Inspired by KURO SHIMO and it also includes 7 of his OCs! (plus my 2) CGI!
I don't own Kuro Shimo's OC's or the elven language used in this story! (all the rights for the language goes to Christopher Paolini!) I'd like to say I own everything else in this story but still the concept about Talking chipmunks is not mine, you know whose it is (I'm not saying it because I always spell it wrong...)
BTW, I've got to tell you now so you won't be needing to read it again in later chapters: Everyone knows school gets harder by each year and that has happened to me too (well, still getting A's (10's) and B's (9's), but it takes a lot more work + my hobby takes a bit more time now since I'm playing in 2 different teams, my own and an adult team, yeah, I'm so good!) so I'm not sure if I'll be able to update this too often so don't wonder if my updates take a little long. I'll try my best but... you know... READ ON!
Freezing fire (prologue: RUN!)
"Run Dylan, it's right after us!" a female shouted, stumbling over some roots on her way.
"I can't leave my chakrams!" The one called Dylan shouted back at the female, grabbing her paw to prevent her from falling.
"Yes you can, they just reform to your hands afterwards, just run now!" she said releasing the grip of his paw
"Maybe I can slow it down! THRYSTA WINDR!" Dylan shouted and a ball of air left his paw cutting down a mid-sized tree behind them, but it was soon smashed to pieces by a mysterious, dark force.
"So much for your great plan!"
"Thanks a lot Whitney, really encouraging!"
"Of course, but now, we should run!" she screamed when a ball of dark flames hit the gound next to them and a strange hammer appeared in Dylan's right paw "I'm so going to crush that thing, it almost burnt my tail off!"
"But you can't do that with Xardion!, you can olny defeat that with your chakrams!" Whitney shouted as they kept running through the thick forest. "Yeah, and that's why I wanted to go get them! It takes hours before they reform back to me!" Dylan replied and the hammer then disappeared from his paw again.
"Oh just shut up and run!, We've got to make it out of this forest before it reaches us! It can't stand the sunlight!
"But can it stand the light of fire! BRISINGR!" Dylan shouted and the ground behind them burst in blue flames radiating a gloomy blue light, which didn't seem to stop or even slow down the beast at all.
"Dylan! You're only going to waste your energy by using spells which won't work!"
"Who knows if they work!"
"I do! Look! There's the end of the forest! Hurry!"
"No need to tell twice!" Dylan replied, but the beast was quickly gaining on them
"We're not going to make it! quickly, AUDR!" Whitney yelled and they were thrown in to the air by an invisible force. They landed with a thud but yet quite smoothly, beyond the forest's boundaries.
"Who said anything about using spells?" Dylan asked raising his other eyebrow
"Well, at least my spell worked... although it almost consumed all my energy, but at least we're safe now." Whitney replied but then a huge roar was heard behind them, and the beast rammed it's way through the edge of the forest, heading straight at them.
Now they could see the full potential of the beast's looks. It was at least 20 times taller than them and completely covered in shadows which were deeper black than the center of the black hole and it hurt even if you looked at it straight. It had red, evil eyes, which only rarely could be seen through the cloak of shadows around it's massive body. The eyes were actually even worse than the blackness of it's shadowy cloak. They radiated pure evil and anyone who stared at it's eyes directly, would fall in coma just for the sight of it. But the eyes weren't the worst or even the most dangerous part of it. It had 5 humongous claws in each long, rotten arm and yeah... there were 4 of them, plus also a massive pair of wings on his back made it look your worst nightmare. You couldn't see any more features through the shadows, but you didn't need to because usually if you crossed paths with it... you died.
"The beast wasn't supposed to be able to pass the forest's boundaries!"
"It seems that this isn't the beast the legends tell about!" Dylan said and pulled Xardion from the nearest shadows "Then it must be able to resist sunlight too!"
"Dylan, you know we can't fight it. Not without your chakrams"
"I know, but we need more time! We need HELP!"
"You're right" Whitney said and pulled a megaphone- type of horn from her belt and blew in to it
(!)
Nearby
"Ren! You got us lost!" A female chipmunk with dark honey colored fur and silver v-neck shirt and a black jean skirt shouted
"Sheesh, Dee, I didn't get us lost! You told me to turn right from that rock!" Shouted a male chipmunk called Ren. He had a milk chocolate coloured fur and he was wearing a silver jacket with a huge white R on the back, around his 10 inch body.
"Oh come on! We all know you're in love, but please save your fighting for when we get back to camp!" Another, a slightly taller male chipmunk interrupted. His fur was slightly lighter than Ren's, but he was wearing a half white, half black jacket and the same colored glasses on his nose.
"Oh, not you too Turac! You know well we aren't in love!" Ren shouted as a reply and shot a glare at the male called Turac.
"Will you guys stop it already! We'll never going to make it to the camp if you just keep fighting!" A female chipmunk joined the argument. She had the same colored fur than Dee, but she was wearing a Brick red shirt and blue jean shorts.
"Amy's right, will you guys stop fighting already! We're going to get even more lost if you keep going like that!" The third female chipmunk with the almost same colored, but lighter fur than the other females exclaimed and everybody turned to her
"It was your idea on the first place Gwen!"
"Come on! It's not my fault we got lost!" the female called Gwen replied and blushed madly. She was wearing a mid torso length grass-green shirt and a light green skirt so the blush didn't quite fit for her clothing in colors.
"But it was still your idea to go on this stupid trip to find berries and mushrooms!" everybody shouted again "Dee could have just clasped her hands and we would have gotten tons of them!"
"Gimme mercy guys! Please Xyrza, help me here!" Gwen begged the third male called Xyrza who was slightly chubbier than the other males and whose fur was slightly darker than his brother's. He was also wearing a sky-blue jacket with a dark blue X in the front.
"Don't pull me in this Gwen" Xyrza said waving his paws in front of him for defense
"Come on! Think, what would Rayne do right now?" Gwen said
"He'd kick your butt for such a stupid idea!" Ren said, but they were interrupted by a strange sound, which sounded something like someone blew in a horn
(!)
"What was that?" Turac asked looking up for where the voice had come from
"I don't know, but that kind of sound only comes from horns which are used in war, so somebody must be in trouble!" Amy said
"Well go help who ever they are!" Xyrza said looking at Ren
"Yeah!"
"Wait! You can't go! Rayne needs to find out first!" Turac said stopping his eager brothers
"Awww, Turac, don't always ruin everything! I'ts been a quite while since our last good battle and I WANNA, WANNA, WANNA GO!" Ren said excitedly
"No, you can't! Rayne needs to know!"
"Come on! I know you want to fight!"
"Well, I do but..."
"Then come on!" Xyrza shouted and dashed away towards the source of the sound and everybody followed him in the thrill of upcoming fight.
"Come back!" Turac shouted, but he realized he was too late, Ren had already talked everyone in fighting with him, so it was no use. "Man I hate being the oldest..." he thought and started jogging after them "Maybe this could be a nice exercise after all. Rayne always tells us to train, so why not now"
At the same time, everyone else were already pretty close to the place the voice had come from
"Look! Up there!" Dee shouted and pointed up on a cliff
"I can't see anyone!" Xyrza shouted looking at where Dee had pointed
"No you can't, but you can see that!" Amy screamed as a huge beast rose up in the air over the cliff holding a ball of dark fire in it's... 4 hands...
"Holy mother! What is that thing!" Ren shouted
"I don't know, but it surely is big!" Gwen screamed as the beast threw the balls of fire on the cliff and they could see a glimpse of two small creatures jumping out of the way
"And it looks like it's attacking something... or someone! Guys, let's go help them!"
Dylan and Whitney
"No one's coming! We're going to die here!" Whitney screamed as she dodged another ball of black flames.
"No! We're not going to die!" Dylan shouted as he absorbed some flames in Xardion and threw them back at the beast with no effect. "Damn! It's no use attacking shadows with anything like fire or... well shadows!"
"I told you!" Whitney screamed, but then a roar of thunder was heard and the beast was suddenly pierced by a bright blue lightning, but the lightning... It came below...
A/N: translations: Thrysta windr: Thrust air/ Brisingr: Fire/ Audr: Up
Wohoo! this was a VERY short prologue for this story, but I guess It's cool, REVIEW!
And oh, KURO, tell me what you think!
P.S. do you think I should write a Simonette story on the side? I have a brill basic idea for that one and.. I'm sure it will be a hit (well, who will ever know that for sure?)
P.P.S. I'm only continuing this fast if I get enough reviews so no pressure. well... I'll continue it anyway but not necessarily so fast.