Chapter 3
Yeah I waited a bit to go on, (high school sucks, don't let your parents tell you otherwise) also I have other internet stuff I work on (youtube, deviant art, my blog) so I got sidetracked so lets get a rolling
Creative comment chats
To mr. or mrs. Criticizer: Don't take things too seriously its just a story and I am sorry it is all in separate chapters I don't know how to not do that, although I must say you must enjoy this to keep reviewing
To my pal, palbert ( uh I mean n.d.) your story is great I hope you the same of mine
The woodsman led the new miracle back to his cottage nestled deep in the forest.
"What is your name?" asked Johnny the hunter (that was his name)
"I actually don't think I have one"
"well we are going to have to fix that"
Suddenly the man stopped "oh no, I have been careless we have wandered into the part of the forest where the rare dawnicus rex lives."
"W-w-w-whats that?"
"A vicious beast. They travel in herds of up to 50 and have the sharpest teeth of any land predator."
Just then the bushes started rustling (you know cause that always happens after the threat is talked about)
Then the creature jumped out.
"That is a horrible beast?" asked the child. You would probably say the same thing it looked like a hamster.
"yes and be quiet they hate loud noises" said john
However the boy could not resist and he started to get closer.
Just then the creature bared its fangs and made several frantic squeaks.
Then the bushes erupted as 99 more of the creatures jumped out, and began circling the man and child.
"I told you, now we will die and I will never see my wife or house again" john moaned
"shh" said the child "I am concentrating"
The woodsman stared at the odd child he had met and was wondering why he was not screaming in terror like most 5 year olds would.
Then all of a sudden the d rexes stopped circling them and ran off into the underbrush.
"Wth just happened?" screamed the hunter (yes he said wth, but all he did was say the letters names)
"I could tell that this "murderous" creature was just checking to make sure we were not frets, obviously when people run into these they panic and run causing the pack to attack"
"How did you know this asked the woodsman?"
"I think I was just born with it" answered the lad
"wow" john said "we must get you to my house to talk about this, and besides you are naked."
"I was wondering why your skin looked different" the boy said
John was about to laugh when he saw the boy's serious face. He had NOT made a joke.