Hey readers, tell me what you think about the story. If I messed up anywhere please tell me. I'm a new writer, so anything helps.
I am walking around town with nothing to do. So I enter a music store. The blaring Rock makes it's way into me, until I'm bumping my head to the tune. Suddenly I hear screams, and a giant monster breaks down a wall with the roman numeral III on its chest. My eyepatch over my right eye fell of and now, I see a horrific thing, surrounded by purple and red fire from my right eye, beside it and I almost throw up. It laughs as it shoots everyone it sees. I hide behind a music shelf hoping it didn't see me. But to my misfortune, it did see me. Suddenly a man with a strange mask and full body armor comes around the corner and jumps into the music store. He takes out what look like a ring with metal bars going out on opposite sides of the ring with spikes all over and he charges the monster. the monster seems to have multiplied. There are now 3 different monsters with the exact same look, but different color and different horns. He attacks the monsters and in no time they are gone.
"Woah" Is all I can say.
Something begins to glow in his pocket and he takes it out. It takes on the form of a silver rod about 2 feet long.
"Look like we got ourselves a new exorcist." He says coming towards me, then hands me the rod.
I don't know what to do. I just stare up at him questioningly, waiting for him to continue. He must of read my mind.
"Exorcists destroy things called Akuma. The Akuma are made by the Earl. The Akuma are sorrowful machines and must be destroyed." he says then I cut him off.
"I've heard enough I'll be an exorcist." I say. My love for adventure and destruction gets in the way of everything, especially boring lectures.
"Well, you'll need training before going in the order. I guess by the way you cut me off earlier you don't want to know what it is?" he asks.
"Nope." I reply
"Well at least I don't have to give the lecture. Follow me." he commands.
I grab my eye-patch and put it back on. I cover the upside down star with my hair and follow him. Then he turns.
"Why do you have an eye-patch if you don't need it?" he asks.
"I see things coming from people when I walk through town. I couldn't stand it anymore so I stole one." I reply.
"Why did you steal one?" he asks.
I can tell what he is doing, he is trying to uncover something about me, probably to confirm something he already knows.
"Well my family was killed by one of those monsters. That's all I'm going to say." I reply
"OK then, but if you're going to become my apprentice, you have to take it off and tell me if you see any of the 'things'" he says.
"Fine." I say and take it off.
Then we walk out.