Just imagine this. The first day of your life, you are awoken by a sharp poke. Your eyes open and you come to life. You look and see two kind and loving faces. They belong to two bodies, who are your Mama and Papa.

You love them very much, but you realize that your love for your Papa may be becoming more then how a child loves her father. But your Papa loves your Mama, and you love them to much to disturb their happiness. So you sink farther inside yourself, until you barely speak at all.

Your Mama and Papa are very worried about you, but you don't want to disturb their love. You stay by yourself and are lonely, but you know you are doing something good.

One day, your Mama and Papa tell you they want to show you something. You resultantly agree, and follow hem to the place where you were awoken. You see, simply put, you. They wake her up and you have a little sister. They name her Elda.

Elda is your life jacket. She keeps you from going to far inside. You love your little sister more then you believed even a human could. You share your thoughts on everything. She listens to you cry at night, over your love that will never be returned.

A love that was growing stronger every day, that hurt you more every day. Even Elda couldn't save you from this pain. So you hide, hide inside yourself, hide until you must be confined to bed, as you couldn't move. Your broken heart prevented you.

You were ready to completely lock yourself inside, to terminate your system. You wanted to leave and never come back. This was your greatest wish, and your sister greatest fear.

If Elda had been human, she would have cried. But Elda was a persecom, as you were. You were ready to go, to leave her. But you were offered a choice, a choice free of suffering, yours or Eldas. Elda offered to take you inside of her. To take your memories, so that you would live on as a separate being inside of her, like a conscience. You accepted.

As you held your sisters hand, you felt your power draining from you. You could feel yourself being sucked out of this mechanical thing you called your body, and into Elda's. Everything began fading, and you heard your sister lovingly, say your name.

"Freya…"


So, what did you think? My first attempt at Chobits! (I don't own it.) Please review!