This is my first Twilight Fan fiction! I hope it goes well! Please please please remember to review this story, I haven't been getting any reviews on my stories at all and how am I supposed to improve any of my future stories if no one is even reviewing them? I can't. It really annoys me, so I would be so so grateful to anyone who reviews this, I promise I will use everyone's advice for my future stories and I do accept all criticism so please feel free to review whatever you think! Thank you and enjoy the story!
"No...stop...please...Jacob...don't hurt him...I love him..." gasped Bella Swan as she tossed and turned in her warm, comfortable bed, sweat gathering across her forehead.
She was dreaming, well, having a nightmare really. Edward and Jacob hadn't been getting along at all recently. In fact, they really want each other dead! The reason for this was Bella. They both loved Bella.
Bella had felt torn between the two young men, but she preferred Edward. She had always preferred Edward. This had infuriated Jacob to the point of him running away and hiding from her for so many weeks in utter disgust of her decision. Bella sort of felt sorry for him, but she didn't as she had loved Edward first, and she and Jacob could still be close friends, but Jacob wasn't being a good friend as he would never accept her choices.
In the nightmare, she and Edward were walking through the forest together, admiring the scenery of multicoloured flowers scattered everywhere and rays of warming sunlight pouring through the gaps in-between the lush green leaves of the towering trees above. They were both laughing and grinning with joy, which is how Bella always was with Edward around. He was the light to her darkness, the joy to her sadness. He meant everything to her, even her own life which had been on the line so many times she had lost count!
Bella and Edward were wandering through the forest, when suddenly a tall black figure dropped from one of the trees and landed neatly on the ground on two feet. Bella and Edward stopped moving and gasped in shock and horror as they recognized the man with smooth jet-black hair, light peach skin, sharp chocolate-brown eyes, and snow-white teeth which were big and pointy like razors.
"J-J-Jacob?" spluttered Bella, stammering back in surprise. "Hi Bella, having fun with mister blood-sucker here?" asked Jacob, a growl in his voice as he narrowed his eyes at Edward who glared threateningly at him in response.
"Y-Yeah, I am." answered Bella, her voice growing weak in fear that a fight was about to start any second. "In fact, we were just about to leave and go back to Bella's house. Let's go Bella." pointed out Edward, carefully wrapping his arm around Bella and leading her away from Edward.
A low growl reverted in Jacob's throat. "Don't you dare turn your back on me, Vampire!" he exclaimed.
Edward glanced back at him, "Oh believe me, I'm just protecting Bella from your violent claws, not that you'd care, you vile dog!" snarled Edward.
"Insult me again and it'll be the last thing you ever do! Get that fact into your cold head, snowman!" threatened Jacob in a mocking way. That was it. He'd pulled the last straw well and truly this time!
Edward released Bella and zoomed with his super Vampire speed up to Jacob and hit him straight on before he had time to react. Bella watched in terror as Jacob was sent flying into his tree, which he hit with great force!
"JACOB!" she cried, sprinting up to him as he lay on the ground on his front, silent and still like a statue. Praying he was fine, Bella knelt down beside him and was reaching her hand out towards his neck to feel his pulse, but she shuffled back in shock when he suddenly sprang to his feet.
Jacob could have killed Edward with the fuming glare he was giving him. Bella had never seen Jacob so angry before, not even all those times he had encountered Edward before! She then realized what was about to happen…Jacob was going to transform into his Werewolf form, his true form, and attack Edward. Bella was not going to let that happen. She didn't want either of them fighting over her. Without stopping to think, Bella scrambled up to her feet and stood in front of Jacob, blocking his view of Edward.
"Get outta the way, Bella." ordered Jacob calmly. Bella swallowed a loud whimper that tried to force its way up her throat and out her mouth.
"No, Jacob. I won't let you and Edward fight over me, not again! This is getting ridiculous now! It has to stop right now! Do you hear me?!" she yelled.
"Oh please, don't waste your breath defending this monster you call a man! He's going to ruin your life, and he knows it! He wants that! He's always wanted that right from the start when you two first met! Just look at him Bella, open your eyes…..he's a Vampire! He's no friend of humans, he's their predator, he EATS humans! He wants to eat you and he will, I know he will! But he's gonna have to get through me first to get to you!" exclaimed Jacob, shoving Bella aside so she fell over.
"NO! STOP!" she screeched….too late. Where Jacob had been standing, there was a large, hazel-furred Wolf baring its knife-like talons that were dripping with sliver. Edward tensed his muscles so they were ready to fight. Bella slapped her hands over her ears and turned away from the pair, as Jacob pounced straight at Edward!
Edward was able to dash out the way before Jacob could hit him, but Jacob noticed this and skidded to a halt before he collided into a tree. Edward sprinted at Jacob and leapt onto his back, clinging onto his fur. Roaring with frustration, Jacob flung Edward off him, causing some of his precious fur to be ripped out.
Edward landed on his back on the ground, but sprang to his feet and jumped up high into the air as Jacob slammed his huge paws on the ground where Edward had been. Edward clung onto a tree branch, flipping himself up onto it so he was standing on top of it.
"Jacob, just stop! One of us is gonna get killed if we carry on like this! I don't wanna hurt you, let's just talk and sort things out that way!" pleaded Edward. Jacob ignored him and started climbing up the tree, digging his rock-hard claws inside the solid bark.
Edward dropped down off the branch on to the ground, and Jacob dropped off the tree trunk. The two glared madly at each other for a few minutes, but then Jacob pounced on top of Edward and slashed his claws out at Edward's chest….
"EDWARD!" shrieked Bella, jerking up in her bed. Gallons of sticky sweat had formed along her forehead, and her sheets were wrapped tightly around her body as she had been tossing and turning a lot in her sleep. She sighed with relief. It had just been a dream. Well, a nightmare, to put it more precisely.
Suddenly, she heard a fearsome roar followed by a paining scream coming from somewhere outside her house. Then all was silent. The noises had sounded too familiar. Bella gasped in fear, "No…"
So, that's the first chapter! What did you think? Please please please don't leave this page until you've told me your opinion on this chapter, I would be ever so grateful! I'm not gonna start the next chapter until I get some reviews on how this chapter went, so I can work properly on the next one! If you wanna know what happens next, and it's gonna be thrilling and disturbing at the same time, please review what you thought of this! Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed it!
