It has been brough to my attention that I was following the book too closely here, I have taken the story down and will work on this issue, I suppose part of me didn't think about how closely I was following the text. If this had been brough to my attention without reporting me I might be in a better mood about this but as I was immediately reported without warning I was a little disillusioned.
I will rewrite this and try harder but it will be a few months before I bring it back as I am currently juggling two jobs and looking for somewhere to live for Uni next year, my apologies to you all.
Sincerely
Allconspirer