So Guys! I'm really nervous and excited at the same time cause this is my first time writing a fanfic, or any story to be exact. And English is not actually my main language, but yeah, its acceptable. (Online games teach you better English than school, seriously). I am all new to this and really, I don't know what to do. Be aware though that this is only a test to see if I can write something that you all would like. Please give reviews and strict criticism if possible. Now to end my blabbering and let's proceed to reading! And yes, Zootopia belongs to Disney and I don't own the characters that are used here. Expect an OC later on. ;)
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"Carrots, can you turn that wiper off?" said the fox with a growl, irritated by the squeaky noise. "It kinda reminds me of your squeals." he faced his partner with a half-smirk.
The rabbit just rolled her eyes, annoyed by how childish her partner's behavior is. "Its raining, Nick. I need it to see where I'm driving."
"Why do we even need to patrol at this hour! Its past 9 already!" Nick said, raising his hand in a confused manner.
(Sigh) "There are reports saying they found a weird mammal at Savannah district. Shady, hooded and runs away when interacted."
"Seems like a normal everyday thug to me." the vixen said, slumping back in his seat. "I missed watching my nightly sit-coms."
(Snort) "O-ho, please. Every night is a sit-com with you here." Judy said, punching Nicks arm.
"Ow!", he feigned pain. "I don't know what hurts more, the punch or the bad joke."
The rabbit socked him much harder this time. Wheeze. "Does it hurt to... (Cough) take a joke (Cough) or two? Jeez, Carrots!", Nick said recovering from the blow.
"You were just begging to be hurt, Nicholas.", Judy smirked. She glanced at Nick with half-lid eyes saying, "And you wouldn't be mad at me anyways."
The fox took a deep breath, returned his half-smirk face and replied "And why is that, sweetheart?".
"I know you love me.", she said smiling, eyes still glued to the road.
Nick was caught off guard. He blushed a bit and replied "Do I know that? Yes, yes I do." He grinned at Judy. He was still a bit confused about his emotions for his partner. Although, he's smart enough to know that he loves Judy MORE than that of a friend, a best friend or a partner. Love has its ways of surprising mammals. After 15 months from the day they met at the Ice cream shop, he never knew he'd fall in love with this ball of fluff beside him.
It took him a year to realize he had already fallen for Judy. She was never the stereotype like the whole society is. She sees him as a mammal being, a friend you can rely on, a partner to depend on. She changed his whole world inside-out. She made him realize that giving up being a con-man is the best choice. He loved how determined she is at times, how she twitches her cute pink nose when distressed. And Gods, what he loves the most is her eyes. Those amazing pair of amethysts. Her eyes seem to hold everything about her. He would stare at them breathlessly, indulging in their kind warmth.
Judy caught Nick starring at her. "Uh." She snapped her fingers while saying, "Earth to Nick."
The fox blinked in surprise and blushed a deep shade of red behind the thick layer of fur. "I-I... Uh.", he scratched his head in confusion. Judy glanced at Nick with a perplexed look, worried about what's bothering her partner.
"Something you wanna talk about?", she asked concerned.
"Eh- Hehe.. Yeah, maybe I just need some shut-eye. You wanna grab coffee? My treat!", he replied, perspiration beading his fur. Come on Nick! What happened to 'Don't let them get to you.'!, he thought rubbing his snout.
Judy smiled, still confused about her partner's recent behavior. "Sure. But seriously, Nick. What's bothe-"
"Officer Fangmeyer and Wolford reporting, strange mammal sighted at East Avenue, requesting back up."
"Officer Hopps and Wilde reporting, ETA 10 minutes."
Judy's ears twitched in excitement,"That's our cue!". Nick wore his shades, to give that 'cool' and 'intimidating' effect. "Carrots, step on it!".
The car wheels whirred and not much later, they were speeding past vehicles, taking hard turns, passing red lights and mostly breaking the law with their actions. Nick was used to Judy's driving by now, she's worse than a proffesional drag racer.
"Over there!", Nick pointed to the other Police vehicle that's parked ahead, with silhouettes of which he assumed would be Officer Wolford and Fangmeyer.
Judy drove to them and asked, "Where is the mammal!".
"Whatever it is got away, but we think it's still in the vicinity.", answered Fangmeyer.
Everyone was on the edge except for Nick, he's more bored about the situation. Judy noticed this. "Can you take this more seriously!"
"Serious as in finding Bigpaw, the Lochness Monster or an alien that visited Zootopia? I think I'll pass. And I need my coffee."
Judy facepawed and continued saying, "We should split up and contact each other in case we find the mammal in question."
Officer Fangmeyer and Wolford started down the alleyway. Judy glanced at Nick with eyes that can shoot daggers. "Come on! The earlier we finish this, the better. And my uniform is getting wet."
Nick rolled his eyes and said, "Whatever you say, Carrots."
Judy stepped out of the car, waiting for her partner to follow. The bunny ran across the street, spying dark alleys for movement, Nick was on her tail. They searched but to no avail of finding clues or the mammal itself.
She grabbed her communicator, "Officer Hopps and Wilde reporting in, no sign of the mammal."
"Same here. We should return to the station and report this to the Chief.", came a static radio reply.
"Roger." She returned the communicator to her side. "Nick, we have to go back now." She realized Nick wasn't following her. "Nick?" She backtracked to the car, all the while searching for her partner. "Wilde, where are you!"
"Carrots! Over here!", she followed the voice to an alleyway with a series of turns. She found Nick hunched over a bag. He was rummaging through the contents in the shade of a building.
"Hey! What do you think your doing?", she said confused. "You do know that this is equivalent to stealing.", she tapped her feet in frustration.
"First of all, no one leaves their bags, with things inside, out in the rain. Second, it could be the weird mammals stuff." He pulls out some clothes and certain necessities. "Oh, is this chocolate?", he pulled a Snickers bar from the bag. "That's weird. Never heard of 'Snickers' before."
"Nick! Put that back right now!", she yelled.
"Oh-ho! They left their bag, its finders keepers now.", he ripped open the chocolate bar and almost ate it when they heard someone atop the roof on the other side of the building.
"Woah! Hold it there Mr. Fox." Lightning flashed across the sky, revealing the silhouette of a hooded figure.
Guys I re-read it and found some mistakes, well not some but many. So I edited it and it seems ok now. Really sorry.
Criticism and Reviews are well taken, positive or negative.