Hi, firstly I'd like to say that this is my first ever fanfic so please be gentle, although any constructive criticism would be very much welcomed.
I started writing this months ago mainly just for my own fun, but soon realised that I'd quite like to see how it was received 'out there'! Therefore, the timeline doesn't exactly fit with the series (e.g. the whole Foyet thing and consequences thereof, doesn't figure at all), plus I've taken a few liberties with small things, like Jack's age (he appears later on but I've made him a couple of years older for my purposes).
The story is essentially set in three parts and I'm undecided whether to publish them all as one long stream or to divide them but probably won't have to make that decision just yet.
Also, you will have to forgive any confusion over colloquialisms. Being English, but a huge fan of a lot of American TV, etc., I hope that my meaning isn't clouded by differences in language too much.
Anyway, without further ado, I hope you enjoy this and please review!