnt him'' replied Kai opening his bedroom door and walked in.

''Yeah, funny'' said Becky looking worried, 'should I tell him? he's not the sort who blabs secrets, my gift is a secret and I'm only allowed to tell one person. But I don't know whether he's that person' thought Becky.

''Are you gonna come in or am I gonna have to carry you in?'' asked Kai, Becky hadn't realised she was staring into space in the doorway ''coming'' replied Becky walking in and shutting the door behind her.

''Kai, can you keep a secret?'' asked Becky sitting next to him on his bed, ''yeah, I never really talk to people anyway'' replied Kai. 'OK, this is it' thought Becky, she held up her hand revealing the palm of her hand. She closed her eyes and concentrated, ''Becky? what are you ... what the fuck?'' asked Kai as a little flame appeared in the centre of Becky's hand.

''Kai, please don't tell anyone'' said Becky making the flame bigger, ''I won't tell a soul'' promised Kai. ''I bet you think I'm a freak now'' said Becky bouncing the flame from hand to hand, ''no I don't, I think you're an extraordinary girl who can make fire'' replied Kai.

''I'm known as the Fire Starter'' said Becky, Kai leaned in but Becky moved away. ''I'm sorry'' said Kai, ''no Kai I'm sorry, last time I kissed someone, I nearly killed him'' frowned Becky. Kai cupped her chin ''I can take the heat'' replied Kai moving closer, ''I don't wanna hurt you'' said Becky. ''You won't, trust me'' replied Kai and with that kissed her, Becky looked at him and he looked perfectly normal. 'Maybe he is the one' thought Becky as Kai kissed her even deeper, he lay her on the bed and ran his fingers through her hair. ''See, I can take it'' said Kai, ''I know, you're the one'' replied Becky. ''What do you mean, the one?'' asked Kai, ''well prophecy says that a fire starter can only tell and love one person, I didn't tell the last guy about my power but I kissed him and he nearly died. The one person I can be with is the person who can take my heat'' explained Becky.

''One more thing, do your eyes change colour when your angry?'' asked Kai, ''um yeah'' replied Becky. ''I have to go now'' said Becky getting up and walking to the door, ''thank you, I'll see you tomorrow'' she said and walked down the stairs and out the front door.

She stepped out onto the pavement and a single red rose fell on her head. She picked it up and looked up to see Kai looking down from his bedroom window, Becky blew him a kiss and walked off home.

please review and give me confidence to continue Thanx )