Me: I have been making changes to the original YuGiOh show.
Keiichiro: In her head and notebook. She doesn't own YuGiOh, or these changes would certainly take place.
NOTE: Only writing some scenes, not full episodes. I'm too lazy to do THAT! Here are some changes I would do in season 1.
Characters~ Yugi Motou, Joey Wheeler, Tristan Taylor, Tea Gardner, Mana Yousouchi (Made up last name), Ryou Bakura, Mai Valentine, Maximillion Pegasus, Bandit Keith, and all the minor characters.
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Episode 3…
Tea: Hey, Mana, isn't that Bakura?
Mana: You mean Ryou? Where?
Tristan checks.
Tristan: Not there. Tea, your mind is playing tricks on you or something.
Tea: I swear I saw him!
Mana: Don't bring my hopes up like that!
Tea and Tristan look at her oddly.
Mana: Uhh… let's just look for Yugi and Joey and get outta here!
Episode 12…
Ryou: So what are you guys' favorite cards?
Joey: I like the Flame swordsman, 'cause he's strong and can slice through anything!
Tristan: I like the Cyber Gunman!
Mana: I like the Dark Magician Girl!
Tea: I like The Magician of Faith!
Yugi: And I like The Dark Magician! So what's your favorite card Bakura?
Ryou: I like the Change of Heart.
Episode 17…
Ryou: I wonder what these coffins are doing here…
Tristan: Maybe it's another sick joke Pegasus thought would scare us.
Mana: I don't know…
Yugi: Pegasus wouldn't go that low, would he?
Tea: I wonder what's in them…
Suddenly the coffins opened and landed on Ryou and Tea. They started running around.
Mana: Get off of him you dead corpse!
She pulled off the skeleton off of Ryou and landed backwards on Tristan. Ryou fell on top of her.
Yugi: GET OFF!
He pulled the skeleton off Tea.
Episode 18
Tea: Hey, where's Bakura?
Mana: I don't know…
Yugi: He was right behind us…
Ryou: AAAAHHHHHH!
All: Bakura!
Ryou: AAAHHHH! SOMEBODY HELP ME!
Yugi: What's that on his back… RUN!
Everyone looked and had an anime reaction. A skeleton was hanging off his back. They ran for it.
Ryou: WHY ISN'T ANYONE HELPING ME?
Suddenly Tristan pulled it off and smashed his head.
Tristan: How does that feel?
Mana: Ryou, I'm gonna kill you…
Tea: Can we get out of here, before I lose my stomach?
They walk on and find a fork in the pathway.
Yugi: Which way is it to find Joey faster?
Ryou was about to go closer, when he stepped on a swith.
Ryou: What the-?
Mana: Can you guys hear that?
Yugi it sounds like a rumbling…
Ryou: I'm sorry, I am so sorry.
Yugi: Shh.
Ryou covered his mouth. Suddenly, a frickin BOULDER came at them. They had an awesome anime reaction, and ran for their lives.
Ryou: I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry…
Suddenly he tripped, and got run over by the boulder.
Mana: Ryou!
Yugi: There's nothing we can do! Just keep running!
Suddenly Tristan spun around and prepared to punch the boulder.
Tristan: TAKE THIS!
Suddenly the balloon popped. What? A BALLOON?
Yugi: So it was just a balloon with a speaker in it.
Tristan: IT WAS PEGASUS AND ONE OF HIS GROSS JOKES!
Mana: Ryou? Are you all right?
Ryou: ehh… uhh…
Episode 28…
Everyone parted in separate rooms. Mana was left, there were no more rooms.
Tea: Sorry… I only want to sleep on my bed. And the couch isn't big enough.
Mana looked at everyone else. The all shook their heads.
Ryou: You can sleep on my bed. I'll sleep on the floor.
Mana's eyes glittered with gratitude and entered Ryou's room.
Tristan: NOTHING WEIRD IN THERE GUYS! WE'LL BE ABLE TO HEAR YOU!
Mana: SHUT UP!
Suddenly, in the middle of the night, Tristan knocked on Ryou and Mana's door. Mana opened it.
Mana: What?
Tristan: I want to check on Pegasus's stuff. And some parts of his castle.
Ryou: Why?
Tristan: I think he cheats on his duels. And we don't want him to cheat off Yugi or Joey, right?
Mana: I guess. You up for it Ryou?
Ryou: Sure, I guess.
Ryou and Tristan start inspecting the dueling platforms. Mana was trying to stay awake.
Tristan: Come on, keep looking, there has to be a hidden camera in here or something.
Mana: Maybe Pegasus isn't a cheater Tristan. Maybe he's good at guessing, like a psychic or… magician.
She gets a far away look as Tristan explains why he doesn't trust psychics.
Mana: Hey look!
She jumps down and lands on Tristan's back. She and Ryou run up to inspect it. The hole was flower shaped.
Ryou: I wonder how moonlight can go through…
Mana: Tristan, stand on the dueling platform and pretend you're holding a card.
Tristan holds up his hand. The light hits it exactly. He climbs up to look into the hole and sees a distant tower.
Tristan: Maybe one of Pegasus's goons look through a telescope to tell him what's in the opponent's hand!
Mana: Maybe he hides a Bluetooth in his hair.
Tristan: There's bound to be proof in that tower! Let's go there right now.
Ryou: Bu—but what about the guards!
Tristan: Don't worry about them, they won't catch us.
They walk on and try to find a way into the tower.
Mana: it's like a maze in this thing!
Tristan: Shh, I see guards around the corner.
Ryou: There are guards around every corner.
Mana: We're going in circles! By sunrise, we would get there, but get in BIG trouble by Pegasus!
Tristan spies a rope with a hook and grabs it.
Tristan: Hey guys, I got an idea.
They start shimmying along the ledge. Suddenly, Mana loses her step and almost falls. Before she could die, Tristan and Ryou catch her and cover her mouth with their hands before she could scream. The guards look up and see nothing. Mana pushes their hands away.
Mana: So this is your brilliant plan? To sneak in through the outside?
Tristan: Yep, at least there aren't any goons here.
They continue. Tristan throws the rope up.
Tristan: You go first, so Ryou could catch you, and since I'm the strongest, I go last and catch both of you if you fall.
Mana: Okay.
She starts climbing, Ryou blushes.
Tristan: What's wrong?
Ryou: I… never mind…
He starts climbing and thinks to himself, 'Don't look up Ryou, you can't look up!'
And of course, he looks up.
Ryou blushed furiously and started cursing himself for being a bad boy.
Mana: Ok, I'm up.
Ryou: I'm sorry…
Mana: For what?
Ryou: Looking up your skirt…
Mana: YOU WHAT?
Tristan: Man Bakura, I never knew you would do that!
Ryou: I'm sorry…
(A/N Could not resist at… all…)
AND CUTZ!
Me: That's some of that. Season one done, well, that isn't even half of what was in my notebook!
Keiichiro: She's not lying… she liked changed the whole season! Review please.
Both: Arigato!