this going to go from 1st person to 3rd person. Starts at 1st person.
I am Quillshade. My life is terrible. I want to destroy everyone who ruined it. I want to claw their life out and leave their bodies for the crows. I want to see their suffering! But something is stopping me. The only reason I'm this way is because of my clan Yarrowclan. They took everything! It started with the... the... Umm what's it's name.
" Clan gather. We have two traitors! Brambleflower and Firestorm! " Ashstar yowled. Quillshade stiffened, slowly getting to her paws. What did my parents do? she thought, bristling. Two toms, Brokenear and Rainclaw, dragged her parents into the clearing.
" These two flea ridden rogues have been give out information to our enemy, Dockclan! " Ashstar hissed. Did they really? she thought, looking up. Her friend, Sleekflower, moved closer to her, frowning." Do you think this is true? " she whispered. Quillshade flattened her ears.
" We did nothing! We were just talking to them! There's nothing wrong with that- " Firestorm started as Rainclaw grabbed her father by the scruff and literally torn out Firestorm's throat. Quillshade closed her eyes, bristling. No! Please let this be a dream! she begged. She heard the distressed you're off her mother as she fled. Murder. Pure murder. Cats of stars, was this supposed to happen? she asked in her head. I will KILL Ashstar. I will take his life like Rainclaw took Firestorm's! she thought fiercely.
I want to slit Ashstar's throat and throw him in a river. I hope he goes to the Dark void. Ugh, he must suffer!
Sleekflower woke up, yawning. Night, and something had woke her up. Quillshade was muttering something, pacing in the den. She had came back right before Sleekflower went to sleep. Sleekflower yawned. " What's wrong? " she asked, shifting in her nest.
Why is Quillshade acting weird? I know, she suffered something that no cat should of... but still. Is she okay? I hope so.
Two days has passed since her parents murder. Firestorm's nwck being ripped out like prey. Quillshade dug her claws into the ground. First cat... Rainclaw. I will enjoy ripping out his throat. she could see it already. His face of horror. She walked out of the den. He's on watch. Lucky for me, of course. she thought, creeping towards him, like she was stalking prey. Cat prey. she launched herself at the tom, tearing into his throat. She almost gagged. She grabbed his by the scruff and dragged how towards the gorge. She heaved him over the edge, gasping for air. She started towards the river.
" Why? " a cat asked, slipping out of the bushes. Sleekflower! she thought. " He killed my father, Firestorm. " she hissed. Sleekflower sighed. " I know... " her friend whispered, sighing. " But-" whatever she said texted was drowned out. She kept seeing that horrible memory. She shook herself.
I can't take this! Stop! It hurts to see that! If I have to kill to get it out I will. Just keep it out!
Ripped out throat. Her father died in the claws of that murderer. I bet he killed mom to. she thought angrily. " Quillshade! Listen. Please. " Sleekflower said. Quillshade shook herself.
" You can't kill. Please. For me? " her friend wailed. I have the power to kill. The power of revenge and you don't want me to use it! she thought, outraged.
Days passed. My friend, Quillshade seems to recover, just a little. Then her younger brother dies. Why is The cats of stars going this? I must continue to help her.
Sleekflower stared at Dashpaw sadly. Quillshade was muttering again. " Why does this keep happening too me!" she hissed suddenly.
I think I know why. I don't want to kill her, but she keeps getting in my way. I must kill Ashstar. I want to see how horror. I'm sorry, Sleekflower.
Lightning dashed across the sky and thunder cried in fury. Quillshade watched, bristling her tail. I have to. I must. she thought. " Sleekflower, let's go on a walk. " she said.
" In this weather? What do you need!" she asked exasperated. Quillshade snorted. " why not? " she asked, flicker her tail. She heard thunder outside. A few yowls sounded.
" Fire! Everybody run! " Featherheart yowled. Ashstar's mate, carring his kits. she thought. Everbody ran, screeching.
I hate this! Must you ruin my plans! Ugh. I can't do this! I will choose my own path. No pushes and nudges from my friend anymore. I'm kinda sorry Sleekflower.
Fire everywhere. Quillshade raced out of camp, yelping as a branch cut off her path. Three cats left. Her, Sleekflower, and Featherheart. Two more. That's all that's left. she thought as the fire crept closer. Featherheart screeched as the fire touched her tail. My end. I curse all kin and future cats that are related to Ashstar, Rainclaw, and Brokenear. May they all die the worst deaths possible. she thought as the fire took Featherheart, Sleekflower, and Quillshade.
I curse Ashstar of Yarrowclan and all his kin, forever. Along with Brokenear's too.