Hey I'm back with my second Harry potter fan fiction story.
Please review my target is to get more than 5 reviews.
Disclaimer: j.k Rowling owns the characters.
Some of the characters may be ooc sorry.
Anything in 'is thinking and any thing" is talking.
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"Arggggggghhhh!" screamed a 15 year old Hermione running out of her common room tears streaming down her face. 'Stupid boys they all stick together when they get into fights even when they know there wrong. Its not my fault I think cho's a bitch they wouldn't even let me explain why I thought she was a bitch. It's all her fault they don't like me anymore. It's all her fault I lost my best friends' Hermione was running as fast as she could she didn't know where she was going and she didn't care.
"Oof what the" she herd a strangely familiar voice shout as she was sent flying backwards to the ground.
"Oh it's you granger" said malfoy standing back and watching her struggle to her feet "I don't know why you are bothering to get up the ground is where you belong with all the dirt"
Usually she didn't let him get to her but now she couldn't help she jut stood there and let a fresh batch of tears fall down her red puffy cheeks.
"What no witty come back not even a lame insult?" asked Draco confused 'whats wrong with her she is usually so stubborn at letting me get to her I wonder why she is crying?' "What's up why are you upset" 'why the hell did I say that I hate her....don't I?'
"Why do you care no one else does" she snapped confused 'why is he being nice to me he hates me...doesn't he?'
"Hey I was just trying to be nice for once and you bit my head off if you don't want to talk then I will go away" he shouted back at her. 'Hey she looks kind of nice when she is crying. I never realised how beautiful she is when you get past that stuck up smart attitude'
"I'm sorry I didn't mean to snap at you I don't like you but you didn't do anything to me except that dirt insult" she said as they started to walk side by side. 'I wonder why he is being nice to me. Oh well I need someone to talk to even if it is him'
"So what's wrong then it's not very often you see a girl like you crying" he said as they sat on the steps outside the school 'what is wrong with me why am I consoling her she's a mudblood'
"Well earlier I ran into cho you know her don't you? She went to that ball with cedric diggory."
"Yeah I know her she is so stuck up and full of her self" 'plus potter fancies her so she that makes her bad in my books'
"Yeah she is. Well yesterday I dumped into her and said sorry and she went crazy. Saying things like just because Harry fancies her and not me that I am jealous and I am going round bumping into her trying to kill her. Then she really got me she pointed out the obvious to the whole corridor." 'Why am I spilling my guts to him?'
"What did she say" he asked her.
"She said you're jealous because you're too ugly to get a boyfriend"
"Well she is obviously mad because your not to ugly to get a boyfriend at all you are actually quite pretty. Oh but don't tell anyone I said that to you" 'why would anyone say that to her she is drop dead gorgeous with those deep melted chocolate eyes and her perfect figure and brown, blond streaked, long, curly hair..hey wait WHAT AM I SAYING'
Hermione smiled and her eyes lit up. 'Wow he may be a scum bag but he sure knows what to say to make me feel better' "thanks that means a lot to me coming from you"
"So is why you where crying" 'surely that wouldn't make her cry now if it happened earlier'
"Well no. I told Harry I thought she was a bitch and he kicked off at me as well and when I told Ron to back me up he said he thought I was a bitch and was jealous of her. Can you believe that there meant to be my best friends" Hermione started crying as the memory of what had happened came flooding back. 'How could he say that to me?'
'wow she is really beautiful' draco reached out a hand and wiped away her tears then without thinking he lent forward and kissed her softly on the lips. 'Wow she smells like lilacs"
'Oh my gosh why is he kissing me...he is quite good though ummmmmmmmm he smells like mints.' Hermione wrapped her arm around his neck and passionately kissed him back.
As they pulled apart Hermione looked deeply into his eyes and for the first time she saw his soul and it was beautiful. His eyes weren't stony grey/blue anymore they where a soft swirl of baby blue and bark blue with a soft grey out line.
"You are beautiful and don't let anyone tell you differently. You are the most beautiful thing on this earth and she is a troll" 'I don't know what made me console her but I am glad I did'
"Thank you you're the first person to ever tell me that" she said resting her head on his chest. 'I can't believe I kissed HIM and I liked it'
"Tell Harry what she said to you and I am sure he will understand" 'I hate him but she is amazing'
"Thank you draco you have really helped me" 'wow he has a really hard chest'
"Hermione" 'I love you' 'Damn I wish I could say it out loud!'
"Yes" 'I love you and always have' lf only I could say it out loud'
"Will you go out with me like be my girlfriend" 'please say yes please say yes'
"Yes" 'YES YES YES YES YES YES!!! OH YES!!'
Hermione wrapped both her arms around his neck and kissed him passionately.
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So how did you like it I thought it was much better than my others.
Please review I take criticism surprisingly easily.
I might write another chapter if more than five people want me to (I don't want to waist my time is no ones reading)
Beckie :)
Please review my target is to get more than 5 reviews.
Disclaimer: j.k Rowling owns the characters.
Some of the characters may be ooc sorry.
Anything in 'is thinking and any thing" is talking.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Arggggggghhhh!" screamed a 15 year old Hermione running out of her common room tears streaming down her face. 'Stupid boys they all stick together when they get into fights even when they know there wrong. Its not my fault I think cho's a bitch they wouldn't even let me explain why I thought she was a bitch. It's all her fault they don't like me anymore. It's all her fault I lost my best friends' Hermione was running as fast as she could she didn't know where she was going and she didn't care.
"Oof what the" she herd a strangely familiar voice shout as she was sent flying backwards to the ground.
"Oh it's you granger" said malfoy standing back and watching her struggle to her feet "I don't know why you are bothering to get up the ground is where you belong with all the dirt"
Usually she didn't let him get to her but now she couldn't help she jut stood there and let a fresh batch of tears fall down her red puffy cheeks.
"What no witty come back not even a lame insult?" asked Draco confused 'whats wrong with her she is usually so stubborn at letting me get to her I wonder why she is crying?' "What's up why are you upset" 'why the hell did I say that I hate her....don't I?'
"Why do you care no one else does" she snapped confused 'why is he being nice to me he hates me...doesn't he?'
"Hey I was just trying to be nice for once and you bit my head off if you don't want to talk then I will go away" he shouted back at her. 'Hey she looks kind of nice when she is crying. I never realised how beautiful she is when you get past that stuck up smart attitude'
"I'm sorry I didn't mean to snap at you I don't like you but you didn't do anything to me except that dirt insult" she said as they started to walk side by side. 'I wonder why he is being nice to me. Oh well I need someone to talk to even if it is him'
"So what's wrong then it's not very often you see a girl like you crying" he said as they sat on the steps outside the school 'what is wrong with me why am I consoling her she's a mudblood'
"Well earlier I ran into cho you know her don't you? She went to that ball with cedric diggory."
"Yeah I know her she is so stuck up and full of her self" 'plus potter fancies her so she that makes her bad in my books'
"Yeah she is. Well yesterday I dumped into her and said sorry and she went crazy. Saying things like just because Harry fancies her and not me that I am jealous and I am going round bumping into her trying to kill her. Then she really got me she pointed out the obvious to the whole corridor." 'Why am I spilling my guts to him?'
"What did she say" he asked her.
"She said you're jealous because you're too ugly to get a boyfriend"
"Well she is obviously mad because your not to ugly to get a boyfriend at all you are actually quite pretty. Oh but don't tell anyone I said that to you" 'why would anyone say that to her she is drop dead gorgeous with those deep melted chocolate eyes and her perfect figure and brown, blond streaked, long, curly hair..hey wait WHAT AM I SAYING'
Hermione smiled and her eyes lit up. 'Wow he may be a scum bag but he sure knows what to say to make me feel better' "thanks that means a lot to me coming from you"
"So is why you where crying" 'surely that wouldn't make her cry now if it happened earlier'
"Well no. I told Harry I thought she was a bitch and he kicked off at me as well and when I told Ron to back me up he said he thought I was a bitch and was jealous of her. Can you believe that there meant to be my best friends" Hermione started crying as the memory of what had happened came flooding back. 'How could he say that to me?'
'wow she is really beautiful' draco reached out a hand and wiped away her tears then without thinking he lent forward and kissed her softly on the lips. 'Wow she smells like lilacs"
'Oh my gosh why is he kissing me...he is quite good though ummmmmmmmm he smells like mints.' Hermione wrapped her arm around his neck and passionately kissed him back.
As they pulled apart Hermione looked deeply into his eyes and for the first time she saw his soul and it was beautiful. His eyes weren't stony grey/blue anymore they where a soft swirl of baby blue and bark blue with a soft grey out line.
"You are beautiful and don't let anyone tell you differently. You are the most beautiful thing on this earth and she is a troll" 'I don't know what made me console her but I am glad I did'
"Thank you you're the first person to ever tell me that" she said resting her head on his chest. 'I can't believe I kissed HIM and I liked it'
"Tell Harry what she said to you and I am sure he will understand" 'I hate him but she is amazing'
"Thank you draco you have really helped me" 'wow he has a really hard chest'
"Hermione" 'I love you' 'Damn I wish I could say it out loud!'
"Yes" 'I love you and always have' lf only I could say it out loud'
"Will you go out with me like be my girlfriend" 'please say yes please say yes'
"Yes" 'YES YES YES YES YES YES!!! OH YES!!'
Hermione wrapped both her arms around his neck and kissed him passionately.
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So how did you like it I thought it was much better than my others.
Please review I take criticism surprisingly easily.
I might write another chapter if more than five people want me to (I don't want to waist my time is no ones reading)
Beckie :)