Ok, so I'll be updating my other stories really soon but I couldn't wait to start this one.

So anyway, this story is going to be part of a series I'm writing.

Well enough, here's the story. Enjoy!


"Alvin, why the hell do you always do this!"

"I haven't done anything Britt. I wish you would just drop it!"

"I'm not going to forget this, or drop this or anything this! We are going to talk about this, NOW!" She screamed back.

"Brittany, there is nothing to talk about!"

"Oh, so now our six month anniversary is 'nothing to talk about'?" She said angrily.

Alvin, Brittany and their siblings were all walking down the street and people from all directions were looking at them. Oh great, Eleanor thought with a sigh. Their making us the center of attention.

"I can't believe their fighting like this," Jeanette said as the couple continued fighting. "We just got out of school yesterday and they insist on ruining today for us."

Simon sighed and shook his head. "You know Alvin and Brittany. Nothing will stop them from fighting with each other one way or another."

Eleanor had really hoped it would. After a tough time with exams and finals she really hoped to start relaxing. They had even planned this day where they all took time off their part time jobs to celebrate being out of school. But of course, Brittany and Alvin's anniversary was coming up and Brittany wanted to do something special and romantic and Alvin wasn't all that up for it so of course they had to start fighting over it.

They kept on walking while Brittany and Alvin vented angrily behind them. Eleanor was a little ahead of everyone else and stopped by the crossing lane next to the pole and it said stop. She watched the cars go by and heard Alvin let out an angry groan.

"Brittany, I don't know why you're so hung up over this!"

"Uh… Duh Alvin! It's our six month anniversary and all I wanted to do was something special and all you do is want to shrug it off as if it's just a Saturday!"

Eleanor leaned her head against the pole and sighed heavily as they went on. Theodore gave her a sympathetic look. "You okay?"

"Yeah Theo I'm fine, just really annoyed at the moment." Just then she felt her cellphone start to vibrate in her jean skirt pocket. She fished for her phone and pulled it out and saw it was a text.

To: Eleanor

From: Miles

Yo Ellie, Wat up.

Miles was one of Eleanor's really close friends. If you didn't know her then you would think she's a boy but she's not. Her real name was Mylene but hated to be called that. She was also a real tomboy and completely into sports which is how they both met. Eleanor thought the best thing about Miles was how she was never afraid of anything. She had always told Eleanor it was because her brothers constantly tried to scare her when she was little so she had to toughen up.

Eleanor texted back.

To: Miles

From: Eleanor

Standing on Division Street, listening to Britt chew Al's head off.

To: Eleanor

From: Miles

LOL, glad I'm not there for once. Still on for Daisy's Dinner tonight?

Daisy's Dinner was where Eleanor and Theodore both worked. Daisy was the owner and the dinner was attached to an old unused building but the place was perfect for a small restraunt and Daisy was real nice. She let them have friends over right after they closed as long as they don't make a mess or break anything and gave them time off when they needed it even though Eleanor just about never missed work.

She was actually kind of embarrassed that she had totally forgotten that she had promised to meet there with Miles and mentally slapped herself for it.

To: Miles

From: Eleanor

Yeah, if I don't die of annoyance first.

To: Eleanor

From: Miles

Awesome! Good luck, bye

Eleanor closed her phone and put it back in her pocket. She looked up and more people had gathered around and were listening to the two fighting chipmunks next to them.

"Brittany I'm done talking about this" Alvin said and turned away in the other direction.

"Fine Alvin, I'm done too. I really hope you die!" She screamed those final words and started walking toward the crosswalk.

Eleanor looked over and to her surprise, for only a second, she saw what seemed to be a man in a black cloak. What is he crazy! It has to be 90 something degrees out here!

She blinked and he disappeared and that's when everything started to go in slow motion. Eleanor looked up and saw that the light had turned green and said go but no one had really paid attention to it or the road. Other people were still staring at the scene in bewilderment.

Then she saw Brittany stalk off into the road. She was so angry Eleanor could practically feel the hate emitting from her sister and she stepped off the sidewalk.

The slow motion got worst and then there was a pain in Eleanor's head. Then the worst happened.

She wasn't sure if she heard the car first or it was intuition but she looked to her right and saw a black car speeding down the road. It was going so fast it didn't seem it would stop. Eleanor knew right away that it wasn't going to stop.

It won't stop. It's gonna hit her!

Hit her…

Hit Brittany!

Those were the only words ringing in her head. She was filled with panic and couldn't believe no one had noticed.

She wasn't sure what to do. There was a ringing in her head was getting louder and she knew she had to do something. The slow motion was still going but it wouldn't slow down for the car. Not in time for Brittany to notice it.

Without even thinking, Eleanor shot out in to the road and heard voices and shouts from behind her. But she didn't care. She had to save Brittany!

Brittany must have noticed the shouts to because she turned her head and saw the car speeding toward her. But she didn't move. She was caught like a deer in the headlights of a car as it sped towards her.

Then just as it came Eleanor did the only thing she could think of and reached out and gave Brittany a hard shove.

But there was nothing she could do for herself. She knew what was coming and it did. But surprisingly it didn't hurt. The car hit her with a hard but quick force and she felt it but wasn't in any pain.

Before she knew it she was on the ground. Her vision was blurred and the ringing, the voices, the panic and what had just happened slowly slipped from her mind.

Then everything went completely dark…


So anyway hoped you liked it.

Note: My internet has been acting like a real bitch and it won't work all the time so sorry for any delays in updates.

Please tell me if you like it, love it, or hate it . R&R