Hi this is my very first story so I am not very good at this since I just started.
I have read many great stories that I love so I just might try my luck at making one.
Still I want to improve myself so I welcome criticism . Well here it goes my first fanfic hope you enjoy.
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A blond haired man who looked to be 17 was walking through the rain with what appeared to be rags on his body that looked like
they would fall of at any given moment. He could not remember anything just that he was named Uzumaki Naruto.
he had walked around for a long time asking where he was he had only gotten the reply of soul society.
He learned of many things about this place such as the Shinigami and a place called the rukon district.
Oh and that he was dead it freaked him out but he didn't care he was to tired and hungry to care about anything else.
He also felt a burning desire to find out who he was and his past. He continued walking but soon colapsed in an abandoned building. He soon awoke to find it was near afternoon and still he had yet to find food and he was starving he soon walked out of the building to see that the market was filled with food. He knew it was wrong but he could not help himself as he swiftly moved aboult with ease as he stole an apple and some bread.
Suddenly he heard someone shout "thief" he thought he had been caught only to turn around ton see it was only two kids and so he wandered on. Not knowing what to do Shinigami suddenly flashed through his mind.
He then decided to head for their home to see if he could become one of them he gave an energenic shout and hurried fowerd. With the hope of becoming a Shinigami and discover who he was.
So what do you think please review and give me some pointers.
As for the pairing that will NaruXharem
don't know who might be in it yet though.