A/N-I adapted this from Divergdragon2415. The first 2 chapters are her's but the rest are mine.
Andrew's POV
Finally, after 1 year I get to see my little girl again. Natalie and I are waiting in the Erudite compound for Caleb. We were all going to give her a surprise visit for her birthday. I can't wait to see her.
When Caleb got here he said he rented a car for us. We all got in I drove us to Dauntless. I still don't know what was going through her head when she chose Dauntless. Can't say that I like it but I respect her for making her own choice. The drive was mostly silence besides the Dauntless facts that Caleb was telling us. Yep, he is Erudite.
When we got to Dauntless we were greeted one if their leaders. I believe his name was Eric. He showed us where we would be staying for the night. He then told us that we could probably find Beatris in the pit, her apartment, or the training area. He also gave us a map and left. We decided to try the training area first since it was closest.
I guess we got lucky since when we went into the training area we spotted Beatris punching a big red bag. We walked over to her but before we got to her some guy got her attention. He was tall and looked pretty strong and slightly older than her. As soon as she turned over to him he put his hands around her waist and kissed her. Kissed her...no one touches my little girl...that guy is dead.
Tris's POV (right before Andrew got there)
I was practicing some of my punches on the bag like I did when I was an initiate.
"Good afternoon Tris." I hear Tobias say behind me.
"Good afternoon Four." I say remembering only to use Tibias when were alone. He put his hands on my waists making me blush even though I'm use to it by now. He suddenly kisses me and I kiss back.
I hear a slight 'oh, hell no!' in the background but take to notice to it.
I suddenly feel Tobias being yanked off me and the sound of a punch. I see my dad standing over Tobias with a fist.
"Oh, shit."
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