I never watch the programme anymore, but I had an urge to write. I suppose it's better, cause I know the surroundings of the Fanfic place, but I just felt like writing, cause it's just a snap thing that may never amount to much. It's basically the flip of my other story, in which Keely is in a coma, this is basically what was going on in Keely's mind whilst she was there, inspired by the amount of things I've watched about coma stories and mixed them up
Enjoy :)
She hadn't seen the car, nor had she heard it. Through the loud rabble of meaningless arguments, she hadn't heard the roar of the engine, and her fixation on his face, making sure he understood her rage, he hadn't seen the lights. And then it was too late. And just when she thought she'd felt impact, thought she would have to savour her last moment of peace in life before her body was smashed internally, before she felt nothing but excruciating pain as he body would shatter to the cold concrete beneath her and break so fragilely, as if she'd dropped a mug from her kitchen cabinet.
She expected it, but it didn't happen. She winced her eyes in fear, in expectation, and waited, the last second prolonged, so she could savour the air she may never feel again, cold on her skin, sharp in her throat. And then it came, she was half impatient, half scared out of her wits, she felt someone push her from behind and before she had time to reacted, there car was a breaths distance from her.
And then there was nothing.
No pain.
No impact.
Just lights upon lights of different colours, like she was falling into a rainbow.
She wasn't on a bonnet of a car
Or splayed out across the road
She was somewhere else entirely
Rather short and brief introduction, I may not make this a thing that I feel I must update 24/7, but I'll do my best, I'll hopefully make the other ones much longer, and you may feel some drenches of familiar shows or films about coma patients as you read. Man, I'm really dragging this on :) review if you like, so I know where I'm going and how many supporters I've got or whatever
Cheers :)
